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Rewrite the Stars VI || Page 04 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-07-03 21:20:54
Edited:
2025-11-15 05:30:20
Imported:
2026-06
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Chasing rainbows.

I was gonna take two weeks off, but I managed to squeeze in enough time to get this page done.

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SreznoJIG07

Sigh 😔 So it was all just a dream I should’ve guessed 😢

Day500

Refresh the page. It usually works for me

C.E. Zim93

Nice page. Everyone was happy until the last couple of panels. Yeah Lynn is concerned when her daughter said invite the family. Now I'm curious. Can't wait for more 🙂

Silvester Rodriguez

They Have A Daughter & Lynn Was Having A Dream The Whole Time During The Ride Bus By Falling Asleep. 🚎 & Also Wishing You A Happy 4th Of July.🎆🎇🧨

Alex Ellison

When you Rewrite the Stars it has its consequences Lynn

Moss1998

Apparently she can extend her arms in her dreams! XD

Antn100Q

I can feel pain both now, and incoming ;-;

TriangularCipher9000

And here comes reality. ☹️ I wonder if Lynn and Lincoln are struggling to live independently without their family. Or at least Lynn is, and Lincoln managed to graduate from high school through online classes and is probably working a full-time job. But as we know, Lynn wasn't really that absorbed with education and she even admitted in the last chapter. So, she's trying to make it as a pro soccer player without any education. But fails all the time. Not really a good page to start with before Independence Day. 😅

Rack44

Yep, it was a dream. Too good to be true. Dang it! Oh well, when the next page is ready, let’s how our two lovers are really doing.

I.O. Penner

Aww, no. The last panel is where the sparkles fade out - it was a dream, after all. Well, it was certainly a happy reprieve, as brief as it was. Just keep chasing that rainbow, Lynn - there's a pot of gold waiting at the end. It just now becomes a matter of how long it takes to get to that pot of gold. But thank you, Hero, for this unexpected update! What a great way to start this three-day weekend!

Muze Clark

Those last three panels may well be the biggest gut punch of all. I definitely wasn't expecting that bit about inviting the family.

PropellerDoggo

I knew it but still felt devastated. Like goddammit you didn't need to kill her in those last 3 panels

Anthony Nguyen

I knew it was too good to be true...

Tuckster1999

And there is the first shoe to drop, not anything too devastating or overly sad just being brought back down to Earth. I just had a feeling that what we were seeing of their life was a little too picture perfect. I think they will end up being happy and start a family but that not really a possibility or a priority at the present. I have a feeling their daughter will exist by the end of the series and honestly if she is in Hero’s plans it is better that we are along for their journey as expecting parents than their daughter just magically appearing out of the blue. Now we get to see what they are really up to. Even though Lynn looks tired and dejected, I think they are still happy and content with where they are in their relationship and life. I will patiently wait for more after your finals Hero. Here’s to seeing Lynn and Lincoln hopefully smiling again real soon.

UnderratedHero

She woke up when her dream made her remember the family she left behind

UnderratedHero

Thanks, but I'm not american, so I don't celebrate 4th of July

UnderratedHero

We'll learn more about their living conditions in the upcoming pages.

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh, boy. A new page for the comic... ( 1 Minute Later ) 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 Okay, I simply cannot tell either that was a dream or perhaps maybe it might be a memory or something. But either way, I'm not sure where this is exactly pointing to. I just hope that it was all a memory or maybe just a tad a dream. But in the meantime... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Comes Out ) ( Straw Sticking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe ) ( Speaking Through The Straw In The Sand ) By the way, Hero, nice job. Way to do a new page before the Fourth Of July. Can't wait to see what happens next.

UnderratedHero

Yeah, it's a hard cross to bear, but they'll do their best to keep going. They won't give up on their love for each other.

UnderratedHero

We can still get a good picture of what they might be going through judging by what she wishes was true.

UnderratedHero

I think you were one of the few that saw it coming a mile away lol It still hurts to think she'd wake up and realize it was all a dream.

UnderratedHero

Yeah, even knowing it was coming, it's still a gut punch to see her wake up from that.

C.E. Zim93

Oh wow. Few said in the server it was a dream. Didn't know it was true or not. Looking at the page I can see now. You got me there though I read the page kinda quick. Thanks for clarifying

Muze Clark

I was definitely one of the ones being annoying about it.

