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Maxine

really hope she gets bottom surgery

njshireling

It’s just as awesome as I hoped it would be NewBee and in terms of anticipation the gaslighting between Mia and Tanya is real however I do believe we all know that deep down Simon is Mia but it’ll take a while for her mind to catch up to this fact in general I’m very excited to see what happens next :D. On a side note yep everything expect what’s down below has changed, for now.

Alison St John

Oh Simon, you really are so gullible, I expect he still thinks there's a way back from this so called mistake, Tanya really is a devious woman, and the way she lies so easily is worrying to say the least, psychologically I feel the obvious brainwashing is going to continue and Mia will evolve but will Tanya still be in control.......🤔

TanjaLovelly

Oh no... the arts are beautiful... but the stories?!? Brainwash... so sad about that... it was perfect as it was :(

njshireling

In general I believe you’re right this is only step one and in terms of everything else yeah no there is no going back however something tells me Mia will eventually overcome Tanya but in a bittersweet way where Tanya no longer has any power but Mia can never go back to her old life as Simon being forced to embrace this new one as Mia including finding someone perhaps a genuine sincere man who treats her well and loves her for who she is not what she could be like Tanya is currently doing.

Anonymeurope10

I didn’t expect that the tapes Mia was listening make her mentally a mexican woman. I think that will be as hard for Simon/Mia to accept as his/her new body. Even Tanya is surprised that Spanish has become his/her main language. Will there be some explanations? Simon is more and more Mia and less and less Simon. Will Mia climb soon in the pool with Tanya’s dad? It’s hard to wait for the next chapter.

njshireling

It’s going to be pretty great to see and yeah there’s no question in time Simon’s physical and mental transformation into Mia will have been totally completed so yeah lots to look forward to going forward :).

Maggie Heels

On page 15 I got shivers... I didn't expect Tanya to be so evil... thankfully next page revealed she's not... still very evil though... but not that level of evil hahaha

Maggie Heels

I think for what she did... extreme body mod without consent... she deserves very well to karma hitting her back hard... maybe her Dad will explain to her that she needs to do anything her future step-Mom asks her for... without any questions... 😁(I'm just thinking out loud hehehe)

Alison St John

It'll be interesting to see what kind of woman Mia turns out to be, Simon was always self centred, I wonder if Mia's traits are the polar opposite

Anonymeurope10

I don’t think so. With the box containing the equipment from Elliot and Tanya’s remark in the previous episode, Simon/Mia still have her best part. But I am impatiant to see Mia wurh Elliot’s equipment.

Anonymeurope10

It is only a partial brainwash. He/she still knows who he/she is but can’t speak a proper english anymore. I like that kind of brainwash very much.

njshireling

Honestly that’s actually genius though Maggie and perfectly fits with the themes of the story so yeah I guess we’ll see what happens :).

njshireling

This is honestly possible and again would fit well with the story I believe personally Mia again will be humbled and if anything she’ll truly start to open her heart up to others possibly one of them being Tanya’s Father.

Paul

i hope Tanya get the stepmom she doesn't want and what you known her dad can not give her money any more he have a new wife to take care of and spoil

Carlos

Rambling in Spanish is just the start. I bet Tanya will insist on more audios since she seemed surprised at how effective her “miscalculated” commissioned audio had been. With her new look and wonderful accent Tanya’s dad won’t know what hit him the day Mia slips into his pool with him!

Maxine

Gets not got

Lilly

Excellent and well worth the way bravo NewBee it was hard to top that last chapter but you found a way

njshireling

They’re pretty cool I’ll say that I’m a fan.

njshireling

I’m sure Tanya will absolutely get a new Stepmom but funny enough it will be the ultimate turn the tables moment and there’s no question that in the end at least I believe Mia will win.

njshireling

Yeah when I saw the post yesterday I was super excited to read it and yeah I too was not disappointed this story indeed has NewBee being put in the big leagues for me :).

Halima Abdi

I love that her default is Spanish now, English is just a foreign language to her

njshireling

It’s a very interesting development I’ll say it’s just one more step towards her truly becoming Mia :).

Nix42069

Tanya isn't even pretending to not enjoy this at this point. I mean damn Tanya you could try to calm em down.

njshireling

All I’m saying is I’m fairly certain Mia will end up having the last laugh.

Nix42069

i sure hope so

njshireling

I too like this because in the end knowing that Mia has the chance to win against Tanya and live a better life with her Father gives me hope :).

Name Here

Love the story, but i have a question - how much tanya didn’t make him more of a MILF which was the original idea instead making him a young woman

njshireling

It’s a good question but in general I feel like it will segway into Mia becoming a MILF later on but we’ll just have to wait and see :).

MNTNA

i really wished that Tanya continued to act like Simon has always been Mia, maybe even twisting the truth by making "Simon" as a "Young Boy that Mia had a crush or a one-night-stand" i don't really like that Mia can now speak fluent Spanish and only a broken-english, i would had like it if it was a slow thing, like a slow self-conditioning

NewBee

Good question indeed.

strangenoob

Hey, I'm surprised at how well the dialogue is adapted into Spanish, although some phrases are a bit exaggerated. You did a great job, and I can tell you put effort into researching even those kinds of details..

NewBee

I try my best. Got a spanish speaking person as a 2nd opinion to look over some stuff so that helps :D

njshireling

See this is why you’re awesome NewBee you put so much effort into these little details and I couldn’t be more happy :).

NewBee

Don't hype me up too much Njshireling, there will come a day where I'll disappoint you :D

njshireling

Now I wouldn’t say that trust me NewBee I’ll always believe in you no matter what :D!

njshireling

So yes NewBee to clarify you’ll always have my support with your stories I promise :).