Riftborn: Shadow Play (Patreon)
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This concept is coming-of-age teen story in a dark superhero setting. Here's the old manuscript I'm working with. It's still unedited, mind.
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Riftborn: Shadow Play
1.1 Useless
The air in the classroom felt stuffy, like it always did around midday, with that faint mix of chalk dust, body odor from thirty kids crammed together, and the vague chemical whiff from the cleaners they used on the floors every night. It wasn't overpowering, just enough to remind you this was school—a place where everything felt a little worn out and overused. The clock on the wall ticked slowly, its hands mocking me.
Lunch was still forty minutes away, and that felt like forever.
The fluorescent lights above hummed a low, buzzing note, one of the panels flickering erratically, casting pulsing shadows that danced at the edge of my vision. For most people, it was just an annoyance, a background flicker to be ignored.
For me, it was a conversation.
With every stutter of the light, the shadow pooled at my feet seemed to respond, darkening and thinning in a silent, rhythmic pulse. It felt like a part of my own body, a muscle twitching in time with a beat only I could feel.
No one else noticed, of course. To them, shadows were just an absence of light. But to me, they were alive, and this one was restless.
My desk, like all the others, was a battlefield of old carvings—initials inside hearts, band logos, crude drawings that had been half-scraped away. I traced the deep gouge of a name, "MARCO '09," with my fingernail. Whoever “Marco” was, he was long gone. Only his mark remained. And I was just another ghost passing through.
I'd been half-paying attention in Ms. Ramirez's Advanced Physics class all semester, but now that we were deep into the quantum fractures unit, my mind kept wandering. The rest of the class was actually tuned in, staring at the holographic display up front where colorful particles swirled and collided in simulated rifts, lighting up the room with flashes of blue and purple that danced across the scratched desks and faded posters on the walls.
I was fidgeting with my stylus, drawing random lines on my tablet that turned into cracked patterns, like the fractures we were supposed to be learning about. My eyes kept jumping from the clock to Ms. Ramirez and back again.
Thirty-eight minutes left.
Ms. Ramirez was moving around with her usual energy, waving her hands as she talked, like she could pull the concepts right out of the air. She was a fairly attractive woman in her thirties, with warm olive skin, dark hair tied back in a loose bun, and sharp brown eyes that lit up when she got excited about science. She had this necklace made of tiny rift crystals—those shimmering bits harvested from some of the stable portals—that caught the light every time she turned. Her outfit was casual but put-together: a simple blouse and slacks, with the intricate black lines of a tattoo of a constellation peeking out from under one of her sleeves.
"So, the key thing to remember about Flux Saturation," she explained, tapping her stylus on the holo-display to freeze a swirling vortex of energy, "is that it's not predictable. The radiation rewrites all known biological rules. We have our classifications, of course — the Kinetics, which encompass things like pyro- or cryo-genesis powers. The Fortis with enhanced physiology. Those are all easy to measure. But then you have the Esoterics." She grinned. "That's where things get weird. Precognitives, empaths, illusionists... their energy signatures are faint, hard to quantify. The DCA's scanners can get a baseline, but they can't always map the full potential."
A hand shot up from the front row. It was Kevin Chen, a kid who lived and breathed Flux lore.
"Ms. R, is it true that some Esoteric powers can evolve? That the initial classification can be wrong?"
Ms. Ramirez's smile tightened just a fraction.
"The DCA maintains that classifications are ninety-nine-point-nine percent accurate based on initial testing. Power expression is determined at the moment of exposure. However…" she added, her teacher's enthusiasm returning, "there are… theories… about latent potential, secondary mutations triggered by extreme stress or further exposure. It's certainly a fringe concept, but… it doesn’t seem impossible."
For the first time all class, I perked up, my doodling forgotten.
Latent potential.
The words sent a small jolt through my chest.
A flicker of hope.
What if the DCA was wrong? What if my own power wasn't just a parlor trick after all?
Another student, Sarah, chimed in from the side.
"But isn't that just guessing? I mean, with some of the stronger powers, nothing seems to be impossible. They're just weird science glitches that may as well be magic! How can you even study or classify that?"
Ms. R’s expression turned serious, her teacher mode kicking into high gear.
She leaned against her desk, the rift crystals of her necklace glinting.
"That's a common misconception, Sarah, but a dangerous one. Remember, class: these fractures aren't just weird science glitches," she said, her voice firm but not unkind. "There is a scientific basis behind how powers originate. The rifts are points where our world connects to others, letting in particles that follow physical laws that are entirely different from our own. Exposure can mess with your body, giving people powers that don't follow normal rules. But it is NOT magic—it's a side effect of extra-dimensional stuff bleeding into our reality."
The brief flicker of hope inside me died, smothered by the cold weight of her explanation.
