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I was pretty excited about book 1 of escaping gravity. I went into it with another new writing challenge for myself. Given how much we care about relationships in Harem books, I used some new techniques to work on side character stories. Most of the effort went into Brick and Lily for this one.

They worked out so well that I turned back to RD 6 and am somewhat scrambling to pick up the edges of the new technique and apply it to the current book. A little hard to do if I don't set the characters up properly, but I do like the character work I did in EG.

The next EG book will feature Violet's homeworld and dig into her character quite a bit. I think the current plan is to spend 2-3 books focused on the Kikai race and a larger plot there before switching back to the Empire.

I say 'think' because I'm a terrible pantser and something about best laid plans and all. The magic for me is to always find something to be excited to write, because it will then come through in the story.

Some good news for all of you, we are going right into RD with a 5 chapter launch. I'm going to try and do RD in a month, when I've been taking 2 months all last year. I'm hoping to do 10+ books this year, so I need to keep the train rolling.

I am still behind on my overall process. About 1 week behind. That won't normally stop a release, but keeping you all updated. The goal will be to have the book completely done by 3/23 not to have the schedule slip.

My goal is to keep the monthly schedule up until June, with June as a skip month. So I gotta hold on!

I'm getting a ton of emails/messages about people asking if Dungeon Diving is over or canceled? I know I inserted the new series into the rotation pushing it back a month more than normal. But I want to reassure everyone, it is still going. I'll see if I can't get the series to go for 16 novels. I might fall over of exhaustion after that though.

As for Returner, book 5 got caught up in some Amazon weirdness where it wasn't getting reviews for a long time and seemed to not get much traction. Probably in my time thus far it is the single largest % drop from one book to the next in series.

I'm going into book 6 with the hope that the dent will sort of pop out with another book in series. However, I am going to start cleaning up threads in the series, because I feel that it'll probably end before Dungeon Diving.

People always ask what causes a series to end. My philosophy is largely that if the data is showing me that people are losing interest in a series that it's time to start a new one. Dungeon Diving has 40% of people who've read book 1 have going all the way to book 10. 70% of readers were still there for book 5. Which is actually really impressive for a series this long.

Because comparisons are helpful. Eyeballing a number of top LitRPG titles, I'm doing as good or better than many of those by reader retention.

Returner Book 5 appears to only have 25% of readers still here. I've been kinda hoping that whatever weirdness it got caught up in would pass and it would pick up since release, but I'm kinda flashing the yellow light that I am looking towards a potential end on Returner in the next few books based on the data.

I'll go ahead and admit that I set a really long runway for this series, but I won't belabor a story if people are tuning out. When I see such low reader retention numbers, it tells me it is time to start another series.

I have no idea what would be next though, I put a lot into EG and wasn't really thinking RD would end soon. But I have plenty of time for another cult like #spaceseries to start.

Dungeon Diving will be after Returner. Given that so many people seem worried about DD audio and ebook continuation, I am breaking my syncing the audiobook with the next ebook just to get them out a little faster (I had nothing to pair with EG).

Anyway. Everything else is just chugging along.

Webcomics continue to putter along. We made some breakthrough on the scripting for Ard. It has been difficult to work with the writer and translate much of Ard's banter into physical humor, because you just can't put that much dialogue in web comics. So, it's a challenge to keep the Ard humor, but take it out of his mouth and into his actions, if that makes any sense? It includes Ard putting a flower crown on Cyam and dancing through a field. We don't have artists for it yet though, so I can't share that with you. There is a horse image test in test page, so we'll do Cyam right.

RD is probably getting close to being ready for release. I'll probably push trying to get it scheduled off until April. You can never have too much buffer to avoid the grim reaper that is Hiatus.

DD is a little behind RD, but it is chugging along. The artist went absolutely off the rails, reviewing things I suddenly found Charlotte jumping forward and punching her whole body through Bogarts in the comic like some flying superhero killing a titanic monster. We then argued about how to sequence Charlotte's brief flashback for like two weeks.

Someone more organized than me would gather all of these into a lovely blooper reel alongside the first concept of Bran which was a scrawny blood mage because there was some miscommunication along the way and Blood Hegemon literally turned into 'Vampire Mage'.

I think that's most of the updates, I'll dive into the comments sometime in the next day and answer as many questions as I can.

Comments

Bob Bryan

That amazon review bug happened to another author I read as well. They are not a harem book for the record. Not sure what amazon is doing.

