Show Girl — All revised chapters (Patreon)

I’ve spent the last week or so going through all the revised chapters I wrote for Show Girl, editing, fiddling, fixing errors, and so on, and I’m now ready to call the main text done.

I’m still working on the epilogue, so that isn’t included here, but for anyone who’s been planning to read or re-read, here’s what ought to be the final text of the revised original story.

If you spot any typos, continuity errors, general mistakes, etc. I would really appreciate hearing about them :)

I’d also appreciate it if you could tell me if the epub renders poorly on your device. I don’t have an e-ink reader, just my phone, so I’m looking for confirmation that, for example, the bold text used for text messages is clear and easy to read.

edit: made a few minor formatting changes

edit May 2023: added a (very rough) HTML version