Science. Rules.
The same rules that had been used to measure me and find me wanting.
The class was listening for once, nodding along, while I thoughts back to the day of my own power test.
I was twelve, sitting on a cold metal stool in a room so white it hurt my eyes. It smelled of ozone and antiseptic.
Two DCA agents in crisp black uniforms stood on the other side of a reinforced glass panel, their faces impassive, their voices flat and tinny through a speaker. One held a tablet, the other a clipboard. They hardly even looked at me, mainly focused on their notes.
"Subject 34B," one of them had said. "Manifestation: Shadow Manipulation, Esoteric class."
For hours, they'd had me perform for them.
"Please detach a shadow for me, Alex." I did, peeling a perfect silhouette of myself off the floor. It stood there, a flat, two-dimensional cutout of me.
"Good. Now have it interact with the object."
They placed a red rubber ball on the floor. I focused, pushing all my intent into the detached shadow, trying to make it nudge the ball… But the shadow simply slid over it -- or through it -- remaining completely intangible.
Absolutely nothing exciting happened. They made notes; had me (unsuccessfully) try to see or hear through my shadows. Had me try different variations. Yet, all attempts led to the same, inevitable conclusion.
"Non-physical. Non-interactive," the agent with the tablet said, his voice bored. "Limited to line-of-sight. Minor illusionary potential."
The final verdict came without any ceremony.
"Classification: Epsilon. Non-combat viable. Register and release."
On that day, my life had been measured, weighed, and dismissed as being worthless. My power was a parlor trick. A joke.
The memory was so sharp, so humiliating, that the wonders of quantum physics Ms. Ramirez was so excited about just felt like another language for failure.
I shifted in my seat, the plastic chair creaking under me. I'm relatively tall—a bit over six feet—and lanky, which makes me stand out when I'm up, but sitting here slouched, I feel like I could almost disappear. My skin's pale from spending too much time inside, avoiding the sun that beats down on the city's cracked sidewalks. My dark hair's always a mess, falling over my forehead, and my face is sharp—high cheekbones from Mom, a wide mouth that doesn't smile much, and blue eyes.
My father had the same eyes, in the one clear memory I have of him. In the faded photograph Mom keeps, he’s not looking at the camera, but just past it, like he was checking the exits even then. It’s a habit I picked up without realizing. Those wary eyes weren't just his legacy, though. They were a product of adaptation. In Kyiv — a city that had to be evacuated entirely due to a series of major Rift events — learning to survive was a necessary skill.
Here, in Detroit, the dangers were of a different, more human kind. You had to learn to read the swagger in someone's walk, the challenge in their eyes from across the street. The wariness was the same, just tuned to a different frequency.
I was wearing my usual faded gray hoodie, thin at the elbows, over jeans that had seen better days, hems frayed from walking everywhere. My family wasn’t exactly flush with cash. Mom worked double shifts as a cleaner, and my backpack was a thrift-store find, stuffed with the school-issued tablet and my brown-bag lunch — today, it was a ham sandwich on cheap bread and a bruised apple for dessert. That lunch was important; it was pretty much my only solid meal during the day. Skipping it meant dealing with that empty gnawing in my stomach that made everything feel worse.
The thought of the sandwich brought with it the memory of this morning. The kitchen was still dark, the only light from the small lamp over the stove. Mom was already in her work clothes, her back to me as she methodically assembled my lunch on the worn countertop. I could smell the faint, clean scent of bleach that clung to her hands no matter how much she washed them.
When she turned to hand me the bag, her face was tired, lines etched around her eyes that weren't there a few years ago. She gave me a small, weary smile and said, "Berezhy sebe, synu."
Be careful, son.
That simple sandwich felt heavy in my hands, a dense little packet of her exhaustion and love.
I glanced back without thinking.
Derek Harlan was sitting a couple rows over, surrounded by his usual crew — Landon and Tyler.
Derek had that polished look: tall and athletic, with blond hair styled just right, sun-tanned skin, and blue eyes that narrowed when he was up to something. His jaw was square, teeth perfect from braces or whatever rich kids get, and he wore this high-end jacket with holographic threads that shimmered faintly — official junior Dimensional Containment Agency affiliate gear.
His power? He didn't have one.
He didn't need one.
Derek’s parents were big shots. His father owned a successful tech firm, while his mother was a senior manager in the local DCA.
He was rich. Popular. The captain of the football team, built like Greek God, and carried himself with the unshakeable confidence of someone whose future was already bought and paid for by his well-connected family.
Landon, his primary goon, was leaning forward over his desk, a bulky, eager posture that radiated a desire for confrontation.
Tyler was slouched back in his chair, seemingly relaxed, but his eyes were constantly in motion, flicking from the teacher to the door to the other students, the perfect weaselly lookout.
