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OTV: Chapter 3: Page 84 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-06-27 11:56:09
Edited:
2019-07-09 18:45:13
Imported:
2026-06
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Now we're back with the trio.

Going to be introducing a few new characters.  A couple may already seem familiar.

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Daishi

Look at MK being conscientious, aww. Interested to see how obvious it is that they're....elsewhere. ngl the back of my mind is hoping there's still a "we're okay!" hug :3 -- The third panel feels kind of weird with the massive speech bubble tails; have you considered using colored bubbles (like the outer line for it) to indicate who's talking, rather than having tails clear across the panel? Hope you're doing well ^.^

Gam3rPro64

So Asriel found a bunch of total complete strangers nearby in the middle of nowhere and claims them to be friendly?! Something tells me this might not end well...

AbsoluteDream

Haha, they're still trying to be optimistic. What will finally make them realize it's not 'home'? I've been considering alternate ways to get rid of the tails to reduce clutter. I've actually been playing with the idea of just adding a tiny face of the character, making different expressions like the dialogue boxes in the game. It would certainly make it easier for multiple characters, or characters offscreen. XD

Gam3rPro64

I can only hope that Asriel makes the right decisions. He is a prince after all!😄

Daishi

haha awww, the idea for little faces sounds adorable! Though, if they're on screen already, wouldn't that take up similar amounts of space? Sounds like a great idea for off-screen characters making small comments or w/e though :o

Jeeley

Oh I like the addition of the faces to the text boxes. And is that the Snowden bunny and a Whimsun I see? ^^

A_Xenomorph

I also love the text box faces =D Very adorable!