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...A little something to hold you guys over as I work on finish polishing up the chapter 6 script.  Hope to have it done tomorrow so we can start the next page on Monday.  Currently the script is in two parts, each part being between 15 and 20 pages.  I'm hoping to keep the chapter below 35 pages. ^^;

I do like this comic, but I'm thinking of redoing the last panel so that Ellie is standing outside, leaning against a tree.  Also, since the comic fills half a page, I should figure out what will take up the other half.  Probably not a comic, but perhaps a nice Ellie pin up. :)

Goodnight everyone!

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Henri Black

Not much of a spoiler, lmao.

Rick

Lol we all know what just happened the kids don't but we know what happened. Also kids should not be reading this

kou32

hehehe

Jordan Andrew Scherr

Hah! Ellie asked for it, leaping like that. Oh, I hope Meg somehow heard!

Jordan Andrew Scherr

On a side note, I was worried Sam had somehow figured out what was up with Ellie and was plotting to seduce Val or something. I like that she's still in the dark. It'll make Meg's next move all the more adorable as SHE, the oh-so-confident Sam looses her cool. (If that bonus comic was any indicator.)

Jordan Andrew Scherr

As a final note though, I'm going to repeat my request you take the leap of moving to subscriber star, or at the very least pole if people will follow you there. I SERIOUSLY do not want to see this comic ruined, and suspect I'm not alone in that fear.

Michael

Haha, well I think half the county heard that!

the_iceman

Must have been fun for Ellie...

PsyGremlin

So Ellie *is* a screamer. Nice. Cue old joke: My parents got me a sweater for Christmas. I was hoping for a moaner, or screamer. I also like the idea of Ellie leaning on a tree - sort of like she was on the table, after her first... surprise.

Hypnotickagon

im always down for longer chapters but to each there own it is all great and enjoyable

DuskStealth

That’s the sound of someone remembering what they forgot.

Dragon86

Glad to she finally got done with the foreplay.

PsyGremlin

I would never dare to presume the direction of the story (he says, before daring to presume the direction of the story) - but I just had an idea for the last panel. Panicked Ellie, in the underwear, harness still on, on the phone. "I can't this off and I don't want to cut it. Help!" Pause. "Mistress." That way it also closes off Meg's challenge at the end of the chapter.