Mafia AU comic!! (Patreon)

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SOOO me and a friend who is a VERY good writer have decided to collab on a comic/webtoon together!! we made part of the story the other day and with my frantic notes i wanted to draw one of the scenes and get ya'lls opinions!

STORY SO FAR:

Ron is an spy/secret agent that so happens to be on his break and wants to get away from it all. he decides to go to a resort and relax! after many trail and error at the local beach and pool area being full he gives up and tries to find a more empty spot! with a bit of wondering around he finds a practically empty beach and excitedly places his towel down. as soon as he does so a figure comes out of the blue water completely NAKED. its BK and hes looking rather wet. Ron is flabbergasted and doesnt know what to do meanwhile BK grabs his towel and notices another person. telling him its HIS private beach. Ron gets the message and gets outta there quickly.

later in the evening Ron tries to forget the events from earlier and goes to the resort bar to cool off. sitting in the corner and observing the people there. he notices a man surrounded with bodyguards or maybe gang members? it was the man from the private beach! HES A GANG LEADER?? (and turns out the one Ron has been looking for in the city before taking his holiday)

Ron panics and downs his drink, BK sees this and with amusement calls Ron over. intoxicated Ron listens and they get talking. they flirt a little bit and then BK suggests they go some place else to get a little closer~

BK takes him to a VIP room that turns out to be a very SPICY room, filled with activity. BK takes him past all that to his private room, they get closer then before~

Ron wakes up the next morning embarrassed that he did something so stupid and quickly leaves before BK wakes up! hours later BK wakes up but is unbothered, he calls in his gang members and they drop files all over the bed. they are files of Ron and his job. pictures of him and his home etc. BK sits there naked with the bedsheet draped over his thighs. smiling he plans to find Ron back in the city and have a bit more fun ;)

THATS ALL so far! we plan to include the colonel as a rival gang group! >:)) but let me know what you think of this story so far and if youre excited!! it will probably progress slow rn since its early stages!