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Here's the first half of the page 3 redraw! The original had six panels, I wanted to give them a little more air. 

And the original, for those interested in comparing the two. 

You'll note a font change! I'm going to be revising all the pages with the mixed case font. It'll make reading the book easier on the eyes. I'll post some more font-revised pages soon. 


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Halloween Jack

Please excuse me if this has been asked before, but... if one of your party is a cleric, does that make them a holy diver? I'll show myself out.

Brett Kuehner

I like the new art a lot. You are really adding a lot of detail and expressiveness. I'm not sure about the new font, though. I think I'm used to the standard all-caps comic font from decades of reading comics, so the new font just feels wrong to me. When I first saw it, I wondered "Is that a placeholder font until he puts in the real one?" Purely a matter of taste, both fonts are perfectly readable to me, but mark down one vote for the older font (not that this is a democracy, do whatever you think is best, oh Benevolent Dictator)

Auros Harman

With those eyebrows, I'm kind of expecting their hostage to sound like Mel Brooks.