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...Let the games begin!

Starting a new chapter is always a bit intimidating (we've got a long road ahead) but it's going to be a fun challenge.

I experimented a little.  I did panels 2-3 in pencil rather than digital.  It is still a challenge to do the final lines in digital especially when there are a lot of curves involved.  let me know if it stands out to you or not.  Hopefully it's not a distraction.

Gonna start page 2 tomorrow.  Goodnight everyone!

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kou32

On ellie's right upper side. second panel, bra strap. There is a change in the line thickness. But not distracting. Might not have noticed if you didn't mention it.

kou32

A very fun page and great looking sequence of rope work! I like that Meg has Ellie experiencing the rope by keeping her eyes closed and also doing a bit of Dom/Sub play by following orders/directions. A fun surprise for her and us!

Brad Kitts

Looking good, but I thought Chapter 3 had one more page. Did I miss it?

Fenix

Obviously Meg is taking it step by step. First bondage on cloths, now under cloths, next step: nothing but bondage "gear". Not to scare away Ellie. I like how Meg developed during course of the comic. First she was aiming at her dream of being dominatrix (and Ellie was only a tool for that). Meg was fully in control of sitiuation. Then it backfired - she started to really care about Ellie. Dream about Ellie took control over Meg. Now she kinda bounced back from that to place where she is no longer a slave of her desires, but dominates instead. Yet Meg stills wants Ellie and Ellie alone. Really good roller coaster. Damn, that's a long comment.

UrbanVerse

Very fine panel; not seeing any distraction from the penciled panels at all. Only thing...was Meg supposed to have lipstick in the "alright" panel? Cause she was wearing lipstick on the last pages of the previous chapter.

hmgirlpopuri

Good page, but I can't help but point out it should be "No peeking" and not "No peaking"

Henri Black

I wonder if any of the other players will notice that Ellie could etch glass right now...

stereoscopecomics

Nope. I decided to cut it because it didn’t do anything to build tension. It was just fluff/filler. I mentioned it in the weekly Update (at least I think I did). 🤔

Brad Kitts

Ah that explains why I was confused. I usually just read the comics (lol sorry). Thank you

Michael

This is going to be a very interesting game night for Ellie :)

Shrub Jump

Panels 3 and 4: Woo, look at those puppies getting squeezed! :P