Luigi and the Little Fish (1st Draft) (Patreon)

This is the 1st script for episode 1 of Kingdom Fables. It's based off of Aesop's Fable: The Fisherman and the Little Fish. I did a quick scratch vocal recording, and it should be about 2:30 minutes long. Wanted to get this finished cause I had a voice actor who was interested in working with me, and I think his voice would be a good fit here. He'll be recording that sometime later this week while I finish up the pitch video. I want to lean in the heavy Brooklyn accent direction for Luigi. Those game voices get very grating when used over long dialogue.

I like to write the 1st draft, then thumbnail board it, then do the 2nd draft. There's a lot good writing that requires visuals to work with, so I like having the thumbs for that reason. I've tried writing from boards with no script, and in my experience, the structure suffers and gets lost too easily. Next update for this project will be the thumb boards, some character sheets, and maybe a lip sync test or two once the vocal lines are in.