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TW FOR: knife, insults, army related stuff 

enjoy this little snippet of inspiration I had! i kinda love it, maybe I'll do a toned down version for the main channel <3 

also I don't know shit about the army so this is 100% inaccurate plz don't come for me hahahha

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Ben

I'm telling gunny😂

Nathesium

Sergeant DD is gonna order a Code Red on us 😱

Jare

Hi DarkerDreams! I think you did amazing, even if you claim to know nothing about the army. It's too little yelling :D But this is a great ASMRfied version. I think you captured the energy really well. I'd have a few nitpicky things to bring up to get this closer to perfection. I think we lack the use of PRIVATE! Atleast I think that is the correct English term to use here for the lowest rank. You could pick antoher rank, but private is a great one to bring back some trauma! :D It's very common for a superior to use the rank in basic training because it reminds you constantly of your place. It's "Stand up private" ➡️ "Yes sir/mam/sergeant". And now we are in the loop of who is the boss. This can also be used as a potential tool in these videos. We can start with the formal private and then when we are on our knees. It could turn to a discusted or degrading tone. And when things start heating up the word private could be left out, which directly messages that we are being approved as a human. Hence you don't generally use the rank around people you know. A nice flow of formal/put into our place ➡️ made fun of for being a low rank ➡️ approval. Maybe experiment with it! The next nitpicky thing I would point out would be ordering. In the army it's not simple instructions, it's idiot proof instructions. And questions. It's not "If I'm not mistaken. You are under my command". It's "Who is your commander private? That's right. Me. And what do you do when I give you a command private? That's right. You fucking execute!" I want to clarify that I don't think the video was bad at all! I think you nailed most of it. These were just some of the things that that I picked up from the beginning. After telling us to get on our knees and stepping more into the fantasy. I was totally sold! Also the beginning phrases were correct or close enough where I didn't feel any immersion breaking. Nothing is scarier than a calm drill sergeant when you know you've fucked up after all! And the swearing was on point. I'd also like to point out that the army experience is different for everyone and differs from country to country. I can only speak from my experience and try to translate it to English if that makes sense. I just thought I could have good input on this. Maybe the feedback is useful for you to improve this style, if you choose to do so. For this performance alone I would give a solid 8/10 regardless, so PLEASE. Let us have more! :)

David Krisher

Wasn't sure what to expect when I listened but that was amazing! Trust in sarge DD!

SirDapperDum

How to get fragged by your junior enlisted in less than 5 minutes

Tessa

this made me go from being bratty to submissive real quick 🧎🏼‍♀️

Jackson

I'm a Lieut, but who cares let's pretend :) suspension of disbelief...

Solaris

YES MA'AM! o7

Laszlow

Not that it's happened to me but this is mostly possible. Language is on point. Only part that'd play out differently in reality is that if anyone caught wind of this, the sergeant here would be the one in huge trouble.

Anonymous

Yo as a Soldier...this was something else 🫡....like the things me and and my battle buddies would say in the latrine...