Tammy Suiting (Patreon)

So I have been sitting on a sketch layout for quite a while but could never bring myself to finish it as I kept making newer versions of it but never happy with it.

Well, thanks to some inspiration from some friends I've finally decided to finish it up. Though, quite frankly, I'm still not 100% sure on it. What do you think? Should anything be added or changed? How's the dialogue/story? Let me know what you think down below.