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I was struggling to get the pacing and panel count to work on the next page, when it suddenly ocurred to me that, since I needed to update t

I was struggling to get the pacing and panel count to work on the next page, when it suddenly ocurred to me that, since I needed to update the text in panel 5 anyway, I could basically move the first panel of page 53 back to 52. Tightens everything up nicely and I think adds a lot to this page as well.

Alright! I'm back to work on page 53 and 54! Can't wait to share!

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Brad Kitts

Meg ain't about to let Ellie win.

Michael Kehoe

Oh my that is soon much better. Definitely shows a little more attitude adjustment hehe

Ian Price

oooo yes this pacing is good.

engagecrayfish0

she’s like ok now I find it cute bite it again 😂

kou32

hehehe, poke the dom and see what happens XD

Katt Wallingford

Was Ellie biting her lip in the next to last panel originally? That's either new, or I missed it the first time.

Amber7

This shtick works better with a flogger, but I guess a crop is easier to bite down on - and she's already ruined it, so no big loss there... ;)

George

"GAH!" We hear ya, Ellie. We hear ya.

Bruce Burding

Last panel definitely makes it more intriguing 🤔

Ethan

Is this a “drop it you loose” kinda game?