UnderratedHero

Thanks! I can't wait for my finals to be over and for Lynn and Lincoln to live a happy life like they deserve.

UndeadRunt

I saw the discussions about it being a dream, oh Jesus this makes me sad, still can't wait for another page! ❤️

Zachary Thompson

Well I hope the child part is or will come true

Kevin

I honestly thought the dreamlike visual effects around them were more a metaphor, just emphasizing how good it all felt. I... man this chapter is gonna be rough. Even knowing things were gonna go south, I thought they had these years of good moments at least. I am so not ready.

Marilu 15

Eso es jugar con mis emociones que cruel eres

DarkHammer

I just hope she doesn't have any medical problems.

Ashley Uh... Oops

After rereading the first 3 pages a few times I felt something was off. And then I finally paid attention to the borders. I was hoping it was from Lynn's pure joy, but it was all for naught. It was like my guts just fell out, followed by a broken heart. I'm guessing this is still going to be darkness before light for quite a while. Thank you for the update, and here's two thumbs up for your finals!

Happychap2628

Oh no, just when things were looking good, we now have a flash back of the tough times in their lives.

GoldwolfThePyrate .

Just a dream… OR perhaps a "vision." A vision from a near future where they are gifted with a daughter and are reunited with their family, who now embrace their love. She did mention that she KEPT having THIS dream…..

Jayden

Ok i just finished reading the first 4 pages that are available to me (im not a menber also im young so im broke AF) and i was happy to see them happy at first but seeing reality cut in hit me like a gunshot at the end of the last chaper there lives seemed to be takeing the better and i think it has i suspect linclon is a jenetor at a restarant or something and has pased college meanwhile lynn is in college thay both live in the flat that scotish guy got them (i frogot his name) and he is raiseing there Daguter while lynn is within college trying to help suport her family. I suspect things for the first few pages events will be fine but from what i can tell atleast it seems things will go Darker down the line. I suspect how the loud family finds them is probably iver just bumping into them on accident on a vacation to where linclon and lynn now live A.K.A the U.K i can see some really big conflicts happening here even darker situations like imagen rita and lynn.srs reactions to the nightmare before them espeshily when it comes to lynn and lincolns child i can see both rita and lynn.sr going insane and at some point thay might try to "Fix" things bye first trying to kill linclon and lynns Daguter so theres no proof of the incest relashinship ever happening and thay could try to separat linclon and lynn again bye force to try i will say again "fix" them that way just like in the dinner tabel scene in the last chapter as lynn.sr said "make the family normal again" as also rita whold put it i could see the older siblingd luan luna lori leni and so on take linclon and lynns side and try to protect lynns and linclons child eho i will call sport witch whold only drive the perants more made and despret to "FIX" things not knowing its to late to go back to how it used to be i can see this story going on for lots more chapters. Another thing i hope to see in this story is the loud perants while prospective in more depth i can see a situation where lynn.sr looks at sport seeing a younger lynn and hesitat and rita being the more violent one since thats how thay are in canon. Hero if you see this coment what you think!

Jayden

Sorry.

MR.FAN

I almost died of mixed emotions rn. Called that over reacting. But still, it's nice to be able to read again. I have been busy with life lately (p.s I just don't read rewrite the stars only, I read a lot of comics and mangas, and I love to be able to read this. It's that I am dying to know what happened next. I like it. Keep it up vro.

Boogie Man

Never expected all that build up... to be a dream. DAMN YOU UnderratedHero! Why you gotta do that😥(This is in no way hate towards you)

Nicholas Prestileo

I am now confused, but curious on what will happen (I’m broke to afford the 5 dollar membership 😭)

Everyman1991

Whoa whoa WHOA!!! Lynn Sr. and Rita Loud are not perfect parents true. But they wouldn't try to kill Lincoln and Lynn's daughter, that's way too dark and out of character for both of them. It's shown in Chapter 5 that they still love Lincoln and Lynn despite their incest love towards each other. They wanted to put a stop to their relationship to protect them. In Michigan, USA romance between blood related siblings is illegal, they don't want them to get in trouble.

Mark John Banzon

Literally that would missed up their genetic DNA for that kid. Hard truth reality and even closer related cousins of inbred would fk up their kid too.