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The time has arrived people! Launching V 0.05! 

There is a lot of work in this update, I hope everyone of you to enjoy it :)

Let me know if there is any problem or bug ;)

Update #1: There was a bug in the Coffee Shop, the bug has been fixed and the uploaded files have been updated

Update #2: Bug Fix + Typos Fix + Extended Shower scene

Update #3: Added effects and Typos Fix

PC | Windows | Linux: Dropbox PC | Google Drive PC | Gofile PC 

MAC: Dropbox Mac | Google Drive Mac | Gofile Mac 

Android: Dropbox Android | Google Drive Android | GoFile Android

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Woodpecker_03

Ah yeah!!!!! It is about time to see more of the story!!!

marcialart

Yeah Woody! I hope you enjoy it! 😁

Angelo

waiting two months is a short update without sex

jamie L

yes i agree a little sort and along time to wait for V0.06,

sy2767846

What am I waiting for?Nothing with Jen?I am so disappoint.

Jonathan Heard

there was a jen scene just not what we expected it was in the shower if you go to the gy,

Jonathan Heard

the change in animation was a nice touch a little different i liked the jess scene probably the best scene of the update was definitely hoping for more jenn and john hoping that what that part really does end up in 06

Jonathan Heard

i dont disagree that it could have occurred sooner but as the release could have had nothing at all too. I mean its jen discovering that she likes that activity for sure as its the second time its has happenned once with a male and now a female. I can guess that we kind of surprised by her coffee shop reaction but like john is doing in the game play the long game and desperation and she may do more than we hope for because she is desperate to keep the job.

King22422

I think a lot of people were expecting a sex scene with Jen in this update, rightly so. But look at your Innocense Points, they have to be played down first, until Jen so far. Marcialart has to come up with something so that it doesn't become unrealistic. We all want a realistic game. For me, the lesbian scene came too soon and too readily from Jen. That wasn't quite consistent with the preferences you were just discovering.

Anthony

great visuals as usual. there are some redundancies in scenes and the dialogues can get stale. Mirroring parts of the scenes just feels like you're trying to stretch out the playtime. If I were to suggest how you might trim down the file size for android I would cut out a large chunk of the dialogue in the second coffee shop interview, it was extremely redundant and completely unstimulating.

marcialart

Thanks for your opinion Angelo!, I'll keep track of the feedback to work hard in the points/topics that people want the most in the future

marcialart

Hi WestMidsBlah! I'm sorry to hear that you don't like it and that you don't think it's worth the support. If you are leaving and won't continue supporting, all I can say is thanks for the months that you have been supporting so far. Anyway, if you want to give me more feedback about this version, feel free to DM me here or in Discord.

marcialart

Thanks for your feedback Jonathan! 😀 I've been working to make the animations better and better in each update, I'm glad that you liked it and appreciate it 😀, scenes like Jess, making all those animations and also making it interactive so the player can choose how it's played is incredibly difficult to do, and takes lot of time, it's nice to see people that like that work! Many people are asking for more Jen and John, I've been reading all the feedback/comments, so for sure they are going to be in V 0.06 and they will 'move' ahead 😈

marcialart

Hello King! thanks for the feedback, you are 100% right and got the point about Innocence, I'm trying to make it realistic, but it's difficult to have the right balance, especially because I get mixed feedback most of the time. For example, some people think that the Jen/Cass scene should have become sooner, while others think it came too soon, everyone is different and look for different things, I read each and every feedback to know more about what the majority of players prefer and try to work in that direction. Right now something is very clear, people want a LOOOOT of Jen / John in the future hehe, so there will be a lot more coming and also introducing H scenes with them 😉 Thanks a lot for the feedback King!

marcialart

I'm glad that you like the visuals Anthony! 🙂, that an animations are 2 things that I'm trying to improve in each update and is where the 90% of the time of the developing is used. Thanks a lot also for the suggestion about the size of the dialogues, honestly it was not about extending / stretching out the gameplay, but I take that as a constructive criticism and will take in consideration in the future so that kind of scenes get a little shorter, thanks 😉

marcialart

Hello Jamie! I'll work hard on V 0.06 to have it as soon as possible 😉

kudos123

enjoyed the update maybe i was thinking we would get a generic message non sexy just as a repeat chance, overall i liked what was in this a slow burn and not to urealistk. As some games just go stupid with their MC chars

marcialart

Thanks a lot for you feedback Kudos! 😉 I'm trying to have that balance and is not so easy to achieve hehe. I'm glad that you enjoyed the update 🙂

luis lao

this update lots of crashes and unexpected errors

AK

I like the update the pacing of the lose of innocence makes sense. Its not low enough for sex yet. I had no crashes. I thought the scene with the old man and the fake women was hilarious. Can’t wait for more.