They all smelled like expensive cologne mixed with the cafeteria fries they'd probably snag later.
Derek caught me looking and smirked, tapping his expensive, gold stylus against his tablet with an audible click, click, click. He leaned over to whisper to Landon, who let out a low laugh.
I turned away quick, feeling that sour twist in my gut.
Why did they always zero in on me?
A memory surfaced instantly. Last year, in history class. Derek was giving a presentation on medieval warfare. He'd brought in some military-grade holographic projector—a "gift from his father's company," he'd announced—that displayed a ridiculously detailed, three-dimensional trebuchet flinging fireballs across the room. He was droning on, less about history and more about how advanced his tech was. I was bored out of my mind — and so, I detached a small shadow, no bigger than my hand, and sent it creeping up the wall behind him. I’d shaped it into a cartoon rabbit that slowly bent over and appeared to pick his nose.
A few kids snickered. Then more.
Soon the whole class was laughing — and Derek stood there, red-faced and confused, until the teacher finally pointed it out. Naturally, everyone knew that I was responsible. And his public humiliation had become my private grudge match. He’d never forgiven me, nor stopped picking on me ever since.
The clock said five minutes left.
"Let's call it here," Ms. Ramirez said, clapping her hands. "Homework for the weekend: Think about fractures and how they've changed things — powers, society, invasions. Make a list if you want. On Monday, we'll group up and see who has the best analysis. Winners get vending machine treats!"
Cheers broke out, and the room turned into a mess of noise — binders snapping, chairs scraping on the tile, voices rising as kids packed up.
The world of powers and heroes I felt so cut off from was suddenly all around me. I heard a heated debate from a table near the front about whether the A-list hero Aegis faked his injury during the Chicago incursion for a better media narrative.
Behind me, a girl squealed with excitement, telling her friends that her cousin got a junior internship at LARI.
It was a universe of possibilities, of status and fame and purpose, and I was on the outside looking in — a spectator with a ticket to a show I wasn't allowed to be a part of. I kept quiet, sliding my tablet into my bag. My notes were pure crap: a few scribbles on rift particles, buried under doodles of twisting shadows.
The bell rang with that soft electronic chime, and I was out the door fast, not running but moving with purpose through the crowded halls. The hallway was a cross-section of our reality.
A glossy, holographic DCA poster with smiling heroes and the tagline "Be The Shield" was half-covered by a flyer for the prom committee's bake sale.
A large flat-screen monitor mounted on the wall — a relic from the more primitive, pre-holotech times of the early to mid 2000s — displayed the city's current Rift Status: Sectors 1 through 7 were green, but Sector 8, our sector, was a cautious yellow.
"MINOR ATMOSPHERIC ANOMALIES DETECTED. PROCEED WITH AWARENESS."
Most students flowed past it without a second glance, their chatter about weekend plans and homework drowning out the silent warning. It was all just background noise to them, like traffic or weather. But I felt it—a faint prickle on the back of my neck, the ingrained habit of someone who had once lived where "minor anomalies" could turn into sirens and evacuations without warning.
It wasn't fear I felt. Not anymore. It was a dull, constant watchfulness, a low-level hum of anxiety that never quite went away.
But, unlike my native Kyiv, Detroit hasn’t had a significant incursion in years — and so, no one else seemed to be paying it any mind.
The cafeteria smelled like greasy pizza, spilled soda, and overcooked veggies as I pushed in, the air thick and warm from all the bodies. Fluorescent lights continued to buzz overhead, casting a bluish-white glow on the long tables and benches. I headed for my usual spot at the end of a table, away from the loud center where Derek's group ruled.
Mia was already there, saving a seat like she always did. She was my best friend, and maybe (hopefully) more one day. She had warm brown skin, long black hair that cascaded in waves, and deep brown eyes that sparkled with mischief. Her face was heart-shaped, with full lips and a scattering of freckles across her nose. She had an athletic build from hiking and running around the neighborhood, dressed in a band tee under a denim jacket, and ripped jeans that were like that because of real wear-and-tear, not fashion. Mia smelled faintly of mint gum and whatever soap her big family used, and her laugh was the kind that cut through noise.
We'd bonded over being outsiders—her from a crowded house scraping by, and me from being an immigrant kid in a strange land. I remembered the day clearly.
We were maybe eleven. I’d found a way into the ruins of the old Hatcher Graduate Library, a place my mom had warned me away from. I was hiding out from some older kids when I heard a noise. It was Mia, sitting in a dusty beam of sunlight, sketching the collapsed bookshelves in a tattered notebook. We’d just stared at each other for a full minute, two trespassers in a silent, forgotten world. Then she’d grinned and offered me a piece of her chocolate bar.
