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Cover any good (feedback welcome) (Patreon)

Published:
2026-06-09 09:12:41
Imported:
2026-06

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What do we think?Could something be better here, perhaps?

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Rod

I list these things below knowing it is just one person's opinion and I don't mean to be harsh. You did ask for constructive criticism so I provide these suggestions with the best intentions. 1. Not sure if you are going for embarrassment here. To me they look like they just ran around the block and their face is red from exertion. To fit better with the tag line at the bottom, perhaps a more gentle, shy facial expression (like they are hiding a secret) would work better. 2. The close up, symmetrical "portrait" of the MC (I assume, Tamara) looks too much like a mug shot. 3. I assume you put "secret" in bold font to stand out from the hair, but conceptually wouldn't a person's secret be in a subtle font (almost hidden by their hair)? No one wants their secret displayed in bold. 4. The tag line at the bottom, for proper english, should say "A funny, warm, and quietly moving story".

Sophia

I think instead of writing secret bigger maybe cursive without those 2 lines would be better. *Though im not sure* Maybe for the make up i think the purple ish lipstick looks a bit much Maybe a slight pink would be better? And background i feel like would be more fitting to be a bit darker as with the storys background Maybe a mixture out of purple or a sort of street light in the night or a roof light in a room during night. Outside of this idk I do like it though