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Laura's first steps off the boat onto the Basitin island, and her getting the traditional welcome for a Keidran, suggested by DarthKeidran!

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AlaricLives87

And then it was Alaric who took her shopping for appropriate attire and they became fast friends through their shared interest

Isaiah James

i like the farily odd parents reference.

- K e i s e r - (TK is my life!)

this sketch looks like a small complete addition to the original comic and it's pretty cool! Thanks for your work, Tom!

Glenn Sellers

Never being one to watch that show, I don't know the reference.

DiDiDi-X

What a pleasant way to greet someone as they arrive.

Dave Ostroske

The rules written for their convenience, not ours.

Kapłan Sekty Pieczarek

Basitin jerk: "Look another Keidran..." Basitin racist: "Ugh, they're even worse than banished" Basitin jerk: "Yeah, I still remember that Keiser runt. He was crying like a baby! Pitiful!" Laura threw the law book at the jerk Basitin jerk: "Ow! What the?!" Laura: "Don't you say that about Keith!" Basitin racist: "Heh, looks like that poor excuse of Basitin is sleeping with everyone!" Basitin jerk: "That's it! I'm gonna make a carpet from your skin!" 15 minutes later, two Basitins are lying on the ground, one is unconscious. Everyone is shocked that the small vixen defeated two guards. Basitin racist: "Who... teach you... that?" Laura: "The Basitin who you made fun of"

Isaiah James

Jorgen Von Strangle is whos in charge of cosmo and wand,timmy turners fairy "god" parents,Jorgen Von Strangle sounds kinda like Arnold schwarzenegger so instead of "the rules" its "Da rules"

AlaricLives87

In another AU where they share him X)

AlaricLives87

Because nobody has suggested it yet, obviously. A polyamorous three-way between Keith, Nat, and Laura seems easier to grasp a fanservice idea than Alaric, Keith, and Laura living in blissful codependency where Keith stays in Alaric’s room Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, Laura gets him Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday. Sundays they go out on a picnic on the highest hill of the Basitin Isles and…. I think I got carried away with this 😊

E Ranger

Nice Fairly Odd Parents reference.

DarthKeidran

<b>STORY-COMMENT™</b> Time. Space. Reality. It's more than a linear path. It's a prism of endless possibility. Where a single choice can branch out into infinite realities, creating alternate worlds from the ones you know. Each a reflection of what could have been. Some heroes will rise, others will fall. And nothing will be the same. I am the Watcher. I am your guide through these vast new realities. Follow me and dare to face the unknown, and ponder the question... What if? In a fit of confusion, a Keidran left her betrothed. Her lover, a banished Basitin, scorned and betrayed, left to seek the leader of the humans, and his only way back home. The Keidran followed after, only to be enslaved by another tribe, then freed by the very leader her lover sought. After regaining her freedom, she traveled to the land of her lover. But in another universe, a single choice changed the course of history. *Bonk!* Laura: <“Ow! What, why?!”> Lynn: {“ahem”} <“Please refer to page one, subsection 3, paragraph 32 for your infraction miss. And please, do put on those robes before you do so.”> Laura: <“Huh? This is written in human? I can’t read this”> Lynn: <“My apologies, wrong manual.”> *Thonk!* KO! A few days gone by, Laura had begun to settle into her new, more modest lifestyle, when she another Basitin, a friend of her lover’s, encountered her on the street. At first, she was startled, fearing she had broken one of the 3,720 statutes in the book that had struck her head a few dozen times, however, he thanked her for caring for his friend on the mainland, and assured he’d help if she needed anything. Alaric: <“…however… you do need to be more careful not to break the law.”> *holds up a Basitin Law book* Laura: *flinches* Alaric: <“Don’t worry dear. I’m not gonna hit you over the head with it.”> *lightly taps it on top of Laura’s head, before handing it to her* (Whispered) <“You forgot your ankle coverings today. There’s a pair inside this for you.”> <i>A few years later:</i> Keith: {“Stupid Keidran always walking around naked. I swear, if I get banished because Kathrin or Flora walks off this boat without a shred of clothes on, I might hire Natani to finish them off.”} Natani: <“What about me?”> Keith <“Nothing.”> There! That's the moment that created a new universe. When given the opportunity to adequately warn his party to dress more modestly than they ever had before, Keith disregarded it. He knew he wouldn’t be banished again if they were Naked, but he didn’t think of the possible ramifications. Kathrin (Au Naturale): “It’s so nice to finally get off that…” Whump! Flora (Au Naturale): “Why did that Keith throw a book at Ka…” Bap! Trace: *Eye twitching, forehead veins popping, crimson hair* It was at this moment, the guards knew they %#*€&@ up. A mushroom cloud enveloped the island, spelling the end for most basitins, interrupting the plans set in motion by the mask Ephemural, and accelerating the plans of the mask Chaos. I observe all that transpires here, but I do not, cannot, will not interfere. For I am the Watcher.

DarthKeidran

I love this! I really want to see a sketch of Keith training Laura on hand to hand combat.

DarthKeidran

Surprisingly small rule book for the quantity there apparently are. Maybe the book is bigger on the inside.

DarthKeidran

Headshot! Admittedly, it’s my fault that part was added. I remarked I was worried it was going to go that way, and it did as a result.

DarthKeidran

A piece of me hopes this is meant to be what really happened to her, but then I depresso at the thought she would have come that whole distance thinking he may have already made it back, only to learn he’s still banished. It makes you wonder. Did Keith ever discuss his banishment more in depth with Laura?

DarthKeidran

Lynn: *yeets Laura into the sea* “Go on, swim back from whence you came until you can be dressed properly.”

DarthKeidran

My thoughts exactly when I saw how Tom drew that section.

DarthKeidran

I did not catch that reference either, for the same reason as Glenn. That is a funny reference though.

DarthKeidran

I wouldn’t mind more sketches of Alaric with Laura while she was on the island. We got the one that depicts him meeting her, but did they hang out together more? I imagine Alaric would have wanted to know more about what happened to Keith.

DarthKeidran

I didn’t catch the reference until someone else mentioned it. I think it’s great.

silver dragonia

this looks great and i am sure dear laura would love to explore the island and the different towns villages and cities on the island i know i would i dunno why i want to say this but in 4 days it's my birthday and i am sure someone would suggest something as good as this while thomas would draw the suggestion if it won being picked but i do hope someone suggests either zen and natani sharing a bunkbed together in the goodmorning series and we still see natani sleeping heavily as she's still not a morning girl while maybe zen has trouble waking up or someone suggest keith peeks on sire adelaide taking a bath in her royal bathroom and she spots him and invites him in to embarrass him for peeking on his king and as they share the hottub together he asks her how she knew

silver dragonia

i bet she's strong even though she looks weak as keith taught her that technigue is as important as strength for example the way you would do things in combat could make it feel super easy even you're not that strong

KaiserDunk

All that, and the blanket still doesn’t cover her ankles.

RivCA

More like light speed! Damn, nuking a whole island over a small infraction? That's harsh!

Dave Ostroske

More likely all the words are smaller!

feralcat52

I'd like to see that myself, and possibly the actual incident of Laura knocking out the guards!

Adamas

I think you needed a few more zeros....