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SSV Manga Ch 1 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-11-17 13:46:17
Edited:
2022-11-17 13:48:53
Imported:
2026-06
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I'm still a little set on the idea to try and connect to the manga crowd and had it done with panels from right to left.

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Ralph

Awesome! But he looks like a kid. How long did that little comic take to make. It does give a different perspective to the storyline.

Michael Dunsdon

yea but some times its funny like with Rory Mercury from GATE.

GhostPhil

Really cool! It's gonna be amazing to see all this happening in art form. Ryan looks younger than I imagined him 🤔

DJ Johnson

Looks a bit too young other then that I love it!

El Jefe

I second that; the characters, especially Miles, look a bit too young, so if it's not too late to course correct that, I think that'd help it pop from the sea of more generic young nebulously teenage protags that make up most manga. Regardless, it's an ambitious endeavor, and I'm excited to see it progress!

Ray

Yep, looks just how I thought it would.

Bruce_Sentar

Yeah, you'll notice in particular here in chapter one he seems to age quite rapidly in the first half. I kept pushing 'older, older'. Probably need to go back and have the first half here partially redone.

vardic d

Yeah, I agree, him looking so young he's practically a teenager is really of-putting.

Joe.L

Worth the wait.

Adam S

Love it. Can't wait to see more!

Brad

agreed

Joe S.

I think the bottom panel of page 15 almost works, maybe it's the hair? I'd try different hairstyles before aging him too much. He wears a mask in public so expressions can't really be used to push his age/experiences like that panel.

samuel schlatter

Ya he looks a little to much like a teen. But love the work looks great

Hugo Kater

I think he looks a bit too young for this kind of story. The artist did a great job nonetheless!

Daniel Glasson

Looks great, though I do agree on aging him a bit. I love the design for Burning Girl

Christopher Clark

Other than being super young in the beginning and getting older as it went on is that his head shrunk when he put his suit on

GhostPhil

In the books the way he acted made him feel at least 30 to me. Obviously he can look younger because of his powers. But it is weird when someone with life experience looks too young. It is like looking at a 500 year old Loli. Though it's not as extreme here.