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Takuma walked into the Hokage’s Office building through a special entrance reserved for ANBU. He was dressed in full garb, mask and all, for his meeting with the Hokage.

An operative from the Hokage’s ANBU was waiting to escort him. The operative was a woman with straight, purple hair that reached down to her waist. She wore a cat-motif mask and the standard ANBU uniform, choosing to have her death-seal visible on her right shoulder, like many operatives who proudly wore their insignia.

“Lieutenant Ratel. Right on time, sir. I am Squad Leader Minou. Lord Hokage has asked me to escort you today.”

They shook their gloved hands and talked as they walked.

“Thank you for escorting me today, Minou… I wasn’t told the reason behind the summons. Would you happen to know what Lord Hokage wishes to meet about?”

The summons hadn’t come via Weasel’s or Stag’s offices. Instead, the Hokage’s staff had contacted his secretaries directly, which could mean a few things, among which was that the summons was for personal reasons or that the matter was outside his duties as an ANBU, thus there was no need to involve his superiors. Takuma had reeled in his captain just in case. Or it could simply be that the Hokage was the leader of the village and could summon him directly for whatever reason he deemed fit.

“I wasn’t told, sir,” Minou replied. “You’re penned in for twenty minutes with Lord Hokage, and seeing that his schedule isn’t running late, you may get to have the complete twenty.”

Takuma hummed. Twenty minutes was too long for a summary report, something he prepared on all of the important or urgent matters his unit was working on in case something was brought up in the meeting.

They sat down in a private waiting room to wait out the ten minutes till the meeting.

“You were there, sir? At the ROOT eradication?” Minou asked.

Takuma studied the kunoichi for a moment before nodding.

“What was it like?” she asked, leaning forward.

“Like any other battle where jōnin are involved. You understand your role, look out for your fellow shinobi’s back, and stay the hell out of the jōnin's way. If they’re the main characters, everyone else is a stagehand.” He wasn’t interested in recounting his experience of participating in a battle against Orochimaru.

Minou nodded with a grave expression. She had been in a battle involving jōnin and seen her fair share of danger. One didn’t need to be the best of the best to be selected for the Hokage’s personal ANBU, because that would deprive the department of talent where it could be used better. However, every single ANBU who directly answered to the Hokage had proved themselves in one way or another and had a record of consistent excellence that made them worthy of the prestigious position.

Takuma noticed that she wanted more details, and leaving her just with a non-answer would be dull and awkward.

“The most impressive thing I saw was the A-rank ninjutsu from Lord Akimichi Choza. A mountain of a man in the sky with an even larger golden palm descending towards the land… He truly seemed like a raging divinity in that moment.”

It was a truly impressive sight that Takuma would have appreciated when he was there, if not for the hyperfocus on getting out from under the palm before it hit, as the alternative was death. Perhaps only rivalled by the clash of Itachi’s A-rank ninjutsu against the Gates of Rashomon. Takuma would never admit it, but the sight of Orochimaru surviving after everything that had been thrown at him—the writhing snakes that made up his body—had left a lasting impression. What the man had done to his body was disgusting, but it made it difficult to kill him.

“Did you see Orochimaru? They say he was there,” Minou asked.

Takuma had a feeling she was asking him because she already knew he was part of the group that fought Orochimaru.

The details of the whole ordeal were confidential, but it wasn’t a surprise that some things would slip out. Many people knew he led the effort against ROOT; knowing that, someone probably thought it would be fine to say he was there, since it wouldn’t be surprising. That’s all it took for some details to get around.

“I’m not at liberty to talk about it.”

“Of course,” she said, seemingly satisfied.

Orochimaru’s presence at the ROOT raid was classified knowledge, but the level of clearance was low, so plenty knew he was there. However, the finer details were locked under a high level of clearance. Only a select few Leaf shinobi knew that he possessed the body of an Uchiha. The Uchiha clan knew that one of their own, whom they thought had died on an unrelated mission, had been defiled by him. A number of heads of major clans, especially those with bloodline limits or hiden jutsu, were made aware of the situation.

A couple of minutes before the time, Minou went to check. “He’s ready for you, Lieutenant,” she said upon return.

