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Wew, this took longer than expected! Below is a link for a download of the MAC Android and PC version. Feedback form is down below as well! (As a first release I expect there to be bugs bugs bugs and issues so shoot me all feedback you got!)There is bonus content on this first release!Enjoy a very lewd interactive movie after you've played through the initial story via the Hidden Extra menu in the back.(I realize this is pretty obtuse, and I plan to make it more apparent in the future..!)Download Link: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/skmb9fqnvi7ncim/AAAWIfkRrw4H4mveaUX7AY4Pa?dl=0Feedback Form:https://forms.gle/LngQQFQwv23TA3nTAThank you guys for your patience; it means the world to me!

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Tarewulfe

helo! is there the possibility of a mac version in the future?

Dangpa

Edit: Smash That. I found the MAC compile. You should find it in the download link folder now.

ErsatzCoyote

I like the "hidden" extra button. Don't think it needs reworking, tbh. Could just be me.

Dangpa

I think it's a bit maybe too hidden, but it is literally for extra content that I only really plan to have in the Patreon version. This kind of content will be experimental or tangentially related to the plot of the VN.

ErsatzCoyote

I just really like the environmental set-up. We are already cued to look for it, and it fits so well. Idk. Obv. you're call, just consider this a half-assed vote for keeping it the way it is.

Tarewulfe

Thank you so much! ^w^

Dangpa

Thanks <3 I'll definitely consider all feedback when it comes to changing it or not ultimately!

Somnus Soda

It's SO refreshing to have a creator actually do something with UI, despite however small (and not just slightly develop on the text boxes) and while i'll put in the feedback form, it's a weird thing but I'd REALLY like to see the textbox and menus be taken a step further (custom menu, remove the auto and menu buttons at the bottom and make dedicated assets for them).

Dangpa

I definitely have interest in those and if you want ofc submit it into the feedback form! I want to overall change the menus to not just be the defaults, but for the sake of putting out something corners have to be cut to some degree. But over time I plan for that to change.

Damie♥

10/10! I love the art, writing, sound design, and pretty much everything else that's not as simple to categorize. There were minor typos and some strange sentence structures at times, but those were few and far between and something an editing pass can easily remedy. I'm very excited for more of this project.

Howling_Night

I require more, story: fantastic, world: desirable, mc/p: cute af, characters: want to date and marry (also fuck them), character development/background: MORE MORE MORE, conclusion: I can’t wait to see more of this game, keep the good work but don’t over do it, take your time and have fun while doing it (also his name his howl or is it a set name per supporter?)

bunn

This was the best VN I've played in a long while. Whitman was absolutely fantastic; his dialogue and facial expressions were so endearing and precious, and I thought his open book personality was especially charming. I hope we get to see more of him (if not in person, then some more of his acting roles) and the MC's boyfriend too. The extra was honestly so good! It expanded on a loose thread in the story which made it super satisfying, and the scene itself was absolutely outstanding. This absolutely made my day and I'm very excited for the next update!

Somnus Soda

Just don't burn yourself out too, finishing reading through what's out there, you got a lot of good work but it must've been a LOT of work.

Dangpa

Thank you! Yeah I wanna get an editor potentially for those kinds of things at the very least, but I may for the time being try and do those passovers with feedback from people. Hopefully I'll open a discord and people can also provide in there too.

Dangpa

Thank you! And I do plan to have fun with it, especially with the extra content. As for the naming, that's just a fun coincidence lol

Dangpa

Haha, I'll try my best not to. The hard part was honestly trying to initially figure out what I wanted out of it and making it look somewhat pretty (all while either being sick or having something else going on). Now that I'm on track and things have settled a bit it should be easier to produce updates and such.

Nimrax

Gallery section. For all your awesome CGs and music. Gimme gimme gimme~

Dangpa

It'll be a part of the extra section! Anytime there's a lewd scene that section will be more expansive and have all those scenes playable

Nimrax

Can't. Wait. * gritting intensifies * In the mean time, I'mma just open the dream scene and listen to the music on loop.

ErsatzCoyote

Just got all the way through it, it was pretty fuckin' great. I do have to admit that it took me a bit longer than it should have to recognize that the idiosyncratic word choice and phrasing was a perhaps reflection of the main character rather than just a purely weird writing style on your part. Assuming I'm right on that front, I definitely appreciate the job you've done developing a voice for the characters we've seen already. Genuinely, can't wait for more. :)

ChrisBee

Jesus what a first impression. This is some crazy quality for a first build. I'm hooked! the writing was natural and flowed so well, the world building peaked my interest and was well developed during an engaging conversation, and I love the directing of shots using a comic style panel to show character reactions and world props.

Dangpa

Such a motivating reply! Thank you 😩. I hope to keep up with these expectations with future builds

Aced

This was such a great demo! I honestly found myself super interested in the setting and man, Whitman made me smile so much. Your writing's great and I like the personalities you've shown so far. I'm absolutely loving the style too, the comic book-esque panels are really cute and using them to show expressions of characters is a great idea. Can't wait for more, you got me hooked! Though one thing I've been wondering: Was it intentional that you sometimes spelled Helward Hel Ward or was that just a typo? So long story short: Great work, take your time with it to make it into the amazing VN you want it to be. ♥

TheCopilot

That was minty-freaking fresh! I loved it. For a "Demo" it tells more in the short chapter and extra than a lot of VN do with chapter after chapter. For a first release, you really knocked this out of the park. Heck, I even want to know more about the zombie cliffhanger.