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Took an extra day to redraw the second half of this page.  I'm getting faster now! :D  Lots of little changes that make the page considerably stronger without jeopardizing any narrative elements.

Hope you all had a great week!  Post for Super Minions and Mail Club goes up tomorrow!  See you then!

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SwanSong1620

That surprised Ellie face in the 3rd panel has great meme potential (also dommey Val is Good)

Brad Kitts

Looks like the turned are about to be tables.

Andrea Blount

I hope she shows her how to tie a box tie correctly ;3. But who am I kinding, Ellie would just put her arms behind her back just because lol XD

Kevin Johnson

I love both versions of the page! Even if it didn't fit right narratively, the power poses in the first sketch look cool 😁

The Other Greg

Dat 2nd panel tho - Reminds me of how one ropebunny put it "I love hugs, but people only have two hands and can only hold you so many places at once. The rope can hold me everywhere at once, like one gigantic omnihug."

Katt Wallingford

I don't think that's the thing Ellie meant to awaken in Val...

Death of Ink

Oh, the tables turn! This is an interesting side to you, Val!

kou32

It's been a long while since we've seen Val attempt to top. I think it was the Minx when she tried? But that didn't work out. But seeing her like this, I think Ellie awakened something in her and also in herself. I love it! A really great page, I love the transitions, flow and expression work.

ObliviousDamsel

Ayyy Looks Great Stereoscope ❤️ Hope you're week is going well too

Mangal

The reaction, to val "your turn". I laughed, we felt a change of atmosphere and Elie. In mode uhhh...... I think I triggered something unexpected.

Michael

Ellie is such a sub that it doesn't take much to get her going! The fact that neither of these ladies is very experienced might make this very interesting indeed!

Skaitwaker

The tables have been turned

DoItYourself251

She's not playing! Run! This page looks fantastic. Awesome work!

Henri Black

So, Val is a cowgirl, eh?

Shrub Jump

Great plot reversal! And I like how you used "Lassoed!" as a "sound effect."