Those ruins were far from the last place we’d explored together.
"Hey, Alex," she said, smiling as I sat down.
"Hello Mia! What’s new?"
I unpacked my lunch—the sandwich looking even sadder under the lights, bread a bit limp.
She lowered her voice, leaning in with a conspiratorial grin.
"My cousin's friend, the one with the recon drone? He flew it over the old Packard Plant yesterday. Said the signal went haywire over the north assembly building! He checked the footage and said the air in the video looked... shimmery. Like heat haze on a cold day. We should totally check it out Saturday night! See if we can find a way in!"
My interest was piqued, the gloom of the classroom lifting for a moment. That was our thing — exploring the bones of the city, finding beauty in the decay. It was a secret world that belonged only to us.
"Yeah? Do you reckon it might be a micro-fracture?"
"Maaybe?" she whispered, her eyes dancing. "Or maybe it’s just busted electricals. But either way, it'll be an adventure!"
We shared a grin together. But, before I could eat, Derek's voice cut in loud. He'd wandered over with Landon and Tyler, trays loaded with extras from the premium line—fries, burgers, stuff I couldn't afford.
"Well now, look who it is — the Shadow Boy! What’s the matter? Aren’t you gonna show off your parlor tricks? Make some spooky shapes for us?"
Landon grinned, breath smelling like onions as he leaned close. "Yeah, detach one and make it dance. Or is it too useless for that?"
Tyler snatched my sandwich wrapper, crumpling it. "Whoops."
Derek "bumped" the table in a calculated, deliberate shove. Time seemed to stretch and slow down. I saw the movement in perfect detail: the slight bend of his knees, the forward lean of his shoulders, the smirk already forming on his face. My tray lifted, tipping in a graceful, horrible arc.
My sandwich — Mom’s sandwich — slid off first, hitting the grimy linoleum with a soft, wet splat. The bruised apple followed, tracing a wobbly path before rolling away under a neighboring table, disappearing into the forest of legs.
A hot flush of shame and pure, unadulterated rage flooded my cheeks, so intense it made my ears ring. Across the cafeteria, a group of freshmen stared, eyes wide, before quickly looking down at their trays.
I saw Mr. Henderson, the teacher on lunch duty, glance over, his eyes meeting mine for a fraction of a second before he deliberately turned his back to ask another teacher about the football game. He had seen… but had chosen not to. Didn’t he get it? That was my meal gone! My only real food for the afternoon — wasted.
Hunger, which had been a dull ache, sharpened instantly into a painful, hollow pang that twisted my stomach.
Derek chuckled, turning and walking away.
"Jerks," Mia snapped, her eyes flashing with a protective fire that made my chest ache. She pushed her tray over—the half-eaten burrito, a bag of chips, an orange. "Here, take this. I'm not super hungry anyway."
I stared at it, pride stinging like a fresh wound. Accepting felt like admitting defeat, like I couldn't even handle the basics of my own life.
But the emptiness in my stomach was a more powerful force.
"Thanks," I muttered, my voice tight, gratefully taking the warm weight of the burrito.
I ate in silence, the food tasting like ash in my mouth. Mia put her hand on my arm for a second, a small, grounding pressure. "Don't let him get to you," she said softly. "Without his dad's money, he's just a walking pile of hair gel and protein powder."
"At least his future's set," I said, unable to keep the bitterness out of my voice.
"The DCA are bureaucrats, Alex," she insisted, her gaze intense. "They sit in labs and look at numbers. What do they even know? Your shadows are friggin’ awesome! I've seen you move them around; make complex shapes. It looks really impressive! I bet one day you'll figure out some use for them that those eggheads never even thought to test for!"
Her faith was a small, warm light in the cold space inside me. I wanted to hold onto it, to believe her with every fiber of my being… But her hopeful words just made the memory of the testing facility sharper, colder. I
I could still hear the agent's bored, clinical voice.
"Non-physical, non-interactive… Classification: Epsilon."
That was the truth — the official, stamped-and-filed truth. Mia’s faith felt like a candle flame trying to fight a blizzard. But as I watched Derek and his crew laughing across the cafeteria, that inner light flickered. My own shadow pooled at my feet, darker than the ambient shadows of the room — and then it flickered. Thickening. Multiplying. As long as they were visible to me, I could make as many extra shadows as I wanted to. I could detach them. Move them around. Control them.
Too bad they were entirely non-physical, and couldn't actually touch anything.
Just fancy-looking tricks; nothing more.
But, as the rage and helplessness churned inside me, I allowed myself to fantasize a little. I imagined my shadow detaching — not as a flat, harmless copy, but as something more. I pictured it gliding across the floor, silent and unseen, climbing up Derek's leg, wrapping around his throat like a strip of black silk.
