[WIP] Page 11 (Patreon)

Few more pages and i can call it a half of the chapter. And also it can be named Chapter 0 part A, for example. Because the story will come to its logical conclusion in this particular situation. And another will begin, as a result of the first. 🤔Maybe i can also post it somewhere publically already.After redaction of course. I have a friend who is experienced in storytelling and is a native English speaker unlike me (i wonder how many stupid mistakes i made in the dialogue clouds). Maybe he'll give me a few advices about the text and style, and about storytelling too..