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Miguel Perez Canché

Hay cabron se hizo canon de golpe ahora sí está haciendo el cómic lo más rápido posible 😱

UndeadRunt

Well that is ominous, they gonna have a baby on chirstmas? Oh man I can't wait to find out, maybe they get found by the family on christmas, or does something bad happen? Oh the possibilities! As always good work, keep it up and take care of yourself Hero!

curiouscritter19

Are we gonna get a Rick and Morty reference (incest baby) 🤣

Eyedata18

Such a great Christmas gift to each other. They both deserve so much love.

xWairus

4 page in less than 2 week , but i dont expect that page

Rack44

Oh boy, here we go!

I.O. Penner

Very short, but very powerful. I just love how Lincoln and Lynn intertwine their hands together as they come together as one. This is such a beautiful scene unfolding here, Hero! My heart just squealed with delight and then some.

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page of the comic! My favorite! ( 1 Minute Later ) Oh...my... ( Gangnam Style Music Playing ) ( Looking At The Page With Awe And Excitement ) They did it...they really did it. I'm so proud, I could just... ( Dancing to the Gangnam Style Music In Celebration ) Okay, that's what I call creative and beautiful. Can't wait to see what happens next. And I have a feeling... Things are definitely going to get better and more beautiful for Lynn and Lincoln. But in the meantime... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )

Caleb

Hero, I have been a fan of Rewrite for a while now and I must say i am very impressed by your ability to carry a compelling story. I went into it with uncertainty and almost a form of fear of ridicule for finding suck a topic interesting, yet despite this I found the premise to compelling to ignore. I've read the first 5 chapters at least 11 times now and am in awe of how many compelling messages you've included (be true to yourself, some of the best things in life require taking risks, etc.) and how real you managed to make this story feel. At no point during my readings was I able to find a point of discomfort or disinterest as it was so well written. I will admit that these last few panels have had me worried as the concept of them having a child has never sat right with me. Despite this I hold faith that, based on the quality of the prior chapters, you will still make the proceeding story jaw dropping. While I wasn't a loud house fan going into this and still don't really consider myself to be one now, your comic is one of if not my single favoirte piece of literature I have ever read. I'm more excited than ever to see where you take this masterpiece as I'm sure it will be glorious. There is SO much more I want to and could say like how I feel the messages of this comic have positively impacted the course of my life and encouraged me to pursue my dream so matter how impossible they seem (singing/music) but I've already rambled on way too long lol. All I'll say is, thank you Hero for creating this incredible, stunning, inspiring, and carefully written work of art and I can't wait for what cones next. p.s. I saw you study architecture how's that been going? (It's one of my interests for college alongside singing [thanks to this comic might i add] and am curious how challenging it is lol)

C.E. Zim93

Very nice. Making love while interlocking hands is sweet and definitely beautiful ❤️ Those 2 won't forget that night for a long time. This will lead to something greater. I believe it.

Zack Jason

Question: If the chapter is finished, will all pages be publicly available or will each page reveal itself one by one like with every new page release?

Jhmilam

Very Beautiful scene Hero I love that Lincoln and Lynn Intertwine their hands together and whisper how much they Love each other with a lot of passion. They gave each other the best Christmas gift ever!

EXELLISDUMB

Uhh is my patreon broken or did hero accidentally make this page public

Tuckster1999

Let’s be honest they probably won’t stop at one. Also I do wonder what is Lynn’s dream outside of raising a family, considering that sport dream probably goes out the window if she has a kid. (Besides other factors too)

Silvester Rodriguez

They Do Love Each Other Merry Christmas I Wonder This Will Happen When The Time Comes For Lynn & Lincoln Loud Until The Truth Is Revealed Really Very Soon.

UnderratedHero

En Argentina entramos en las "vacaciones de invierno" de la universidad jajajaja por eso

UnderratedHero

Well, Christmas is the next day in the story, so it's mostly just to imply it's their biggest gift for each other. Also cause I wanted the snow globe to shake with the, um, movements.

UnderratedHero

Not necessarily a reference, but we might be getting an incest baby

UnderratedHero

Yeah, but people only remember when I take too long to update lol

UnderratedHero

Once all pages are finished, the free pages will become publicly available at a rate of 2 or 3 per week or something like that.

UnderratedHero

Well, they've been talking about their dreams and what they want to accomplish in previous pages.

UnderratedHero

Even in the throes of passion, they search for each other's hands. That's all I needed to show, I feel.

xWairus

lincoln is not she's biggest dream now?

UnderratedHero

Thank you! I think the hands were all I needed to show in this case

UnderratedHero

They're definitely going, and they'll definitely be co— Nah, I can't do it

UnderratedHero

Thank you so much for your kind comment! I'm doing this to try to give everyone an interesting story to read and enjoy. Regarding your final question, I'm about to graduate. It's an incredible career, but I have to say, it's incredibly time consuming and very demanding, intellectually and physically (gotta stay up all night making models!). Not for the faint of heart. Consider it if you're passionate about it, but don't do it just if you think it's a good career to make money or for the "honor" of being an architect. If you don't love architecture, it's a miserable thing to study.

Caleb

Thank you for the advice, I may have to reconsider the profession now lol. I want to pursue music but needed a stable option for income as music isn't exactly a reliable career choice. May have to reconsider my major now lol. Glad all is going well for you. Just keep doing the amazing work you're already doing Hero. 😊 oh and about this page in specific, it's incredible how much can be said in these solace moment of life. How many words can be exchanged not through physical writing, but the absence of it, the silence of the moment. So little is said and yet so much is conveyed. Peak writing as always.

Tuckster1999

Well, I mean I think everyone’s significant other is a component of their dreams by default. I only got back into reading the pages on release with in the last couple of weeks, been busy with real life, so I could have missed somethings. Have reread the last few of pages before the affection pages. I know there is the dojo she wants to open since the athlete dream seems likely no matter what dead in the water due to a multitude of factors (exposure, Lynn’s current age compared to breakthrough age for even female players, etc.) All I’m saying that Lynn is going to want a dream outside of just raising a family with Lincoln.

AceValor0520

That was a really nice one 👌. Keep up the great work 😁.

Kevin

What a perfectly sweet way to cap this scene off. Making precious Christmas memories, huge relationship milestone, this chapter was always good but this and the last page have been some of my favorites in the whole series. You're art is stellar an always getting better, and the writing conveys so much in so few text boxes or speech bubbles. Can't wait for more

LynxTheAnimator

Gosh I love this comic! Im so excited to see where it goes. To write something that had me at the edge of my seat sometimes. This is very nicely written!

The FoE Three

Just out of curiousity, will you make NSFW pages of this scene?

SreznoJIG07

They truly deserve each other ❤️

LucoaKanroji_2A_Hashira

Not complaining i’m whatever is the opposite of complaining i got more story in a short amount of time so i am happy. I only dread the story is coming to a end

Rack44

Also, nice detail in the snow globe shaking due to Lincoln and Lynn making love.

Saverio Olvera

So um will this be a short chapter for chapter 6 I think and second question will there be any conflict in the story after Christmas

Everyman1991

Underrated Hero would you consider making an uncensored version of Lynn and Lincoln's love making on Baraag or Pixvi? Javisuzumiya already made a love scene between Lincoln and Sam for his fan comic: It's (Not) Your Fault. I would cry with happiness if you did and posted it on Pixivi and Baraag. But it's your choice

Everyman1991

I would fight Nickelodeon to get this fan comic adapted into a 2 part movie. It's THAT good!

Everyman1991

I guess they'll both need a shower in the morning after...that 😁.