Squeezing.
Wiping that smug, arrogant smirk right off his face until the laughter choked in his throat.
The image was so vivid, so real, that I flinched — surprised at my own viciousness, my knuckles white around the borrowed burrito. I shook my head, trying to dislodge the thought, a cold knot of fear and shame tightening in my stomach. I looked down again, seeing only useless, intangible shadows.
But, for just a second, I thought I felt them want to become something more.
1.2
The bus rattled along Gratiot Avenue, its engine groaning like an old man climbing a steep flight of stairs. The air inside was thick and recycled, a suffocating blend of diesel exhaust seeping through the vents and the faint, stale odor of too many bodies crammed together over the years—sweat, cheap perfume, and the lingering grease from fast food wrappers crumpled under the worn vinyl seats. I pressed my forehead against the cool, grimy glass of the window, watching the city blur past in streaks of gray concrete, rusted chain-link fences, and the skeletal remains of factories that had long since fallen silent. The brakes let out a high-pitched, metallic squeal at every stop, a sound that set my teeth on edge. The vinyl of the seat beneath me was cracked and sticky in the afternoon heat, a patchwork of old repairs that did little to hide the worn-out foam underneath.
I could overhear snippets of conversation. Two women in front of me complaining about the rising prices of Rift Insurance. A man behind me telling someone on his phone how his cousin’s kid manifested a weak pyrokinetic power, just enough to get him a D-class rating and a government check. The usual city chatter.
A few rows ahead, a woman with tired eyes and a DCA-branded tote bag stared blankly out her own window. Across the aisle, two teenagers were laughing at a video on their holo-tablet, the tinny sound of a pop song buzzing like an annoying insect.
Detroit in the afternoon sun looked tired, like it had been fighting a long, losing battle with entropy. Abandoned lots were choked with shoulder-high weeds and piles of illegally dumped trash. Boarded-up storefronts were plastered with layers of peeling posters and graffiti. The tags told the story of the streets better than any news report.
There was a recurring stencil of a gas-masked figure praying to an active rift, a tribute to some new fringe cult.
Another showed the DCA’s eagle logo with a crack running through it, its eye weeping a single drop of black paint.
One sprawling, faded mural depicted a woman with wings made of pure light locked in combat with a shadowy, tentacled beast — a memorial to a famous B-lister named ‘Beacon’ who’d been lost to a mid-west incursion last year. Most of it was just desperate scrawls: "Flux Free Zone," "DCA Lies," or the simple, ubiquitous tags marking the borders of various gangs.
Above it all, several holographic billboards for Comet Security flickered, showing the city's premier licensed A-list hero, Captain Comet, giving a confident thumbs-up. The slogan beneath him pulsed with warm, inviting light: "Your Safety is Our Priority!"
It felt like a sick joke.
I watched the hero’s chiseled, holographic jaw and perfectly coiffed hair, and imagined him flying high above this street, a shining speck in the sky on his way from his downtown penthouse to some red-carpet gala. He’d never see the cracked pavement, never smell the industrial smog, never have to listen to the brakes squeal on this rust-bucket bus.
Your Safety. Pah.
He meant the safety of the people in the gleaming corporate towers, the ones who could actually afford Comet’s premium protection plans. Certainly not ours.
I slouched lower in my seat, the half-eaten burrito from Mia sitting like a stone in my stomach. Her food, her kindness — it should have made me feel better, but it just threw the humiliation from the cafeteria into sharper relief. Derek's smirk replayed in my head, a perfect loop of casual cruelty. It wasn't just the shove; it was the effortlessness of it, the absolute certainty that there would be no consequences.
I felt my shadows stir again, noticeably thickening at my feet in response to my anger as the bus hit a pothole and jolted everyone in their seats. It was an increasingly familiar sensation, a low-frequency hum that seemed to start at the base of my spine and spread outwards, like a cold static charge building under my skin.
It was the feeling of potential with nowhere to go.
I glanced down, watching one detach slightly, a thin sliver of darkness peeling away from the floor like smoke. It hovered for a second, a physical manifestation of my frustration, before I mentally yanked it back into place.
Useless, ‘non-physical’ thing.
The DCA's test results echoed louder than the bus's rattling engine. What good was a power that couldn't even interact with the world?
The bus lurched to a stop at my corner, its air brakes hissing like an annoyed sigh. I grabbed my bag and shuffled off, the doors folding shut behind me with a mechanical wheeze that sounded final. The sidewalk was a mosaic of cracks, weeds pushing through the concrete with a stubborn, defiant energy. The air here carried the sharp, metallic tang of the nearby stamping plant—acrid smoke and chemical undertones that made your throat itch if you breathed too deep.
