Panel progress... (Patreon)

...is slow.  I noticed a minor problem as I was drawing these out; a character reaction that seemed to work great in the script, but once drawn just doesn't seem to work.  It's too...heavy handed.  Not subtle at all.  Nothing ruins a comic for me faster than heavy handed writing.

The above panels are not finished (obviously) and I'm not 100% certain they're all going to make it into the final version (They might, with some editing).  They look fine, but I need to fix the script issue, which I think I've solved.  The other panels I've posted should all be fine.  Progress!