Takuma stood up, did a final inspection of his attire, and then followed the ANBU kunoichi through the halls. None of the people they walked past reacted to his presence, much less acted surprised to see an ANBU.

“Lieutenant Ratel is here,” Minou stepped inside to announce.

“Enter,” came the voice from inside.

Takuma entered the office, the most powerful seat in the entirety of the Hidden Leaf, and came face to face with Sarutobi Hiruzen. He was in his Hokage robes without his hat, which hung on the coat rack. He puffed on his trusty pipe as he gazed at Takuma from the desk that had a stunning view of the village behind him.

Takuma had been in the Hokage’s vicinity as part of weekly and monthly ANBU briefings and was often called upon when the Hokage needed something explained from the regular summary reports. Weasel liked his lieutenants to answer the questions if they could do it better. But this was the first time since the home visit that they were meeting one-on-one like this.

He went down on one knee and lowered his head. “Lord Third.”

“Rise.”

Takuma hesitated for a moment before fishing out a disgustingly neon box from his person and presenting it to the Hokage.

“A gift for the honourable grandson.”

That earned him a laugh from the Hokage. The first time they had met—excluding academy graduation—Takuma had presented a gift because Barbary had pranked him. A gift wouldn’t have been out of place if he were a dignitary, but as an ANBU subordinate, it stood out like a clown without colour.

“What is this?” Hiruzen asked as he studied the flimsy box and then shook it.

“I’m told it’s a candy popular with kids.”

“Oh? Is it something novel that caught the children’s interest?”

“… It’s disgustingly sweet.”

Hiruzen laughed once more, the wrinkles on his face deepening in the best way. “Good, very good. I’ll make sure that Konohamaru gets it. How are you, Lieutenant Ratel?” he asked.

“Growing, Lord Third. This is the second time in three years that I’ve had to overhaul my wardrobe.”

Takuma had grown in both height and weight. His naturally lean frame, which had been bony during his academy days due to poor nutrition, had finally filled out nicely after years of training and eating. Putting on muscle wasn’t hard for shinobi who could will their chakra to bulk up; Takuma had allowed his body to grow naturally. He wasn’t buff by any measure, but he was no longer a scrawny little rat.

“Ah, youth,” Hiruzen smiled before a more serious expression set on his face. “That’s why I called for you today, Ratel. I wish to discuss another youth with you…

“Are you familiar with Uzumaki Naruto?” Hiruzen asked.

Takuma silently swallowed. As expected, it wasn’t about his duties, but to his shock, the topic was something he had prepared for; it wasn’t even something he thought would come up.

“The jinchuriki,” Takuma said, savouring the word.

Hiruzen nodded. “What do you think about him?”

“I'm not sure I do, Lord Third. I met him once when I was visiting his teacher, Chūnin Iruka, if you know him…”

“I do.”

“… but despite that brief meeting, I know as much as everyone else.”

“Yes, I understand, but I want your thoughts nonetheless,” Hiruzen said, a particular glint in his eyes as he urged him to answer.

This was a test. Takuma could feel it in his bones. He thought about how to proceed before deciding to answer as honestly as he could. “I’m grateful for his unappreciated service to the village. It’s a great burden for someone so young to bear.”

“That’s not how people feel about him,” Hiruzen said, his shoulders ever so slightly sagging in relief.

“They’re wrong… and yet I can understand how they feel. I have no memory of the attack, but it has become an integral part of the lives of all who live in this village, even if they were born afterwards. Many loved ones were lost that day, families destroyed, dreams lost; it’s human nature to find someone or something to blame. In this case, they blamed Uzumaki Naruto. Instead of seeing him as the jailer of the entity who ravaged the village, they see him as the entity itself in human skin.

“Even if you try to explain the concept of a jinchuriki, it’s too far out for most civilians to understand—and that is if they agree to listen. It’s not that different for a lot of genin, who, despite understanding a basic concept of fūinjutsu and seals, refuse to accept the truth… They’ve been told that he is the cursed child since they were little, and that kind of conditioning is difficult to lift.

“They look at his age and think that he’s the Demon Fox incarnate instead of seeing that he must have only been a little babe when the entity was sealed inside him. I know respected chūnin, and somehow even jōnin, who can’t overcome their own deep-seated bias.”

