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I have just finished writing the dialogue for the entire 43 pages of the set. It turned out quite long with more than 1400 words so it took me a few days to write. If you have any feedback, please let me know. I'm adding text and bubbles to the set now. Hope everything will be ready tomorrow. 

I'm back to work then.

P.s: I think I will give you the entire script to read first before making a reward preview post. It will help you avoid spoiling the fun before reading.

- Hanada Yanochi

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P1

N: Have a nice day, sir. Do you know how much you exceed the limit ? That's a very serious violation.

 You'll have to come with us to the bureau for further investigation. Please cooperate ~

What ? No, Nobody cares about your speed or your papers. We are not even from the Traffic Department. 

Nerissa from D.E.E.P reporting in. 

You're under arrest for waving that stuff around in the street. It's causing unnecessary distractions and a dramatic drop in workplace productivity!

C: Hurry up Rissa, we don't have all day !

P2

If you have any complaints then pull it down ! 

Ohh...This amount of precum juice... Any objections, sir ? 

Carrying this dangerous charm in public. Don't you even try the "I'm innocent" act before me.

What ? You want to call your lawyer ? 

 DeniedYou can make one phone call after questioning

P3

Question one: Were you aware that looking this suspiciously handsome without a permit is a criminal offense?

Hey hey, eyes on my face and answer honestly, please. 

Do you want to add more crimes to your indictment?

P4

C: Huh? 

N: Don't smile at the arresting officer. That's obstruction of justice.

Question two: Do you plead guilty to stealing an officer's attention while she was on duty?

Again, A repeat offender. This case is getting worse by the minute.

P5

C: Ehhh ??

N: Last questions: Do you consider not waving at this charming officer a crime?

This one is very important  so think carefully. If you answer it wrong then I'll have no choice but to throw you straight into the holding cell.

P6

Oh my gosh, It became even harder than before. Looking at its full size....

I believe we all have the verdict before you testify anything. Is there anything else you'd like to confess?

P7

Your punishment will consist of spending the rest of the day under close supervision.

We can't just let this little menace cause havoc among innocent pedestrians. It must be neutralized before anything becomes unfortunate.

You think I'm abusing my authority because I'm saying that while showing those two lumps of fat in front of you ? What are you talking about ? Hihi

P8

Again, My eyes are up here, mister

Since you're clearly unable to focus during questioning, I'll have to conduct a few additional tests. 

Strictly for investigative purposes, of course. 

You can do whatever you want to me. However, If I detect even the slightest suspicious movement, you're coming with us okay ? 

P9

Starting with that area ? You can sense my goosebumps on my skin with just a touch? What's wrong with being sensitive ?

And those pubic hair that has been shaved lately? Are you asking for getting arrested now ? 

Ahhh.... If you rub gently that part... no nothing, just keep going ~

P10

Hmmm.... Mhm......

This feels totally different from masturbating myself. 

P11

Ahhhhh !!! Cumming !!!

Haa.... Ha....

P12

Not bad for appetizer but the investigation won't end so soon. We're only getting through the preliminary examination.

Don't ask why I can get naked in the daylight. D.E.E.P. has a few privileges that ordinary departments don't. More than you can imagine.

And trust me, you don't need to know and don't want to know. Just continue ~

P13

Ehhhh !???  

Hm...You look like one of your lifelong dreams just came true . Are men always this simple ?

One little bit of contact and you're already that happy? It's okay for you to investigate this investigating officer even more,you know. 

P14

Just some groping and caress won't do. I even give you permission to be more creative though...

On the other hand, you look awfully happy enjoying this, don't you? It's not fair at all.

P15

If you don't do something then  I'll simply write it down in the report.

Subject displays obvious physiological responses during questioning

What comes after is your own responsibility ~

Hmm.... Mhmm... Good...

P16

Ahh....Ahhh...

Teasing my nipples is cheating ! I can't bear the feeling of my nipples being played and rubbing like this. This feels so weird...

Haaa... Ha.....

P17 

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!

Ahhh.... Ahhhh......

Haa.... Ha.....

P18

Do you even need to pinch and pull it violently like that ? 

Maybe I've been going too easy on you that made you underestimate this investigation.  Big mistake, suspect!

How about a little payback ?  Just enough to remind you who's conducting this interrogation.

P19

Oh my... It seems like it will burst out at any moment. Did you get this aroused after playing with my body like that ? 

Compose yourself ! I'm going to discipline you real hard so that you never ever dare to treat me like that again !

P20

It's even harder and hotter than before ? What is this ? 

Don't tell me our handsome suspects are actually a masochist who is excited for this ? 

Ahahaha, shameless !

P21

Don't worry, D.E.E.P officers are trained for any situation and I'm an exceptionally disciplined officer. 

I'm going to dry you until the very last drop. Be cooperative and It may be considered a plea for leniency.

P22

Cum Cum Cum ~

Do you think I will be merciful and make you feel good after what you just did ? How naive you are ~ 

If you can't endure this, the consequences will be catastrophic. You better hang in there, roger that ? 

P23

Ohhhh !!!! 

P24

You hold it pretty long but unfortunately, that is not enough. What are you gonna do pretty boy ?

It's my fault for being too sexy that you ejaculated faster than usual ? 

Ohohoho, that is not my responsibility to be charming though. 

P25

Fortunately, at D.E.E.P, we believe in rehabilitation. 

I'm gonna give this little boy of yours another chance to retry so you better try your best this time. 

