Robotnik's model citizens (Early access) (Patreon)

I  wanted to do a Sonic SatAM style robotization drawing for a while, and  decided to write a short story for it as well! I don't have much  experience in writing so I apologize beforehand if there are any  mistakes in the story. Let me know what you think!

It  felt like it was the most beautiful day ever when two friends Maisie and  Cora decided to wander into the forest a little too far. Their little  trip was cut short when they realized they were in over their heads and  surrounded by Swat-Bots in a matter of seconds. The apprehended Mobian  women were immediately brought into Robotropolis, where even in this  lovely morning the sky was cloudy and black, and air smelled like oil  and chemicals. As Swat-Bots escorted them to their cells, not a single  cell was occupied. They were the only ones. To this day, they had only  heard stories, but they knew the fate that was awaiting them. There was  no escape. Hours of contemplation made them even think that "Maybe it  wouldn't be so bad?" at some point. But it was. Soon they were going to  be stripped off themselves. A prisoner in their own bodies.

And  so it was time, they heard Swat-Bots marching toward them. One unlocked  the cell and commanded them to move out. They abided and Swat-Bots  started escorting them once again. They arrived to their final  destination: the Robotization Chamber. Suddenly a screen turned on, it  was the metallic-hearted Dr. Robotnik. Robotnik took pride in his work,  and wanted to personally witness the process. Creating a new robotic  servant was always a most entertaining activity to him.

"Greetings  ladies" he said in his sinister voice. "I am quite happy to welcome you  to my kingdom. I have no doubt that you two will be model citizens. You  just need a little make-over. Shall we proceed?"

"We will be model citizens, we really appreciate what you do here, you don't need to change us, really!" Maisie said.

Robotnik  smirked. "Ah, it's nice to hear you do, but you'll only be able to  truly appreciate it when you become a part of it. Start with that one!"  Robotnik said looking at Cora. Cora showed no resistance as the  Swat-Bots put her inside the chamber. Maisie was looking at her, and was  surprised at her friend's submissive state. She was looking broken.

"Activate"  Robotnik said from the screen. A yellow light appeared above Cora, and  the machine emitted a humming sound. Her limbs suddenly started to  transform with metallic, clanging noises. Maisie was watching in terror  as her friend became more and more a robotic slave. The transformation  finalized as Cora's head became fully metallic and the yellow light  started to fade. Maisie was eager to hear her friend talk, she was deep  inside expecting her to somehow resist the mind control and be herself  still.

Her dreams were short lived when Cora finally spoke. "All  systems functional. Unit-2799 is online. Awaiting new designation and  orders."

Robotnik quietly laughed. "Excellent. Excellent. Step off  the chamber and go near the prisoner." Then he turned to Maisie.  "Marvelous, isn't she? You may inspect her closely until we reset the  chamber for you, dear. I promise it won't take long. Hehehe!"

Maisie looked Cora in her lifeless, green glowy eyes. "Cora? Say something! This can't be it!""

"Quiet  while waiting for your robotization process, organic. Stay still and do  as you are told." said Cora, in her new robotic voice.

"Is there nothing of you left? Nothing back in the forest we saw just this morning? None of the time we spent together?"

"You  are a prisoner of Doctor Robotnic. Obligatory protocol dictates all  prisoners are to be roboticized. You are to stay quiet and cooperative  until your robotization process takes place. Now do as you are said, I  will not warn you again."

Maisie stepped back from the robot that  once she knew as her friend. She bumped into a Swat-Bot while taking  steps back. The Swat-Bot immediately grabbed Maisie from the back, and  the room was silent for a while until she and Robotnik engaged into eye  contact through the screen.

"The roboticizer is ready" said the robot on the control panel.

Robotnik smirked once again. "Unit-2799, if you please."