Before Takuma knew it, he had gone on a tirade about the unfairness of the situation. Even he was surprised by how much emotion had leaked out of him; he didn’t know that he had it inside him.

“… I understand how they feel, but I don’t accept it,” he said after calming himself.

“You’re a person of great morality, Lieutenant Ratel,” Hiruzen said with a half-smile full of sadness.

“That’s a low bar for being a good person.”

Hiruzen nodded with pursed lips. “What are your thoughts on people who say that he should not be allowed to be a shinobi. That it will only strengthen him,” he asked.

Takuma couldn’t help but scoff, which surprised Hiruzen. “An entity like the Nine-Tails doesn’t need our jutsu. He’s disastrously powerful the way he is. As for Uzumaki Naruto learning the shinobi arts, it’s only smart that he knows how to protect himself.” He paused and then added, “I compare a jinchuriki to a kunai sealed inside a scroll, but he can also be looked at as an explosive tag ready to explode. If the Nine-Tails threatens to break out, perhaps a mastery of chakra would help the boy contain him.”

Not everyone in the village thought of Naruto as the Nine-Tailed Fox. It wouldn’t be an unsubstantiated claim that over half of the shinobi in the Hidden Leaf Village—still not enough—understood the concept of a jinchuriki and accepted that Naruto wasn’t the Fox. Most of them still didn’t want anything to do with him because they didn’t have confidence in him.

How could a child contain the disaster that had killed the Fourth Hokage?

“Nothing about training him to use his powers? Isn’t that the primary function of a jinchuriki?” Hiruzen asked.

“We are destructive and murderous enough, Lord Hokage. I don’t think we need help waging wars. We are the masters of that craft,” Takuma said with a dull look in his eyes. “And yet, other villages have jinchuriki who can take advantage of the power sealed inside them…”

There was a moment of silence in the room as Hiruzen seemed to be deep in thought.

“He’s about to graduate from the academy,” Hiruzen said.

Takuma nodded. “It’s a stacked academy class. So many children of clan heads.”

Hiruzen paused with only a split moment of confusion before the realisation struck him. It seemed he hadn’t put that together. Not at all surprising. The Hokage had more concerns than the academy class roster.

“The reason I wanted to meet you is that Naruto has been struggling with the Clone Jutsu. He’s a master at the Transformation Jutsu, disturbingly so.” Hiruzen heaved a sigh and shook his head, recalling a memory. “I won’t go into the details, but he has too much chakra, and the nature of his seal does make it comparatively more difficult for him than most to properly control his chakra.”

Takuma frowned behind his mask. He tried to think if he knew that little tidbit about Naruto and the jinchuriki seal. All he could remember was that the Nine-Tails and the seal were behind Naruto’s chakra reserves, on top of his Uzumaki genetics, who were cousins of the Senju, both clans known for their vitality.

Ironically, both of those clans were now extinct.

“It’d take an inordinate amount of effort from him if he wants to master the Clone Jutsu.”

“Is this a matter of graduation?” Takuma asked.

“He’s not the brightest student,” Hiruzen sighed, rubbing his temple. “His academic performance is below average, but he shines in the practical portion. He’s stronger and faster than most of his peers, has an instinctive grasp of taijutsu, and can handle the basic weapons decently. Some of his classmates are calling him dead-last because he’s the only one who hasn’t passed the graduation test.”

“I can relate. I failed two of my attempts, and they called me dead last as well,” Takuma said, shrugging.

“I could grant him an exemption to allow him to graduate, but I fear it would face opposition from those who don’t want him to become a shinobi and grow stronger… I don’t think Naruto would be happy to get his forehead protector that way—but there’s only a couple of weeks to the final attempt, and I don’t think there’s enough time to master the Clone Jutsu. It’s simply not a jutsu compatible with him.”

Takuma could guess where this was going.

“You’re thinking of having him learn the Shadow Clone Jutsu? It’s a B-rank ninjutsu, and he’s not even a genin. Will he even be able to learn it?”

Hiruzen nodded. “He has spent more time trying to learn the Clone Jutsu than anything else. I suspect he may have the Yin nature transformation part down. His skill with the Transformation Jutsu certainly shows strong command of Yin. As for the Yang part, the Uzumaki have always had a strong affinity for it. He might just be able to do it. He won’t be efficient by any meaning of the word, but chakra isn’t a concern for him.”

