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The next 11 pages are gonna be a lot of fun, as we get a short tour around Val's mind.  Her story will be told in first person through her journal entries (Val would never have a diary). ;)

You've seen page 3 before.  I did a few touch ups here, but I am planning to redo it at a later date because it doesn't play the way I'd hoped it would.  In the meantime, I'm gonna be working on pages 4 & 5 at the same time to see if that helps my workflow.

Alright!  I'm gonna go and finish packing up mail club.  Should be ready to go out tomorrow!  Have a great evening, everyone!

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SwanSong1620

Looking great, always happy to see Val content. However, minor mistake on pg 3 - 'they are not to find'

smack54

You left out a word on page 3 bottom text bubble.

Fritz Sands

"not hard to find", I believe.

Brad Kitts

Think you missed a word on the second page "They're not (hard) to find, the city breeds them." Other than that, looks exciting.

Ajax

You are missing a word in the dialogue box, bottom left corner. "They are not X to find. The city breeds them."

Ozz

My Black Box arrived woooo!! No 166 :D

Death of Ink

Val's got quite the imagination on her, and it's so cute and dorky! I'm glad we've finally reached her POV!

Mei Mei

I see that DM kind of brain.

Kalia Grey

My Black Box arrived yesterday! It's beautiful!!

Michael Kehoe

OK those are almost my favorite pages so far

Villager

Wow! Great story line direction. Look forward to what comes next.

Canti

I like that “the new her is good at lying” when her mental image is of Ellie and the girl in question is in fact a terrible liar and nowhere near that composed. The contrast makes it funny

Nchalada

Love the changes, nice and subtle

Notebook

Very nice work

DoItYourself251

I want to see Val with the purple rope and black leather now. I also want some purple rope.

char-dawg

They're not HARD to find. ;)

the_iceman

This rope is a handy holding aid. ;)

stereoscopecomics

Dude, did you hack my computer and read my notes?!🤣 Will be interested to hear your thoughts on upcoming pages. Gonna be fun!

Canti

Even if I knew how to do that, I wouldn’t admit it, lol. I do some writing too, so I like to read between the lines

Dan

My book arrived today! Looks awesome! And the stickers are cute... thank you!

kou32

hehehe, glad to see Val is having fun Her DM brain is taking over XD

MegaCityCraft Project Playerbase

Got my book today! Flipped through it and landed in the bonus comics in the back and got a good laugh out of the sub seniority joke!

dUc0N

"They are not to..." ... just kidding! I see about five people beat me to it 😂