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OTV: Chapter 4: Pages 108-119 (WIP) (Patreon)

Published:
2019-12-20 13:20:03
Edited:
2019-12-31 01:39:18
Imported:
2026-06
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Content

Previous Sketches 

*EDIT* I just added the last four pages of the chapter ^^ *EDIT*

I'm not quite sure if it's better to post these sketches in one post, or should I make an individual post for each one and then edit them as I go?

Hope it's clear enough!

---- Below is a small summary of what's happening in the pages----

So, we find out what has been going on in the normal world of Undertale while the kids were gone.

Papyrus finds an echo flower with a different echo. (still deciding the best way to visually show the echoes, heh)

Flowey/Asriel and MK have a bit of a misunderstanding, MK is feeling a bit jealous and accidentally uses ice powers against Asriel (not sure how clear that is in the sketches).

Asriel opens up a bit to MK.  Everything seems to be working out when they hear an odd echo.

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Comments

Zw

I might have spotted a bit of a typo in the last page, first bubble. "Well that's the first" maybe you meant "Well that's a first" unless my english is failing me. Anyway liking were this is going so far, it didn't cross my mind that Frisk and Azriel would frequently talk about the events prior to the comic behind MK's back and he would take it the wrong way but it makes sense. Don't think I've said it before but you do a REALLY good job with facial expressions man. Quite the wide range of expressions from multiple characters on these pages and you hit them all so well (undyne's face looks a bit off i think but it might just be the angle/distance) looking forward to seeing these colored!

A Wild Magikarp

“How bad can it be?” Oof... hows the attempted genocide of the entire world, psychological torture of children, and attempted erasure of history sound MK?

Jeeley

Oh wow I'm really loving where the story is going, the use of the echo flowers is so unique! How are you finding this kind of update structure compared to the weekly one?

MarkSensei

Not sure why, but my comment was removed from this post. Anyway, to answer your question (again), I think this format is good since I don't have to scroll down with my eyes closed to find the chapter that I've read to. On the other hand, reading a series of images on Patreon feels a little awkward as I have to adjust the zoom for each page and then scroll down. It works better when you can scroll down the main Patreon page and read from there since the size of the images make the text readable without having to adjust anything. So posting each finished page like you've done so far is better in my opinion. I don't mind sketches being dumped in a series like this at all though, the more content the better! 😁

Zw

heck not attempted, he did kill everyone multiple times across an untold number of resets before frisk even came into the picture. must be horrible to have that on his conscience.

AbsoluteDream

Oh, that's frustrating! Thank you for taking the time to retype everything though! Oh yes, I've been thinking maybe I should pin the last page I posted publicly on top so that new patrons don't need to scroll through the new pages to find where they're at. And thank you for your input! I'll continue posting each page individually once they're complete.

AbsoluteDream

Thank you very much! Well, it is nice to already have a sketch done once I get to the next page, heh. Aside from that, it's not too different for me. ^^ I'll probably make a poll or something asking what everyone else would prefer.

AbsoluteDream

No, I think you're right. Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! And thank you very much for the kind comments. ^^

Asriel Dreemurr

Golly! This story gets better and interesting every time I read each page. I look forward to seeing how Mk and I can get Frisk back and how we could go back home.

MarkSensei

The method you're describing is the one I am currently using myself, but it's also one I find cumbersome. Thanks for taking your time to type all of this though, that's really nice of you! 😁

Daishi

I really love this format of dropping whole swathes of content, even in sketch format. It lets me enjoy the story concepts on the first run through, and then adore the visual styling when the final product is released, while being able to notice little differences from start to finish. Love the use of the echo flowers between worlds, and the conflict between Asriel & MK so closely following MK's injury & Asriel's subsequent transformation is a nasty little gut punch that thankfully gets resolved in time for things to not get *much* more out of hand. You're doing a great job, thank you for everything you do.

AbsoluteDream

Thank you so much for your input! And for your kind comments! ^^