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Page 14 v.2... (Patreon)

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2020-02-15 07:08:51
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...Made a couple changes (just the white frame and panel 4 white background and no blush on Sam.  Debating which one I like best.  Feel free to share your thoughts.  Thanks!

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Rick

This one is nice but I have to say that the 1st version is slightly better due to its gradual transition into black and the blush brings the character to life and adds personality.

kou32

I think removing the blush from Sam was a good idea. It seemed a bit odd to me. But the gradual shift should stay. It helps build the tone and sense of dread that Meg is feeling.

Anonymous

The dark background on Sam makes it feel like she’s all. “You F up big on that.”

Henri Black

It's better for the removal of the blush but loses some of the impact without the transition and darker background on Sam... Now just post v.3 and we'll all probably nitpick that as well :).

Fyunch Click

Great line: "Never piss off the dungeon master!"

PiLambdaOd

I think it's better without the blush on Sam, but you should also keep from version 1 how the page gets darker as it goes on. It conveys that the scene is getting more intense.