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WIPs!... (Patreon)

Published:
2022-05-26 18:17:29
Imported:
2026-06
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...I keep accidentally writing short stories.  It's at the point that I should probably start farming them out to other artists.  This one a noir inspired story of a chauffeur who takes on an unusual, and dangerous client.

Also, Meg is helping Ellie with her posture again.

New page will hopefully be up this Saturday!  Hope you'll look forward to it!

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NoMayGusta

That bottom one... 0.o

Bruce Burding

Heading into the forest again.....keep your eye on the prize.......Meg would make you, you know ;)

Death of Ink

BDSM helps with posture. Another good reason to look into it.

kou32

loving the noir vibe of the sketches, and the meg and ellie piece is too much fun ^^

Michael

The Noir story looks fascinating and that Chauffer is cute! Ooh, and that bottom image... 😍

Jordan Andrew Scherr

I'm really REALLY looking forward to the more extreme sex. The bottom image looks about right for exactly that description. That said, I am legitimately glad there was a buildup to this. It's a step often (But not always) skipped in these stories, but helps tremendously here.

stereoscopecomics
>>84631908

Same here! Believe me, it was soooooo tempting to just pull all the stops out in the last chapter, but it would have changed both Meg and Ellie’s motivations and we would have missed out on some fun upcoming plot points. We’re getting close though, so I’ll be testing out a lot of scenarios. More WIPs next week!🎸🎶

stereoscopecomics
>>84631908

True, but a little too simple for me. (ﾉ °٢° )ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧*´¨) ¸.•´¸.•*´¨) ¸.•*¨) (¸.•´ (¸.•` ✧ OVER COMPLOCATION!

Jordan Andrew Scherr
>>84631908

That's going to particularly count for both Sam and Val. Val is "in the loop" at this point, but not in on or used to the fun. And I still love that artwork of Sam shaking life a leaf as she folds a bound-up Ellie's crotch. "What the Fucken hell am I DOING?!" There's going to be that moment before she fully realizes how much she likes it.

Jordan Andrew Scherr
>>84631908

There is one other potential here, and last comment I promise. Once they're both introduced, the potential for the two trying something on "amature" terms is very real. If that happens, it could be a wakeup call for Meg that she'd better get involved, or this COULD turn dangerous! It might be a good semi-dark way of clarifying the dangers of BDSM without getting too serious. (Meg berating Sam = "I was trained by a pro.... DO NOT step outside what you know!")

stereoscopecomics
>>84631908

And no worries! There are no limits on comments. I love the conversation and it often points out the strengths and weaknesses of the work (even if it isn’t obvious to anyone but me). 👍

Jordan Andrew Scherr
>>84631908

Oh don't you worry, I trust your storytelling instincts. And like I said, I'm glad you're setting up an actual progression here. Your work wouldn't be as good without the buildup.

Shrub Jump

Me, looking at that last drawing: (TI__LT)

Jordan Andrew Scherr
>>84631908

Essentially yes, although we'll see how this chapter progresses. Believable character development is part of why this comic stands out against others. I personally wouldn't have it otherwise. (Creates a buildup that makes the payoff all the sweeter.) What happens to Ellie next is key to how Val ends up tied down "orgasming" upon a bed. If I was to hazard a guess, we're going to see Ellie go from the "suggestion" and "dress" phase of sex to her first full-on penetration, tongue and fingers BDSM sex. That introduction/acceptance would allow for the implication of progression between this chapter's end, and the start of Val's involvement. It would basically justify Ellie's behavior in/as a complete submissive (VOLUNTARY=Very Important) sex-pet role, allowing for focus to shift onto Val and Sam.

Dragon86

I hope to see that last scene in Meg and ellie's next session.