My neighborhood wasn't the worst in Detroit, but it was clinging to respectability by its fingertips. Rows of faded brick apartments with peeling paint and sagging porches stood shoulder-to-shoulder, their windows like tired eyes watching the street. Cars sat up on blocks in weedy driveways, and the constant, distant hum of freeway traffic was the area's background music.
On a nearby lamppost, a circular rift warning sign glowed a faint, sickly yellow. "SECTOR 8 – YELLOW ALERT. REPORT ANOMALIES." Nobody paid it much mind anymore; yellow was the new normal for this sector, a constant, low-grade hum of anxiety that everyone had learned to ignore.
A couple of kids were playing street hockey with a crumpled can and makeshift goals, their shouts echoing between the apartment blocks. Further down, an old man in a sleeveless undershirt was meticulously watering a tiny, defiant patch of tomato plants in his sliver of a front yard. As I passed by, I inhaled the smell of his damp soil mixed with the faint, greasy scent of someone’s barbecue starting up. As I walked the two blocks home, my worn sneakers scuffing against the uneven pavement, my mind drifted back to Mia's idea.
The Packard Plant.
Those sprawling ruins on the east side, a massive skeleton of Detroit's former industrial glory. Her cousin's drone story had hooked me instantly — the shimmery air, the signal glitching out. I pictured what it would be like up close. Not a violent tear in space, but something subtle, like heat haze off asphalt, only this would feel cold, making the air crackle with a quiet energy. I imagined us finding a whole ecosystem of strange, rift-touched phenomena inside those ruins: things like phosphorescent moss growing on old engine blocks, casting an eerie green glow, or… perhaps water droplets from a leaky roof hanging perfectly still in the air, suspended by some invisible, localized gravity warp.
The daydream sent a genuine thrill through me, a spark that cut through the day's accumulated crap. Mia and me, sneaking in under the cover of a Saturday night sky, her flashlight beam cutting through decades of darkness, our laughs echoing off the high, cavernous ceilings. It was stupid, of course. Probably dangerous. But it was what we did. Our bonding time; something real and tangible in a world full of classifications and holographic lies.
Our building came into view — a squat three-story brick thing with a fire escape clinging to the side like a rusty metal spider and windows patched with silver duct tape that glinted in the sun. The lobby door, a heavy slab of wood with a cracked glass panel, was stuck — as usual. I had to put my shoulder into it, and it groaned open with the sound of protesting, warped wood.
Inside, the air was cooler but musty, smelling of old, damp carpet and whatever our Korean neighbors were cooking in 1B — some kind of cabbage and onions, a smell that seemed to have permanently seeped into the walls. A long fluorescent tube on the ceiling buzzed and flickered erratically, casting the cramped space in a strobe of sickly yellow light that made the shadows jump. From behind a door down the hall, I could hear the canned laughter of a TV game show. Voices echoed from closer, just around the corner: Mom's, sharp and tired, and a deeper one, gruff and demanding.
"...two weeks late, Irina! I can't keep letting this slide!"
I froze in the entryway, my hand still on the door, bag slung over my shoulder. Mom stood in our doorway, her arms crossed tight against her chest. She was still in her work uniform — faded blue scrubs with faint bleach spots on the sleeve that no amount of washing could remove. She looked smaller than usual, her dark hair pulled back in a severe bun, her face etched with a familiar, bone-deep exhaustion.
The landlord, Mr. Jones, loomed over her. He was a big guy in his fifties, balding with a prominent beer gut that strained the buttons of his cheap polo shirt. He stood with his feet planted wide, leaning slightly into her personal space in an assertion of dominance. He tapped his clipboard rhythmically against his thigh, the soft thump-thump-thump a sound of pure impatience. His face was ruddy, tiny veins spider-webbing across his nose and cheeks, and he smelled faintly of cigarettes and cheap, spicy aftershave.
"It's been a rough month, Bill," Mom said, her voice steady but edged with that quiet, unbending steel I recognized from her stories about Kyiv. "I'll have it all by next Friday. The double shift pay comes in then."
Jones snorted, a wet, dismissive sound. He took a step closer — too close, invading her space outright.
"Heard that one before. You people think you can come here and play the system? Got news for ya: rent's rent. If it's not all paid up by the first, you're outa here! I've got a whole list of families that would kill for a unit like this."
The phrase "you people" hung in the air, heavy and ugly. A hot flush of anger crept up my neck, and my stomach twisted into a tight, sick knot. It was the same tone a middle school history teacher had used on me once, asking if "my people" even knew about American holidays. It was the sound of being dismissed and defined in a single breath.
But Mom didn't flinch. She just stared him down, her blue eyes —my eyes— cold and unyielding.
"We will pay. Now get off my doorstep."
