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I like these pages, they look pretty good ! *proud*

We all got those glowing plastic stars at one point, don't lie !!! Haha- 

I made it more noticeable than expected, but did you notice ? We've been two times in the Boy's room, each time everything seemed banal - since it is his daily life. But when Tera gets in, he instantly sees everything that's "wrong".

Also, I didn't tell you but we have already started to dive into the "metaphor" aspect of the story: the way the scenes follow each other means something!  so much mystery !!!?

If I'm right, in the next update there will be contact    U///U

I hope you'll like these new pages !! Thank you so much for being so supportive! <3

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Scarlett Quinn

My two sons, 15 & 17, still have these glowing stars on the ceilings in their bedrooms!

zpico

I think someone was asking about their fingerprints last time. Here is the answer !

zpico

Ps: Did you notice that the Boy still doesn't know who Tera really is: he thinks he's just a thief lol

Crowned Crow

Tera if you make our boy cry...I swear...

Crowned Crow

He just looks pretty upset in the last panel...Tera coming into his room and telling him the stars are wrong. Just rude. Also that bed looks beyond comfy.

Watochello

i felt the pain on the boy's face when Tera said: "stars don't even look like that."

Myriam McFly

omg confronting the boy with his fear ...... i love how you always sway from funny to complete sadness or drama T_T <3 can't wait for the next pages!! the fact that the boy has these stars on the ceiling tho... ;W; to notice the metaphor i think i need to rereread everything in one sitting... i actually love these things, but its hard to grasp on only seeing a few pages every month...so i will search properly for this when the next chapter is ourt. i gonna reread the old chapters again and see if i find something <3

zpico

Hahaha, yeah I didn't want us to feel that Tera is too kind/caring with the Boy at the beginning ! Plus they are both fairly straightforward lol

zpico

I know !!! I really hesitated to make Tera say that ! (That's also why in the park scene he doesn't say anything) It just to show he's not fully kind and caring with the boy yet !

zpico

Haha I agree, monthly updates are not the best to see/feel those things! (I mean it should be a full book everythime!!)

zpico

Awh :3 At first he was more sad, but I thought he wouldn't show to much, he's a proud Boy -

Crowned Crow

Soft side's for a later date. Soft bedding only. I like how to the point they both are. Correct me if I'm wrong but Tera seems like the type to fixate on small details while the Boy's mind goes a million miles an hour. Feels like an interesting juxtaposition between them.

_damn_rius

Flashback from when I was nine and I tried to glue that type of stars on my ceiling with scotch tape, but than they started to fall in the middle of the night and nine-year-old me was too afraid to look what was happening or why were little light thingys falling from the ceilinglol (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

zpico

Awh noo !! Hahaha !! I saw the notification and started to read .. and burst out laughing! xD So cute !!!

weirdgirljuliet

This was nostalgic for me, as I totally had glow-in-the-dark star stickers up on the ceiling of my room in the house I grew up in. They stopped glowing over time, though, sad. anyways, I think the unobtrusive way Tera rummaged around and found the blatant evidence of Boy's PTSD was interesting; the first hint of one facing the inner problems of the other. I think the juxtaposition of the crime-filled life that Tera leads, and the airy, positive way Boy carries himself leaves a very high disparity. In other words, I can't yet imagine the Boy being thrown into Tera's world yet, though I feel that that might inevitably happen. I am definitely more excited about it than afraid, as I can't wait for them to know more about each other. I just noticed how highly they contrast when Tera had just been out burning someone while Boy had been doodling Team Rocket, and I think this is what makes Tera stick around. I absolutely love their dynamic and the writing. It's so interesting!

Blanca Elena

You are the best 🥰🥰🥰🥰 can't wait for the next pages, I really think that Tera will help the Boy with His fear of the dark Pd: I did have stars glued to my ceiling jajajaja

Maj

Awww! The Boy is so pretty confused and Tera with a bow is so sexy. And after that, on a bed, he's also so pretty!

Aj

Yes yes yes! I look forward to this every month!

Aj

I always wonder how the boy and Tera sound. Like, do you have a voice in mind for them?

Michelle King

Glow in the dark stars ftw I had them too 🥰

Aj

Good, we got Tera on the bed, next step, we gotta do something about that mask! And CONTACT next time! Perhaps during a shower scene...

Andy

My thoughts exactly ... but I think we're hoping too much for a shower scene (crossing the apartment with "stinky raccoon" seems a bit too much) ... BUT I totally see the Boy lending Tera a shirt or something ... the one on him seems big enough to fit Tera.

Andy

I actually think it's OK for Tera to not be kind yet towards the Boy's issues ... no major issue is solved by being delicate from my experience. It's good he calls it out for what it is in so few words ... a fear/trauma that started since childhood and is not yet solved. Yeah, just like the Boy is clearly calling Tera a thief to his face/mask and threatens to call the police ... there's no sugarcoating that.

