One-shot Story: 'Faux Bargain' is Up at CHYOA (Patreon)

You can check the story by following this link:  https://chyoa.com/chapter/Faux-Bargain.1096377

 if you have any suggestion or comment, you can tell me here or in the the CHYOA thread.  

also, should I write the after story with the rest of Norton's family and Jordan?