Clone Jutsu technically fell under Yin Release, even if it barely used Yin principles. Transformation Jutsu was, surprisingly, a Yin-Yang Release ninjutsu; it involved imagining a form and then making it real.

The Shadow Clone Jutsu was also a Yin-Yang Release ninjutsu.

By no means would knowing basic academy jutsu make one capable of using a B-rank ninjutsu. However, it was possible that Naruto might be able to learn Shadow Clone Jutsu in a short time. Some people had innate affinities for certain ninjutsu, allowing them to grasp their intricacies instinctively. Uchiha Shisui and his command of the Body Flicker Jutsu, and the present Raikage and his use of and elevation of the B-rank Lightning Release: Chakra Mode to unprecedented levels, were prominent examples of the phenomenon.

Knowing what Takuma knew, Shadow Clone Jutsu was clearly that for Naruto.

“What do you think?” Hiruzen asked.

“It makes sense. No one could complain about the basic clones if he could create corporeal clones,” Takuma said. If he didn’t have the knowledge, he would’ve struggled believing it. “I’m assuming you’d procure the jutsu for him.”

“I will.”

“There’s no harm in trying. If he has the chakra for it and has the skill for it, why not reward him for the service he’s doing for the village?” Takuma wasn’t going to be the one to stop Naruto from getting one of his signature ninjutsu. “Lord Third… I must admit, I’m still confused as to why you wanted my input on this.”

“I want you to teach it to him,” Hiruzen said.

“P-Pardon?”

Takuma was utterly taken aback.

“Is it that strange? Are you not an expert on the jutsu?”

“Yes, but…” In his mind, the Hokage simply wanted to hear that his plan was feasible from someone else, and he chose him because he was in a unique position regarding the Shadow Clone Jutsu. “Lord Third, you’re a master of the jutsu and its many derivatives. You have actual teaching experience—you trained the Sannin! And more importantly, you know Uzumaki Naruto and seem to care about him personally. From where I stand, you’d be a much better teacher.”

“He won’t listen to me. In his eyes, I’m a nagging old man he’s trying to beat. He won’t accept my help,” Hiruzen sighed. “Back then, it took everything I had to reel in Jiraiya and stop the other two from bickering.” A nostalgic look, full of pain, flashed in his eyes. “I’m not young anymore, Ratel. I don’t have the energy to teach someone like Naruto.”

“That’s not true, Lord Third. You’re still—”

“I think he’d respond better to someone closer to him in age. You two have more in common than you might think. You failed two attempts as well; you can bond with that to get him to listen. He’s an orphan as well. I recall you telling me how much it meant when Maruboshi offered to help. I imagine Naruto would feel similarly.”

Takuma opened his mouth but swallowed his words back. Bringing up what Maruboshi did here was unfair; that man was a saint. Comparing him to his mentor was an insult to the latter. But when he thought of what it felt like the time before he found Maruboshi, it was some of the worst he had experienced. He also knew what Naruto had been through growing up. It was more than difficult to say no in the face of all of that.

“Will you do it, Ratel?”

That wasn’t a question, not really.

When the Hokage wanted something done, an ANBU like him didn’t get to refuse.

It was decided.

He’d be teaching the Shadow Clone Jutsu to that Uzumaki Naruto.

———

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A/N: Honestly, I did not start out the chapter thinking it would end how it did.

Comments

Billybob1212

Well I can’t say I expected THIS lol, it’s also incredibly concerning though because technically this will be nerfing Naruto. He’ll have Shadow Clone Jutsu so he’ll have no reason to learn Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu, which is the main thing that made him dangerous in the first place

Alexandre L

Another parallel that Hiruzen couldn't say out loud is the fact that both of them are distantly related and it would be nice to see Takuma and Naruto develop a mentor relationship. Long term it also put Takuma in the orbit of Jiraya the only Konoha Shinobi at the moment who could help him with Sage Mode one way or another

Powernap

Or Takuma has a reason to get the multiple version.