Ross Carpenter

PLEASE DO NOT END RETURNERS! I’m not sure why the analytics got weird, but it’s literally some of your best work you’ve ever done. It deserves a long run, and who knows, maybe this is an unpopular opinion, but I think there is more gas left in the tank for Returners than some of the other projects. PLEASE do not let weird numbers interfere with what’s clearly a great creative outlet

Ark

#CorpoHitmanMc is my new cult. The bookclub will be my loyal subjects. Other then that, good grind Bruce. Stay hydrated and binge Severence during your break

Jamie R

Loving EG, and the relationship building and emotional connection. Partly why I love Daniel Schinhofen's novels and he's a good role model for the emotional connections and sense of family. Looking forward to DD'# next novel, and while aim still reading RD, the last book was, no offense, a little lackluster when it came to the trial of kings... At least the first part of the trials. Him going back and merging the trials into one Mega trial was a good twist and loved it, but I feel it became more political and logistical rather than the action packed magic slinging adrenaline rush fights. With how the trials were hyped up, they didn't live up to the hype 😞. Still, going to keep reading the series. Once I start it, I like to see it through. Nothing I hate more than an unfinished series.

qwerty9118

Rahhh! Space book! God I love Sci-Fi! (And hope you start even more sci-fi series!! No, really, like, no-one writes em. It doesn't need to be the only one! pleasepleaseplease-) Good luck with more RD, man - hope the amazon weirdness is fixed soon. It's a really good series! Just, do us a favour and don't wrap up any plot threads prematurely ;) Still salty about a few series I read years back that got rushed right at the end...

Jose Paz III

Returners is a great book even though I don't like those kind of books most people are probably like me I love your books but I absolutely can't patiently wait for the next one so I leave a few to stockpile before I continue to read them

SparksBored

It could also be a matter of not knowing when those books are released. Kindle doesn’t exactly promote books and unless they are patreon members most people likely didn’t know that the series has been updated.

AWKW1ZARD

Really hope RD doesnt get axed! There's a ton of long-term potential with that world,

Stormking

I really hope rd doesn't get the can it would be stupid if it gets canned for Amazon's fuck up.

Bollywash

Returners has been my favorite series of all the sentor books. I love how no nonsense bran is and the character development along with some of the POV’s has been some of your best work in my opinion. Hope it was a weird Amazon glitch because the series needs at least 3 more books one for almeria, Winnie and Venthra. I thought it would be cool to also get one of brans past life lovers in the story too if it was to keep going.

RestIsBest

I love RD problem is that you are speed running all the good stuff about being a returner. Solo leveling got away with it's hyper speed growth because it ended quickly and it had visuals to key you into the action letting the power creep be aura farming when you read it it just seems rushed. Don't know if you can fix it but I really like the character and would be sad to see it end.

Aaron Herwig

I tried to get into RD but it just didn’t hook me like Ard other series such as AO, looking forward to DD coming although wasn’t thrilled with the last book I’m enjoying EG so far I’m excited for future stories, keep up the great work !

Timothy Johnson

RD has a TON of potential!! It almost needs to be released in like different sagas. Bran mentioned like 3x different demon wars + a war for supremacy and aliens coming to help at one point. I realize that he has changed things by going back in time, but there is still a ton of story potential there. I'm really hoping that RD6 gives you better reader metrics. Thank you for everything you do!

Josh Holler

Thank you so much for what looks to be another great series! I loved the first book of EG and was honestly annoyed when I finished chapters because it meant I had to wait another day. I can’t wait to see where you take the series!

Hugh Sweeten

EG has been very interesting and fun. Looking forward to book two. If RD is next I’ll probably bounce for a bit and come back for the next DD book. the RD series fell off for me at book three and I haven’t continued past that volume. I really like the setting for EG and hope for a galaxy spanning story. The Space Mercenary light novels are a favorite of mine and this series scratches that same itch. Great job!

Donny Davis

I like RD. Book 5's starting chapters didn't hit with me for some reason. I am not wanting to say why because of book spoilers. YMMV And like others have mentioned, I think the power progression happened a little too fast for Bran. A lot of my favorite aspects of litrpg apocalypse stories are the beginning early levels. For regressors, it can be how they prep for the future coming and set themselves and humanity up for a better end. Glad to see RD5 hit audible today. You are one of the few authors where I buy the books hen they come out. There are not many authors I can say that about. I am looking forward to EG. I have kept myself from the preview chapters so I can read it all at once.

