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Hello, everyone! As promised, the first demo of the Book 2's rewritten version. Almost all of it is written from the ground up, so if you'd like to experience the content blind, feel free to skip to the end of this post for a link to the demo.

As mentioned previously, this demo contains roughly 30k words of content, and takes the story back to when the mage wakes up in Thulrum after having been resurrected by Tahlia. One of the primary goals of the rewrite is to have the beginning of Book 2 be deliberately slower in pace, given that a series of climactic events happened all the way to the end of Book 1. As such, the contents of this demo is designed to have a relatively laid-back and contemplative atmosphere, ending just shy of the first point of action in the rewrite.

As with the pre-rewrite version, this demo introduces the mage to Tahlia and gives a bit of insight to the priestess's overarching motivations. F and Yu, on the other hand, will appear in the next update, and this one instead focuses on the city of Thulrum proper and its various residents.

Click here to play Demo ver 1.0!

It's my first time getting things set up on dashingdon again after a long time, so please let me know if you encounter any errors, and I'll be sure to patch it as soon as possible.

I hope you enjoy this rewritten version of AMR, and as always, thank you for supporting the development of A Mage Reborn!

Comments

Silas

EVERYONE CHEERED

🦋

So happy you’re back Adam!!

PUYOPUYO

we’re back baby…. (CROWD CHEERS LOUDLY)

buwakuda

YESSSSS OH MY GOD thank you for this so so much

Supervictory

i'm so happy to see you're back! thanks so much!!

Galrun

*And there was much rejoicing*

Clueless

I love you, Rifky. I was starting to think that this world just lost another talented writer and the world had become poorer. I cannot express in words how happy I am that you returned.

Teky

I can't believe this. I was pretty much in peace with the fact we won't get any more of this story. Thank you so much for your hard work and I can't wait to try this out.

L. Gonzales

This is awesome! Can't wait to try it out.

megukiru

Ahh welcome back!!!

alllonha

The king is back👑

Lubna

Welcome back!!!! :D

mayga

welcome back

Ward

Hey, hope the break helped. I absolutely love your writing and no matter what, I think I'll enjoy what story you want to tell. Stay awesome!

rez

i really enjoyed how this version fleshes out thulrum and its residents more! i hope you're doing alright despite the heat, stay hydrated and welcome back :) <3

L. Gonzales

Really liked the start! The new characters and details of the place are really nice. Am glad to get to see more of this again.

Lihn Gargoyle

Welcome back!!! Glad to see your’e okay! I really enjoyed the new demo!!!

Frieza (Miha B)

Welcome back! I hope Tahlia resonates more with people now even though I loved her from the start even in the previous demo

S B

YAYYY!! I am so excited to read. I'm glad you took the time you needed, and I'm thankful you decided to continue this project. A Mage Reborn continues to live on in my brain and we're all glad you're here. :)

Stephanie Beth

Thank you for being amazing. Always have been, always will be. So glad to see you back!