Luca Brunacci

I knew it, Takuma cares so much I fucking knew it, Takuma can't help but care about Naruto cause he's read the manga he's a fan how could he NOT care!!! He always pretends like he doesn't care but his body moves before he can even think about it he's like Deku from MHA a TRUE NARUTO FAN

Noam Bar

I thought it would either be about itachi's illness, or about his heritage, as scientific as it might be, he is the direct descendant, son actually of hashirama senju, this means a lot, and if we go by seniority he is the clan head of the senju clan.

Astral Aion

So naruto isn't getting multi shadow clone jutsu from the start? 😂

Astral Aion

Pretty sure that would be yamato no?

Noam Bar

Yamato was modified as an infant with hashirama's dna, takuma was born from the x and y chromosomes of hashirama and the x chromosome of another woman, carried for 9 months, he is biologically as much of hashirama's son as the one born naturally from the union of him and mito.

Atomicflee

Yeah project wind calamity begins here

MaliMi

You know, it makes sense. Btw, does that mean Naruto will not learn the A-rank variant?

Noam Bar

Let's hope that's what will happen, tell the hokage it is a waste of his naruto's inherent abilities ti not have multi shadow clown, with hiw soft he is on him he might give it to him like in the original series.

Dachdecker69

Takuma was fighting hard not becoming part of the main plot, but he can’t escape it muahahaha 😂😂😂😂

Lazybeep

Now the mizuki arc becomes interesting. I want to see will takuma point him as suspicious or will be let the arc play

Oblivious Bookwyrm

Response to the A/N: Really?? I thought this was inevitable with how you wrote Takuma from the beginning of the story till now. Him being an orphan that struggled just as much (more, actually) at graduating as Naruto, him having massive chakra reserves as a result of being one of the last members of a nigh-extinct clan, him being mentored by Maruboshi mirroring Takuma mentoring Naruto, and mastering the Shadow Clone Jutsu, many of which were the reasoning you used in this very chapter. It felt deliberately and masterfully written, in a gradual way that wouldn’t trigger the reader’s suspension of disbelief and didn’t feel like some overpowered Marty Sue dunking on canon as an Author’s masturbatory self-insert. But I guess that just shows what great writing can accomplish over time

Signal

Imagine takuma sumoning a bear, then useing the transformation jutsu to disguise it as one of his clones. Imagine how funny it would be for somone attacking his clones only for the disguise to pop and be met with a fuckin bear.

Billybob1212

…You… I like you. I like the way you think funny man

Billybob1212

A ranks and S ranks are already automatically incredibly rare, most Jonin have only 1 A rank at most, and the Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu is a Kinjutsu, a forbidden Jutsu. Basically a state secret that only the hokage and maybe 1 or 2 other people know. Unless something crazy happens, he’s not getting Multi

sCONE

What if Naruto learns bear summoning instead of toad summoning?

sCONE

Yeah, especially with Takuma already having a preexisting relationship with Iruka it all felt so natural while not being directed towards this outcome.

sCONE

I hope Mizuki still tries to have Naruto steal the scroll even if he doesn't get multi-shadow clone just because of the connection to the Fuma clan. We haven't seen Arisu since the interludes!!!!!!!!

Signal

Im convinced the only reason Takuma has the bear summoning contract is cause he has kuma in his name.

Damian Joseph

Huh, I thought for sure that they would talk about his biological dad being Hashirama.

Timothy McCollum

"You have more in common than you might think" - also both being the son of a powerful Hokage

Luca Brunacci

I think the bears only allow for 1 bear summoner at a time, that said I really want Naruto to meet the bears, it would be fuckkng AWESOME

A. Villainson

Yes, but nothing stops takuma from teaching chakra nature for naruto either, just telling naruto that his chakra affinity is win will already make up for that as naruto's hunger for power and being aknowledged willake him pursue wind style jutsus.

Squidika

Takuma is certainly already known for his massive use of clone techniques, not just in the office but in battle with Jonin's now too. I wonder if, after this, Hiruzen will elevate him to a Clone-based Special Jonin? Maybe even give him the multiple shadow clone jutsu. Though we know there's shenanigans going on with Naruto and shadow clones, everyone else will just see Takuma as an expert on clone jutsu who can teach an academy kid how to use a B rank jutsu in two weeks lol.

