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Scary... right?

This is a good "Halloween page", don't you think? HAHAHA

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Jarrod

Just a couple of suggestions. Panel 1 "harshly" instead of "hardly" and "common on this continent" instead of "in" Panel 3: "sorceresses" Panel 4: this one's just a suggestion. Instead of "given to", I'd say "earning this place the title of dark 'continent'"