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GriMoire I - Dialogue (Patreon)

Published:
2026-02-15 19:18:52
Edited:
2026-02-17 12:15:41
Imported:
2026-02
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As promised, I finished the dialogue within 3 days. The set took way too long so I'm going to start the 2nd set right after I rest for a day.

Now I need to sleep, it's nearly morning now and I'm very tired. Hope you will enjoy this prologue !

Thank you for supporting me !

- Hanada Yanochi

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Maestroll

Big breasts can be stressful to her back, but there's a way to make her feel better. A nice and intimate massage that is, preferably followed by a yoni massage which gives her immense pleasure beyond her wildest imagination. It is pain-relieving you know. Hmmm, maybe having a set with this plot will be a good idea ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Ultra

Rest well, the dialogue came out great! Lots of fun seeing how the situation progressed

yanochi

I see, the key point is how the situation happened and how characters interact with each other. I will note this for future work. Thank you man. I'm going to make line work and basic colors soon. Maybe the character color will be ready next week. I'm back to resting a bit then. Finally it's done !

yanochi

I will consider that idea but maybe I prefer a cliche like massage on the beach haha Anyway, I already have an idea for the next few work so maybe once I'm done then I can try that. No promise. Anyway, I'm glad that you like the dialogue. Looks like I nailed it this time. Hope I can handle the next part excellently so that you can have more fun with this. I will be back soon !

Toastywafflz

Ooo I'm happy to get a glimpse of this as I wake up and get ready for work. This is wonderful. The dialogue is fantastic. In addition to bringing the lewd fantasy to life, it has a romantic quality that makes me feel happy. The scenario is already enticing but there's something really cute too about rushing over to make her feel good before her big performance. There's a fun sense of urgency too with the implied time limit. We can't let our oshi down, especially when she's gearing up to perform for all us deadbeats! I feel like she really glows on stage and in a way you've made her glow here too! I like how you captured her playfulness and gap moe and married it to the scenario well. "I would carry you for them" is hilarious. That's the kind of thing I'd find myself saying in this situation. Another incredible entry into the Mori Calliope collection, dead beats are eating well! On the technical side, the dialogue is also really good. There is only one thing that stood out to me and that's the use of the word imitation on the first panel; an imitation is a copy of something and I feel like that's a bit confusing given she's the real thing in the scenario. Based on the situation I think the word you want there is performance, like "I might give you a little private performance." Or a private show. That kind of thing. After that though I didn't notice anything else that stood out to me or messed with the flow or anything like that, it's a fun read that completes the set and immerses you further in the feeling of the scenario! Thank you for your hard work. You've been running a lot of marathons lately but you always make it to the finish. It's tough and you deserve rest, so I hope you get really high quality sleep and relaxation before you start on the next set! See you soon!

yanochi

Okay, I fixed the sentence following your recommendation. Thank you very much! I'm glad that you like it. Now the following set is going to be hard but let's goooo !! I'm still resting, that was the longest sleep I have ever had for a week. I'm thinking to not stay too late and push all work to daylight by.. sleep early and work at 5 a.m in return. Time to take care of my health more seriously. l fall ill too usually lately T v T