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The edited version of Magic, Academies & Vampires, with additional chapters and a new ending. (Patreon)

Published:
2024-11-14 19:02:14
Edited:
2024-11-14 19:05:45
Imported:
2026-06

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Let me begin by saying sorry. I'm sorry for my absence and the lack of content. Editing the book and rewriting the ending so it wasn't so rushed took far longer than I originally thought it would. I kept thinking I'd have it done by the end of the week, only for it not to be done. I had to completely rewrite the ending five times in order for me to be happy with it, so I hope everyone likes it.The novel is going out to my beta readers right now, so unless they find something glaringly wrong that was somehow missed, the book is done. The version that will go up on amazon should be on here in a few weeks.The new version can be downloaded via the link or attachment.Once again, sorry for the massive delays.

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Magic, Academies & Vampires Final Version.docx

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Comments

Bob of Doom

Page 528 paragraph 4: "...it was concerned what Angelica would to us..." Missing the word do

Bob of Doom

533 paragraph 2 "...her husband spar kilij...transformed on his death" The wording makes it appear it transformed on her husband's death, not Dalin.

Bob of Doom

I am torn because I like both endings for different reasons. I like symmetry the first ending had. I also like the closure the second ending had. I understand why the second ending wasn't when Vincent went to sleep, I just wish it did. That way each book is only about when Vincent is awake. Both endings are great and the story is wonderful. I look forward to buying the audiobook of it

Tsantensore

I'm sorry that you had such a rough time finishing this book, but thank you for writing and sharing it with us! Quality beats quantity, so take the time you need. 🙂

Bob of Doom

252 "do wish to get political" Missing the word you

Austin

Page 511 "His strike left him open as i burred" should be blurred. Page 548 "Mother and Father didn't make survive the battle." probably should only have either "make" or "survive". Page 565 "If i see you again, I'm going to kill." - need to add a you to the end of the sentence.

Bigred411

Glad to hear your doing well.

Jana

Anyone else disappointed that the document wasn’t named FinalVersion 3.0FinalFinalFinished. - or something like that? Otherwise I’m just happy for more stuff to read and I’m really looking forward to getting the book - and sometime Audiobook.

William Howe

This is a *hefty* tome. Very nice.

Lachezar

Are there any other major changes besides the ending ?

Andrew Segura

Where was the guy that Davina named Friend? Is he still fighting the dungeon surge?

Aaron A. Cole

Is anyone keeping track of the permanent losses that happened at the end? Off the top of my head, there was: - Dalin - Father - Trent - Shadow* - Vincent’s Mana Core I feel like in missing some other major ones (Angelica is an intentional expulsion, though) and am trying to see if anyone has a list before I do my reread.