He grumbled something under his breath about contracts and lawyers, shoving the clipboard under his arm before stomping off down the hall. The door to his ground-floor office slammed shut, the sound echoing like a gunshot in the quiet building.
I let out a breath I didn't realize I was holding and stepped forward, clearing my throat. "Mom?"
She turned, and the hard mask on her face dissolved instantly, replaced by a weary softness. "Alex, synu. You're home!" She pulled me into a quick, fierce hug, her arms strong despite her long hours. As usual, she smelled of hospital soap and faint, honest sweat. "Everything okay at school?"
"Yeah," I lied with a practiced ease, the word tasting like cardboard. The last thing she needed was to hear about my petty high school drama. "Just... feeling a bit off. Headache or… something."
She nodded, her hand on my back as she ushered me inside. Our apartment was small and showed its age. My eyes caught the persistent plink... plink... plink from the kitchen faucet, a sound so constant we usually ignored it. The coffee table in the living room had a corner where the cheap wood-grain veneer was peeling away, revealing the particle board underneath. The walls were thin, the muffled sounds of our neighbors' arguments and the game show filtering through like ghosts. Mom busied herself at the sink, rinsing a mug with a bit more force than necessary. I could see her hands were shaking slightly.
"That guy..." I started, dropping my bag by the door. "We can figure something out. I could... I don't know, pick up some odd jobs after school?"
She turned off the faucet and dried her hands on a thin dish towel before facing me, her expression firm.
"Don't you worry about it, Alex. It's all just talk. Jones barks loud, but he's all noise. Everyone knows the building isn’t even up to code — which would definitely come out if he tried to evict us. Neither of us want the trouble. Don’t worry; we'll be fine." She reached out and ruffled my hair, a gesture that used to annoy me but now felt comforting. "You've got enough on your plate with school. You focus on that. One day, you'll be out there, making a difference. Maybe even with those shadows of yours."
I forced a nod, but her words were a strange mix of comfort and pain. She believed in me, in my "useless" power, with a conviction that I could never seem to muster myself. "Yeah. Maybe."
"Go rest," she said, her voice softening as she turned back to the counter to start preparing dinner. "We’re having pierogi tonight — your favorite!"
I headed to my room, the door clicking softly shut behind me. It was a small space, my whole world crammed into a ten-by-twelve box. On the walls, posters of old Detroit landmarks — the Michigan Central Station in its prime, the Guardian Building's intricate facade — were taped over cracks in the plaster. The window overlooked a narrow, brick-walled alley, and the late afternoon light filtered through the dusty blinds in slanted, golden bars.
A single bed with rumpled sheets was pushed against one wall. My desk was a cluttered landscape of sketches— mostly architectural drawings of crumbling buildings — my school-issued tablet, and a half-finished model of the Ambassador Bridge. I loved Bridges — loved them them for their honesty. They were built to be strong. To connect things. To last. Even in ruins, you could see the solid bones, the ambition of the project. These drawings felt more real than all the heroes in the world.
I flopped onto the bed, staring at the ceiling, where a network of fine cracks spread out from the light fixture like a silent, frozen lightning strike. My mind wouldn't settle. The landlord's words echoed, the rent hanging over us like a storm cloud about to break. Mom's reassurance felt thin, like paper stretched over a gaping hole. It felt like we were always one bad month, one unexpected expense, away from it all falling apart.
And yet... tomorrow night. Mia. The Packard Plant.
The thought pushed everything else aside, a single, bright spark in the overwhelming gray. Sneaking through those ruins, her hand maybe brushing mine in the dark, the shared thrill of discovery. What if we actually found something? A real micro-fracture, shimmering in the darkness just like her cousin said?
Or maybe it would just be more empty halls and silence, our laughs filling the void where machines once roared.
I rolled over, my own shadow pooling unnaturally under the bed — thicker and darker than it should rightly be in the dim light. On a whim, I detached one, watching it slide across the floor like a spill of black ink. But as always, is was flat, silent, intangible.
Useless.
But tomorrow... maybe in the deep gloom of the plant, surrounded by the ghosts of the past, they'd feel like something more. Like potential, waiting for a spark.
From the kitchen, I could hear the faint, soft sound of my mom humming a Ukrainian lullaby she used to sing to me when I was small. The familiar melody was a comforting anchor. I closed my eyes, the rough texture of the worn blanket against my cheek, caught between the warmth of my home and the cold threat of the world outside. And inside me, the anticipation for the night to come began to build, a small, defiant flame against the encroaching darkness of my daily life.
1.3
The night air was crisp, carrying the faint, metallic bite of impending rain mixed with the city's perpetual undercurrent of exhaust and rust. It was just past 11:30 p.m., and the streets of Sector 8 were deserted, save for the occasional flicker of headlights from a late-night delivery truck or the distant wail of a police siren echoing off the abandoned warehouses.
