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Out of Luck (Page 25 & 26) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-06-20 00:00:14
Edited:
2023-06-26 21:25:32
Imported:
2026-06
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Oh yeah, that artifact.

Amelia seems to have had some action of her own, and hey, Uibiddi is here!

[EDIT] Fixed some typos (Thank you b l)

[EDIT] Fixed MORE typos,.,. (Thank you Skonris)

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Parkoumancer28

...Wait a minute, I just realized Daryl's ship is still floating. Does that thing have some crazy autopiloting or??

Strikerman

...is it okay if i mention a couple of typos in the text?

Strikerman

page 25: bottom-left panel, the i in "i'm" isn't capitalized, but the I right after is capitalized "And I learned" page 26: top-left, the bubble at the top should end with an "it" ("[...] the one who holds it...") page 26: 3rd panel, "I guess we both turned it on by accident huh" -> it might be the font but the "we" looks like it's capitalized; missing a period at the end; there should be a comma after "accident" to accompany the "huh" sorry if this is too nitpicky

Felino

Naw it's fine, english is not really my first language so i tend to make a lot of mistakes, aaand i just tend to be bad at writing in general, so it's good to have these spell checks early on I'll be fixing them in a bit

Skonris

"learned about our finding" doesn't make much sense. "learned about what we found" or "learned about our treasure/loot" would make more sense (also the "i" should be capitalized). On the next page where it's being described as "high tech porn" the text is going outside of the word bubble.

Felino

Ah thank you for that too 💦