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I don't have to listen to you, small voice!

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Alex Rahr

One suggestion 'just show up at court' followed by 'just show up though.' scans the wrong way to me. Lose the first 'just' maybe? No typos spotted.

Maxlex

Hmm. I seem to remember noticing that before... I must have gotten distracted before fixing it. I've replaced the whole first phrase with 'attend court'. It contrasts with the casual 'just show up' which isn't done.