Star

LETS GOO!!! Takuma is gonna finally visit Ichiraku ramen!

Javier Ricaurte

I have mixed feeling about this, on one hand it makes sense that Hiruzen would care more about Naruto's training since the whole thing with Danzou and Root, with a section of their forces gone letting the Jinchuriki fail graduation and be forced to repeat the academy for one more year is something they can't afford, even using Takuma for that is great because he doesn't judge him, Naruto knows and likes him, and they could commiserate over being the dead last of their classes. However I think they went overboard for the solution, rather than teaching him a B-Rank jutsu from the get go there are other things they could do, they could teach Naruto both Tree-Walking and Water-Walking, both things that would help with his chakra control, fixing a problem he has and will affect him later on while also allowing him to finally break through with the clone jutsu. I know they only have "a couple of weeks" but considering all the butterflies that lead to this decision Hiruzen should have gotten him help after Naruto failed his second exam, not only with the clone jutsu but overall, this seems to be more than anything an artificial problem so that he HAS to learn the Shadow Clones while removing the way he learned it in canon. Hopefully since Naruto is a fast kinetic learner (in canon managing to learn the multi-clone jutsu in 1 night, tree walking in a week, and water walking in like an hour) he will pick it up fast and Takuma might decide to use the remaining time to also correct his faults and teach him other things, from the chakra control to the fact he doesn't even know how to end a genjutsu, probably not to the full extent considering the limited time, but at least to a degree Naruto could continue the training on his own.

Rubén López

The characters in the world of Naruto are full of tragic pasts, making it easy to sympathize with them. Takuma isn't a Naruto fan in the sense that he doesn't know every detail like someone who reads fanfiction; he's closer to a casual viewer who knows Naruto exists because of the global phenomenon it is and how iconic it is in its own right. And let's be honest, at the time, many also abandoned that anime because of how annoying the filler was.

Rubén López

Well, that happens because we have monstrous examples of geniuses, like characters such as Orochimaru, Minato, Kakashi, and Itachi, who remains the most direct comparison. Itachi, in a joke, is the character who practically writes himself, having a jutsu for every desperate situation, and whom the story itself tries to praise after a retcon/plot twist. Honestly, that's a topic that pleases me, because either you justify the Uchiha massacre in a credible way, or it doesn't happen as it did. And the latter is the only believable way to redeem Itachi without it being a written abomination.

Rubén López

But that was just the first chapter XD. I think the anime, which this fic is based on, has more potential, especially with Mizuki's girlfriend acting as a kind of spy for Orochimaru, and the Fujin and Raijin. Although there's always the option of the scroll of seals; there's a decoy one that Naruto steals and the real one, which is better hidden.

Rubén López

Wind Calamity reference XD. It would be interesting if, in this fic, we saw Naruto as The Wind Calamity. Naruto is the type of character who could abuse jutsu like Kisame does with Water, only now with wind. XD. Although in this case, Naruto is more limited by the system for obtaining jutsu, so either he learns them from Kakashi's 1000 jutsu, or he'll have to beg for each one XD. I would ask that they don't make the vacuum bullets like any other air jutsu and easy to learn, which is something that always confuses me about fics, especially since the only one who uses it is Danzo, making it clear that it's not common. For that, there are the air bullets of various characters and Nagato, Shukako's compressed air bullets, or Kakuzu's air pressure.

Martha p

how old is Takuma now??

Signal

I think Takuma is the same age as Itachi, so that would make him 17 or 18 years old mayhaps?

Dinon17

Do not fret, he will make the jump eventually. But I feel him having normal shadow clone will make his development as a ninja way better, naratively,and arsenal/kit wise.

Billybob1212

He probably could but the thing is that they usually only give you the “Special Jonin” status if they’re sure you’ll NEVER be qualified to be a true Jonin. Being a special Jonin gives undue attention and makes someone more of a target, so for people with more potential it’s better to let them develop as a chunin so they don’t get snipped early

Silvanus350

Imagine that clone went to a dinner, and only one person had the ability to pierce the genjutsu and recognize the bear…

Squidika

Is that so? Good to know!

HYP3R

HOLY PEAK

Brian

This is unique. Glad the chapter went this way, Fiction.