Michael

Okay, let's put it to a vote. Who is in favour for the shower idea? Everyone? Who is against the idea? No one. Perfect. It's settled.

Michael

Be bloody honest: you (like propably 85% of the other folks here) want to see him at least upper half naked (the rest is just four buttons so don't mind the extra)! I don't judge you, I support the idea. And the idea with the boys shirt for Tera: crack, crack, rip. The boy has about S or M size and Tera has XL (it works for my size (201cm)). He would look like a turkey pressed through the hole of a donut. But credits for the idea...

Andy

Hell yeah, i'm all up for admitting I do want to see at least the upper half naked ... it's a personal hope Tera has some funky tattoos :D ... i'm cool with the shower idea too just seems a bit too much in one go to make it "doable" ... it's up to our wonderful artist to make the magic work. On the other hand, the Boy's current shirt seems way oversized for his S or M ... i just thought "it's so big on him, would fit Tera better" and zing ... the new twist popped to mind (exactly, dirty mind, judge away, I really don't mind) muahaha

Aj

I like how the boy calls Tera a thief for taking his phone, but calls Joris a friend even though he tried to kidnap him

Michael

I am getting good vibes from this community. Yeah the clothes the boy ist wearing are a little bit bigger than they should be but under normal circumstances he would be an S/M (I can't judge it because I would never fit into it).

Michael

Tattoos would be awesome but they would be a disadvantage. If the should ever spot Teras tattoo it would be game over for him. It is a too remarkable feature (okay, he's about 200cm tall and is obviously doing lifting for more than four years and sticks out like a lighthouse on the coast). Also: they are freaking expensive, especially when you are this tall and want a tattoo covering a limb or fit a body part.

Michael

Lucky one, I had glowing crystals in a transparent treasure box. Dumb me had to look at them while being asleep. End of the story: some of them felt into my eyes and it hurts for days like hell. Advantage: my eyes were like two mini spotlights in the dark.

Michael

I don't think that Tera meant to be rude. I mean he is running across the streets and roofs of Paris (a wonderful city by the way which I haven't visited for GOD DAMM 10 YEARS) and sees them so often in their true beauty. The stars on the ceiling were like cheap copies that could never reach the original as much as someone like the boy wanted to to be not alone. And if you have ever slept outside in a clear summer night outside of the city without their distraction lights I can assure you that you never feel alone. The bright is never black, it is a dance of white, blue, violet and sometimes green if you are lucky enough.

Michael

And whom the boy shot in the foot, was over run by Tera with the boy in his arms, smashed into the crown jewels (nuts) by the boy with an umbrella and burnt his eyes/ face with hot coffee. If a friend of mine would do this to me I would personally mount him/her headfirst over Hohenzollernbrücke here in Cologne.

Michael

Tera is wearing tactical gloves with upside protection. They are pretty handy when it come to a dirty street fight but otherwise they are not as well suited for stealing or breaking in.

Crowned Crow

I was actually just kind of joking around. I got the implications. Don't worry.

Die_trane

I'm in love with this pages! But I excited to see the events of last post in they're real life 😏 Tera has to take off his mask in the next update! And I really use to dream about the stars! Lol.

zpico

Haha yeah we all did at some point and just because we were too lazy to take them of, they stayed there years ! At that's what happened for the Boy lol. What an interesting comment !! Love the fact that you try to analyse the scenes ! Yeah don't worry, the Boy will be a good fighter ;) They both have a very interesting evolution pattern!

zpico

I kinda know for Tera, and hesitated to say it on his Character sheet lol

zpico

@Aj Haha sadly I can't tell you when he'll take his mask off! I think it will be a moving moment!

zpico

Haha you make some interesting comments ! Can't tell you too much but I assume you won't be disappointed!

Aj

Ooh, is it a surprise?

Aj

Gah! I can hardly wait!

Andy

Darlin', after all I've read so far I'm positive anything you could dish out can never disappoint me. I love it all ... the good, the bad, the hot, the funny and also the deep and dark.

Amber Rothwell

I really think that Boy lost his parents in an (obviously) traumatic way, but I wonder if it was accidental or purposeful? Because those would both cause different trauma dynamics. Personally, I’m rooting for purposeful, simply because if he witnessed it, despite his air-headed cheer, his survival makes him ba, and I think that it would draw Tera to him even more strongly, to protect him keep him from suffering anymore trauma. If this didn’t make much sense, imma blame it on it being 430am, and punchy from drugs. (Legal medication for vertigo treatments! *whispers* “don’t do drugs, kids!”

Mellowcat

So much effort with the symbolism of things. So much to explore and discover, partial with Tera as a guide, the Wolf sniffing out the boys weakness. Sharp nose, prying eyes, clever swift "moves"... what a joyride. Got me hook line and sinker time and again.

Mellowcat

It is so much fun re-reading those comments with the story at chapter 8 now. Some of you nailed it, kudos! (And some wishes came true - "fan-service" at its best).