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Intended to finish the chapter tonight but the internet up here is really shaky. Plus side is the view is amazing.

Does anyone have anything they’re really hoping to happen or a chapter POV they really want?

Taking suggestions for anything and everything. I have an idea for how I want to finish book three but it’ll be another 20 chapters to get there making book 3 the longest one yet

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SoJoe

Some ideas off the top of my head that might be fun but no urgent need for: Dwarf POV of them settling, Kingdom of Alnor POV of the frontline they have(I know they fell in the original timeline, what state are they in). A deeper description of what is going on with the mana well and stream/lake through/in the landing. These have been mentioned numerous times especially in the recent Josh chapter but have never really been explained in full depth. POV of Navy building in the south or other things being built in the Basin. (Not including things from the north since I assume those are planned for in the plot)

Sebin Paul

I’d love a PoV from one of the lords “opposing” Harold, the one who made an appearance at the auction would be great.

Matt L

There is actually a scene involving one of them coming up so that might scratch the itch. I hadn’t planned a Reyes scene until the end of book 3

Matt L

Ok a lot of stuff here. There will be a scene of Harold going through Brams mountain sometime early book 4 Alnor chapter sometime after that. Book 4 is going to be a lot more in the south. Henri chapter in book 3 coming up involving the ants. The mana spring I could go over again. I was gonna cover that when they finally get the illusion chamber built. The one he bought the blueprints for because it will be attached to the mana spring

crazyray

Relax and have fun.

OhDannyBoy72

I'm not sure how I feel bout the ants out of no where, I mean I can definitely see it helping the Adventurers getting a shit ton of perks but besides that it was a total blind side I feel like he is stretched thin as is. I want to see Harold wipe out the Black Jaw commanders solo because his nail forces him to fight and it breaks the black jaw goblins before they can properly start fighting back. I know I'm probably the only one but I want another Sarah chapter where they kill a named beast and get an awesome speed perk for them all. Like make the fight super close but still win and no one in the group dies so the perk gets super buffed.

Matt L

I think you’ll appreciate the fight as a whole. Starting to see Harold’s planning really come into play. And there will be at least one more Sarah chapter before the end of book 3 that’ll give her some of what you’re looking for. Just hopefully not in the way you’re anticipating.