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I don't know if this page plays the way I hoped. It's leading to something, I swear, but I hope it doesn't feel like filler. I do love Ellie

I don't know if this page plays the way I hoped. It's leading to something, I swear, but I hope it doesn't feel like filler. I do love Ellie's expression in the last panel, though.

*UPDATES - Never change, comment section. Thank you to everyone that pointed out the problems with this page. I am much happier with it now! I Added the riding crop to panel 3, changed Meg in the final panel so she doesn't look like she's smacking Ellie, and made a few other small changes Kept the original page up for comparison.

Moving on to the next page! Have a great weekend everyone!

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NovaWinter

I swear Meg is about slap her. I don’t know. 🤷‍♂️

CREE8

Ellie is such a brat and I love it :D

Karp The Mad

I forgot about the timer... Good job

Florena Emberlin

Seeing the image preview I thought for a sec that Meg slapped her LOL. Ellie is such a gremlin, I love their dynamic. This is what happens when you invite D&D gremlins to BDSM.

Death of Ink

Ellie ain't admitting defeat just yet!! Wait, wasn't the crop supposed to stay in her mouth?

Brad Kitts

Inb4 the next page reveals Meg doesn't plan on stopping just cause a minute has passed.

Brad Kitts

Also wanted to add, did the Riding Crop move between panels? Nothing huge, just curious.

Michael Kehoe

Ok this is one of my favorite panels haha I love it

Rick

I wonder what reward she gets for getting Meg to break character lol. Edit:of course she did not make 60 seconds if the egg timer did not go off so she still looses.

Jarnathan Slabdash

Don't worry, it doesn't feel like filler. Great expressions and showing that there can always ve fun in a scene

kou32

ooooh, the timer! hahahah She did it! XD I really love the expression work on this page, really well done.

Canti

She was counting the seconds to prove Meg wrong, lol

Nchalada

Happy Ellie is happy to have made it a minute... next goal, an hour

Felin

Meg's just going to smugly point out Ellie dropped the crop :3

Thunder

It did go off. There's a little "Ding" in the bottom corner of the second-last panel.

stereoscopecomics

Ah-ha! No wonder this was bugging me. Panel 3 it should still be in her mouth. I swear, first it was the collar, then the leash and now the flogger.🤣

Seigmann

Ohhh, she's going to regret being that bratty. Egg timer or no. :-D

Amber7

Aww, that's cute. Ellie wins, but so does Meg. I had been betting on a different outcome. PS. Are you sure you're using the right fonts in the right places? Seems to me like Meg should be speaking in domme at least in the first panel (and possibly in all of them).

Bruce Burding

Oh Ellie....so classic....now the game will really begin Spicy Here's what I Love about you....you really think as a switch as you draw. Meg is wanting to be a good Dom as she trains her Sub, but is not prepared for the insatiable playfullness of Ellie, now the question is, after suppressing the sensation, are Ellie's panties wet 😘

DuskStealth

Was the “Ha Ha Haa” her attempt at using her safe word (uh uh uhhh)? I know it could just be her laughing but can also see a scenario where she over excitedly tries to use the safe word but we all know how specific Meg can be about her instructions.

Clash

I really like this page. It's part of the dorky magic that really makes your comic special!

Amber7

I'm getting a "wt actual f; I'm losing my favorite game!" vibe from Meg right now...

michael D

classic just classic i love it

George

Oh, Meg. {Sigh} *Now* you've done it. You broke her.

spencer

In today's episode of things- most-content-creators-don't-get to-say-often: "never change, comment section." You're doing great dude.

Rick

It's amazing how just moving a word makes it pop out more. I also love that you trust the reader enough to understand that Meg took out the rod to better understand Ellie between the 3rd and 4th panel

Jordan Andrew Scherr

Oh hell I hope they are, which would make extra spicy content make sense. Come on, someone screw someone else, PLEASE!! (Probably not that far in this comic, but let's at least see Ellie fully naked and teased. It would lend perfectly to Sam's conversion later on.)

Jordan Andrew Scherr

And if not a fucking, then at least fully naked. It's why they can be a lesbian couple. Meg struck lucky with Ellie, she exactly what she needs in the perfect sub.

Jordan Andrew Scherr

I dunno about that, but PLEASE let Ellie end up completely naked and teased. Let's face it, that's what she wants. The more she does this, the braver she'll become. She's probably not ready to be fully screwed quite yet, but I give her no more than two more sessions before the dildo's come out!

Florena Emberlin

I don't know if this was just a happy accident in the redo but now it makes it look like Meg took the riding crop back because Ellie was mumbling and wanted her to speak more clearly.

Bruce Burding

Like the redo, makes it better in showing Meg is looking out for her Sub, although the instructions were Umm,Ummm, Ummmmm