DBZ bloodline page 1 rough sketch (Patreon)

This is the rough sketch first page of my DBZ comic Bloodline. I will Clean this sketch up refine things before going to the ink stage. So its like i do a thumbnail layout sketch, then ill do this stage(above), then i will do another cleaner refined version of this , then ink it up, then paint it up. Are yall interested in seeing sketches like this ? Or would you rather just see the final version? let me know so i can tailor my posts accordingly.

Also, lets have some fun with feedback, Tell me what you think is happening on the page so far. Dialog is welcome also. thanks yall!