Fifthgod

Thanks for the update. I still love RD so please keep it going.

Jacob

I hope the numbers resolve themselves with RD6. I really enjoy that series and believe there is a lot of room left for the story. EG has a great start and I'm excited to see where it goes.

Razor Ramon

Thank you for pointing out RD5 hit Audible I didn’t even get a notification

Jarrett Nelson

I’ll admit I’m part of the RD5 number dip. Mostly because getting through plots like what’s happening at the beginning of 5 is not my favorite so I planned to wait for the audio book to listen to it so now that it’s out I’ll be giving it a listen

JamzHigate

I put a review when I finished reading. I just checked out reviews for book. Its asking me to be the first to review book 5. I also noticed it did not show up in my books to purchase. I follow Sentar and have bought every book he has put up Amazon. So why wouldn't it show up in my algorithm. I also think patreon is spoiling some of us readers. If you go chapter a day you pick out "flaws" with certain things but it might get explained a few chapters later. I read a lot of chapter reviews and a lot of guys seem not to be able to distinguish a chapter from the entire finished book and it gives them a negative feeling for the rest of the book. I will admit I did this to a chapter or two. But caught myself and now let the whole book finishes before I judge.

Sanginius

So is Escaping Gravity out then? as i cannot see it on Amazon UK. or are you refering to it with regards to your website? Which i'm subscribed to but don't actually use, as i find it awkward to seperate each story out and having to scroll back to the top after each chapter to select the next feels clunky unless im doing soing wrong.

MuteButtonHero

Not sure I would call the members of the harem in H-Lit side characters, which is to say I agree with increasing their POV in the story. As for RD, it's just not as fun as some others and lately I've been in a mood more for entertainment and humor rather than straight drama. That's not criticism, just a temporary preference. So I haven't made reading it a priority and obviously haven't written a review on 4 or 5. I still want to read them but I've pushed it off a bit. Also a lot of the 2 dozen or so other authors I'm reading had releases in Jan/Feb. I read fast but I still spend 2 or 3 days on a book because I have a life.

Mick

The reason people ask about DD being finished is every time you have a break or anything is put off, it's DD's turn at being written.

Mick

RD is now probably my favorite from Bruce, the long ass instance chapters are a little too long, but otherwise it's a great series,

Dennis Erwin

RD isn't bad, but I think a lot of us were mentally set for an OP MC base-building romp, similar to what we got with SSV (which to me is the pinnacle story that hasn't been beaten yet.)

Iron Akela

Gotta admit, RD4 was the nail in the coffin for the series for me. The story went in a direction that just didn’t interest me and I’ve not been able to finish it either on audio or ebook. Now EG is finished I’ll read it and see what’s what

A Wilson

I am all for RD, reading the beginning of EG did nothing for me. My top book book so far is RD, then DD. Dragon justice I've been trying and it is... mid.

BUGKILL5700

To be honest dragons justice waste first series I read and I hope for one book or a spin off following so of his kids and the shenanigans they might get up to. I really just want to see Mr.Pendragon be a father

Alex Pierce

I guess I'll join with some of the RD analysis. I like the series and have been waiting for the audiobook since reading 5. That said, the series has a lot of threads and if the one being followed isn't the one you're most curious about then I can see where readers get frustrated with a lack of pay off. The thing I like about the world is that it feels like there are a lot of moving parts, but that can be a double-edged sword as a writer. I will be sad if we don't at least get a book with Syssy on the cover though. I also think the current realities of the world might have created a slight distaste in apocalyptic literature.

Michael Viggiano

Completely fine with DD going forever. By far my favorite series of yours

RestIsBest

Never mind im pretty sure why the RD 5 didn't do so well it's pretty cringe with the depowering then the cucky arc of him finding out Simon only loved him because he was strong and only finding a way to love him again because he was useful pretty much showing she would probably drop Bran if someone stronger and more valuable showed up. While he just takes it making up excuses as to why the story has to keep abusing him like a kicked puppy instead of just being direct... now I haven't finished it yeah but I can tell why people would find it cringe and hard to listen too. Forcing the drama and making the devotion person devoted to the idea and not the man, making the relationship hollow would definitely turn people off even if there is a redemption later in the book.

WolfKnight22

Loved eg can't wait for book 2

John Doyle

Where can I find the web comics?