marcialart

Hello Luis! Please let me know where are the crashes and unexpected erors so I can work on them and make a fix

marcialart

Hey Aaron! I'm glad that you like the pacing and the update! Yeah, that was a special scene 🙂 hehe, a member of this community help me with it 😉

jamie L

Hey man! I know you work hard on this and I love the content and story lines just seemed I little sort this time round 🤣 and yes I’ll be here waiting for V0.06, and good luck with your move👍🏻

Greggp1989

I might be the odd one out here, but I really enjoyed it. The story line is building up very nicely, and Jen is being put in a situation where she has difficulty decisions to make regarding her innocence. If she just went out and fucked everybody in sight for no reason then the game would just be boring...

marcialart

Thanks a lot Greggp! I'm glad that you enjoy it, that's exactly what I'm aiming, a buildup to make it realistic. And you are not the odd one hehe, so far I've more positive feedback than negative, but I like to read both sides (good and bad) so I can keep making the game better and better. 😀

Greggp1989

You're doing a great job. The visuals were fantastic in this latest update and I love how manipulative dirty old John is. I can't wait to see who Jen's first customer is. Maybe the hotel manager? Or maybe he might see jess enjoying herself lol 😆 so many possibilities!

Angelo

I think that the just time is an upload every month...not every 2 month!!!

Angelo

I'm also waiting two month for every update!!!

marcialart

That dirty old John... who said that an old dog can't learn new tricks? 🤣 he's putting our lovely Jen in a 'hard' situtation. 😮 Yes the possibilities are endless hehe!

marcialart

Hi Angelo, I'm only one person developing the game, to be honest it's impossible to do it in less time, unless... I make the updates a lot shorter or get rid of the animations in the game. If that is too much time to wait for you I would advice you to unsubscribe and only join the months in which I launch and update in case you like the game. 🙂

marcialart

Ok, thanks for the feedback Jamie and the good wishes for the move :)

marcialart

Hi Angelo, I'm only one person developing the game, to be honest it's impossible to do it in less time, unless... I make the updates a lot shorter or get rid of the animations in the game. If that is too much time to wait for you I would advice you to unsubscribe and only join the months in which I launch and update in case you like the game.

Angelo

I like the game,it's a great story and i wish to pay a subscription waiting an upload every month.i'm sure that everybody wish an upload every month...starting from federick.you will try about...?

marcialart

I would love to be able to do that Angelo, I love working with Jen and the girls hehe, but being only one person making the images / animations / coding it's almost impossible, unless I cut a lot of content in each update. I always prefer to be honest with everyone that trust in me and in this game, I could say 'yes' and you will be happy but I'll be lying because I know I would not be able to do all the work in one month. But I can tell you that I'm working in ways to be more organized to see if the release times can be shorter 🙂

Jonas

New subscriber here. This part was disappointing because it ended w/o any sexual content from the main character. I think audiences expect parts further down the line to contain something more spicy than previous parts, in your case v0.04 was much closer to sex than part 0.05. Also I think skipping animations on secondary characters would help a lot - at least making them bit smaller. I really would love to support this game down the line, but with the danger of being "milked" I might not be able to. Anyway, I hope the next part will be spicier than this one and continue to pace that part 0.04 was starting to pick up.

marcialart

Thanks a lot for your feedback Jonas!

marcialart

For the few people that experienced the bug in the Coffee Shop, it's already fixed and I re-uploaded the version with the fix for PC and Mac. The links of this post has been updated.

King Pineapple

When will the android version be released? Also is the android version normally delayed like this as I paid for the higher option to play it sooner which I haven't been able to

Keynnan

still have to wait? For the next time you could finish the android version first, because paying to wait for the same date as those who pay less does not seem appropriate to me.

Angelo

I don't want leave the game but i wish next 0.0.6 shortly,nothing else!!

marcialart

Sorry for the delay King Pineapple, yes it is usually delayed because I've to adapt it and test it first, but it was my mistake that it's not specified in the tiers, sorry for the inconvenience, I already put a note on the tiers so everyone know this. It will be released today in about 3 hours

marcialart

Thanks for your observation Keynnan, I usually finish the PC / Linux / Mac version first, launch, and then I start adapting the game on Android, but this was not written in the tiers, to fix this misunderstanding in the future I modified the tiers description so now everyone know about this. Sorry again for the misunderstanding.

John

I know everyone has a different opinion on this, but I personally enjoy the slow buildup over time. Very enjoyable so far.

Valentin

Agreed . The slow paced build-up tension and excitement is what i like about this game. Otherwise it will be just like the other average VNs

marcialart

Ok, thanks Angelo 😉I wish I could develop it faster, maybe in the future I can hire someone to help me, who knows :)

marcialart

Thanks a lot John! I'm glad you enjoy the way is being developed and that you find it enjoyable so far 😉

marcialart

Thanks Valentin! I'm glad that you like it 🙂and that you think it's not the average VN, much appreciated 😉

Eric wade

I'm a new supporter. what version is the latest one? when was it released? how often are updates released? thank you

marcialart

Hello and welcome, Eric! The latest version is V 0.05. Released in June. The game is updated every 2-3 months. I hope you have a great day! 😉