Can you stand it up ? I need to evaluate it again.

P26

Looks, it's all over my belly. Isn't it what you want to see ? Ahahaha

But that is just about the amount not the quality. You think I'm gonna take some sample and analyze it in the laboratory like a nerd ?

Nah, that is just old school. As an outstanding officer like me, I have a direct method that is more efficient. 

P27

Yeah, I'm gonna eat yours whole to check the quality of your seed. Easy to understand right ? 

Nothing personal, Just doing my job for the investigation and staying professional. 

Ahh...this alluring aroma.

P28

Hmm....mmm... a bit salty and bitter. It's intoxicating and dangerous. 

I'm impressed that it's still this healthy after I treated it so roughly.

The real investigation starts here ~

P29

Hm.... Mnn...... Mnnn..... Chuuuuu ~

 How is it ?

Does getting your glan licked and attacked make you uncomfortable ?

P30

*gulp gulp

Ahhh.... haaa.... ha....

I'm keepsh going ...

P31

Hmmn....Mnnm....

Did you feel good? It's trembling so much...

You won't just let it all out this easily, will you ?

P32

Then more deepthroat....

*gulp gulp

Mnm.... Mnn.... 

P33

Ohhhhh !!! Cumming !!!!

P34

Uoehhhhh !!! Hmmmmm !!!!!

Ohhhh !!!! hooooo !!!!

P35

Heee.... Heee.....

The concentration and quantity are beyond all reason ... utterly unimaginable.

And the smell is so strong as well... What an unbelievable male prowess !

P36

You did a great job. Let me blow a kiss to your glan as a bonus reward. 

This lipstick will be the mark of your excellent quality cock. You should be proud.

P37

Ohoho? Still cumming ?? 

Amazing! It even makes my uterus ache in response.

Ahhh.... Haaa...... haaaaa

P38

Haa... haaa.....

Your cum covered my face. Do you know how serious that act is ? 

Don't look away, you have to take full responsibility for your uncontrollable lust. 

Now If you excuse me to have some private time for myself. I don't think I can hold it anymore.

P39

Ohhhooooo !! Ohooooo !!!

P40

Hiiiii !!!! 

Cumming !!! Cumming !!!!

P41

Haa..... Haa......

Why do I have to while playing with myself despite there being a big quality cock ready to use next to me ? 

Keep those mischievous little ideas to yourself. You are on the edge and want a further "raw" investigation, aren't you ?

P42

N: Too bad for you, the officer over there will handle that, not me ~

C: Hey, I haven't heard anything about that !!!

N:  Looks like this case is going to take much longer than I expected. I just hope you'll endure until we get back to the bureau.

P43

Very well.That concludes today's field investigation. Thank you for your cooperation. 

Now you're coming with us.  The rest of the procedure will continue inside the car.

You're already in enough trouble hihi.

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Comments

King Crimson

Nerissa covered in cum 😳💙 That's sooo hot! I'll read everything once I'm home to check if there are no typos! Love the pics 🥺❤️

yanochi

Thank you ! I'm working hard to get it done so that I can start the new work as soon as possible. It took too many days already and I'm starting to worry about my page haha Hope the finished work will do great !

Toastywafflz

Haha I love how Nerissa's playfulness and teasing comes through and how poor Calli gets dragged into it. It seems like this turn of events was unexpected for pretty much everyone. Nerissa's very daring and naughty. Her casually acknowledging that her department can do all of this in broad daylight for some reason is hilarious and, when you think about it, kind of scary. Just what exactly do they do??? Probably my favorite page on the script. I like how there's also a bit of a competitive edge to the teasing throughout, and of course I like the lines where she's talking with "something" in her mouth. I think my other favorite line might be "Nothing personal, Just doing my job for the investigation and staying professional. " Very professional indeed! But I'm not complaining. Mechanically, there's just a few places here and there that would read better with a comma, like the line "But that is just about the amount, not the quality" for example. And adding "an" to the line from page 12 so it says "Not bad for an appetizer." I think glans always has the letter s too. I just learned that the word glans apparently comes from the Latin word for acorn lol, what a visual. Overall though it's solid and everything comes across pretty much as intended. Thanks for the update! I'm really looking forward to the whole set. I enjoy how much the dialogue works into the scenario and the cop angle. I'm also very curious to see what you do with the next part that takes place in the car, I'm looking forward to that as well. I hope you're getting good rest! See ya soon!

yanochi

Thank you for your help ! I already fixed those small flaws following your instructions. The page is not doing so well so I better accelerate everything. I'm glad that my writing can still give you some fun. Now I really want to show you the entire set. It would be even better when you see all the characters in action ! I will see you tomorrow then, back to work now !

Maestroll

Okay, one quick question, how can I join D.E.E.P? I can be their shrink, I guess all the hard works give them more pressure they could handle, I can relieve their stress, mentally and physically ;) Such a great work and dialogue bro! I've been constantly saying this, but I have to say it again, you are a genius XD

yanochi

Why do you need to join the organization while you can interact with all their staff ? Doesn't that make you more convenient ? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Thank you for your compliments. I have finished adding half of the set. There is really too much work that needs to be done but I can say for sure that everything will be done by tomorrow.

Ultra

Great dialogue! I love the police interrogation setting! I think I prefer this new way of presentation, but that's just me

yanochi

Thank you ! Everything will be ready soon ! This is just the first part. I really hope the following set will also satisfy you !