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We cut away from the fight since it's not going to be, as at least one reader complained, a 30-episode chocked-full of flashback Naruto style fight. Honestly I tried to watch Naruto once upon a time, and I just couldn't hang in for fights that legit lasted 5 episodes due to all the training flashbacks to justify all the ninja powers. Like, they're teenage ninjas in an anime. You don't have to convince me that they've earned their powers. Just show me the fight. I think I lost interest before finishing a single season.

Instead we cut to Sciona's after work prowling. If that is indeed what she's doing. Which it is. 

Oh, and can I just say, a destination wedding in Cabo? Fuck you, Ian and Clara, unless Ian invented some obscure piece of software that no one's heard about but is critical for back-end inter-bank fungible exchange transactions blah blah blah  compounding crypto tariffs blah blah econobabble etc., and is one of those low-key millionaires and thusly paid for everyone's flights and accomodations, in which case, well done Clara. And Ian also, obviously. But mostly Clara. The other possibility is that this friend group all somehow are in the mid to high six-figure income range, and dropping a few grand out of the blue is truly no big deal. But still, you know they have that one friend who is doing okay... but not that okay, and made it to the wedding on the back of credit cards and took heavy advantage of the complimentary breakfast bar by loading his pockets with toast and packets of jam and a ziplock back of scrambled eggs that he rationed out by cutting a tiny corner off the bag and squeezing it into his mouth like an icing piping bag?

Can you tell my original script about the trip to Cabo was like, 400% longer than what appears on this page and it took me about 8x longer to edit it down to something manageable than it did to write it? 

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Mathew Aaberg

Ignore the haters. 30 page fight scene wooo!.. Or just do you. Your story your rules.

Michael Obert

Agreed, F destination weddings. They only work for young, rich beautiful people with tons of disposable income dedicated to swimsuits and I will stand by that forever. All you need is an open bar anyway 😋

Torabi

Is this how normal humans talk? I am so lost.

Madeleine

So why would it have to be Ian who earns the shitload of money instead of Clara?

Madeleine

By the way, who are Tiny Blue and Purple Persons in the background of panel 1? The room doesn't seem to be *this* big.

BigKumaDM

Hey Dave, since you're talking about your script writing, can we see some of that? id love to see how you plan everything out. It might even help some aspiring writers out there *cough* *cough*.

Madcat6204

When you say you compressed this scene, did you by any chance compress it down to just this page? Because, I will be honest, my tolerance for Sciona kind of dipped way down into the negative numbers after the last scene with her.

Marc Vun Kannon

Smash cut to Math standing on top of a pile of opponents' bodies, saying to Sydney, "Happy now?"

Miyaa

I blame the 1970’s for making Cabo so popular.

Ian Dickinson

I feel like I was listening to some gen Zs with some of the words they were using. Also, Naruto Shippuden is a much better one to go off of (though you lose out on base character information skipping to it).

Swedish Chef

Just curious, "Raconteur" Is that a form used in French speaking Canada ?