I pedaled my bike slowly, the chain clicking rhythmically against the gears, my breath fogging in the chill. My old ten-speed was a rusty relic Mom had scavenged from a yard sale years ago. Its frame was scarred with dents and the tires were worn thin from too many miles on cracked pavement. Every rotation of the pedals felt like pushing against the weight of the week.
The quiet solitude of the ride was a welcome antidote to yesterday’s poison. Out here, under the washed-out glow of the city sky, there was no Derek with his effortless cruelty; no Mr. Jones with his casual venom. There was just the rhythmic creak of my bike and the cold wind on my face, a physical sensation that helped ground me. It was a chance to breathe, to push the feeling of powerlessness away with every turn of the pedals. I wasn't just looking for distraction tonight. I was looking for a pocket of the world where the rules felt different, where a government classification didn't define you and the number in your bank account didn't matter.
A place where Mia and I could just… be.
I wore black jeans, a dark hoodie pulled up to hide my hair, and a ski mask rolled up like a beanie for now — better safe than sorry, as Mia always said. In my backpack, I carried a flashlight, a water bottle, and one of the tasers she'd insisted on; the other was with her, along with two cans of bear spray clipped to our belts.
"Urban exploring 101," she'd texted earlier. "You never know what kind of creeps are squatting in these places."
I spotted her already waiting at our usual meet-up spot, a shadowed corner under a flickering streetlight near the old rail yard. Mia straddled her own bike — a sleek black mountain model she'd fixed up herself — dressed in dark cargo pants, a black jacket zipped to her chin, and her own ski mask perched on her head like a crown. Her long hair was tied back in a ponytail, and even in the dim light, her warm brown skin glowed faintly under the sodium lamps. She grinned as I rolled up, that mischievous spark in her deep brown eyes cutting through the night like a beacon.
"Took you long enough, Kozak. Thought you chickened out."
"Pfft, like I'd miss this," I shot back, pulling up beside her. My voice was muffled slightly by the cold, but the excitement was real. She eyed the taser clipped to my belt and snorted.
"Look at you, being all Mr. Tactical. You even remember which end the lightning comes out of?"
"Very funny," I deadpanned. "Just trying to keep up with you, Ms. 'I brought enough bear spray to take down a family of grizzlies'."
"Hey, grizzlies, tweakers, same difference in the dark," she retorted, her grin widening.
We bumped fists, her gloved hand warm against mine, and she handed me one of the bear spray cans. "For the wildlife," she said with a wink.
We pulled down our ski masks — black fabric that itched a bit against my skin but hid our faces just in case a stray camera or cop was watching. Not that anyone cared much about this part of Detroit, of course; the neighborhood was a ghost town of forgotten factories and boarded-up stores, left to rot after the big rift scares in the early 2000’s… But Mia was right — better safe than sorry.
We pedaled off, the wind whipping at our clothes, the sound of our tires humming against the asphalt.
The ride to the Packard Plant was a journey through a graveyard of industry. We passed the skeletal remains of a Fisher Body plant, its roof long since collapsed, leaving twisted steel beams exposed to the sky like the ribs of a metal leviathan. In the distance, through a maze of darkened streets, we saw the flicker of a fire burning in an oil drum — the homeless warding off the cold.
We cycled past a concrete wall where a faded DCA warning poster, its edges curled and peeling, had been sprayed over with fresh graffiti: a crude drawing of a rift with a giant middle finger sticking out of it. The moon was a sliver overhead, casting pale light that turned everything monochrome, like we were biking through an old black-and-white film. My shadows trailed behind me, elongated and dancing in the streetlights — and for once, they felt like allies rather than reminders of my uselessness.
We arrived around midnight, chaining our bikes to a rusted fence post hidden behind a cluster of overgrown bushes. Before us, the Packard Plant sprawled like a skeletal giant — acres of crumbling concrete and steel, windows shattered like broken teeth. The graffiti here was a territorial map. Crude scythes cutting through rift symbols —the mark of the Rift Reapers, a local gang— were sprayed over the tags of smaller gangs. Anti-DCA slogans were everywhere: "THEY PROMISE SAFETY, THEY BUILD CAGES."
The air smelled of rust, wet earth, and something faintly acrid, like burning wires. Piles of of debris —twisted metal, broken glass, discarded tires— littered the ground.
"I’m thinking ground floor entry," Mia whispered, her voice thrilled, "through that busted window over there."
We slipped through a gap in the fence, ski masks down, flashlights off for now to avoid drawing eyes. The window was once a large, waist-high rectangle of thick, wire-reinforced glass — but now was mostly a gaping hole. The remaining shards clung to the rusted metal frame like jagged teeth, glinting faintly in the sliver of moonlight. We had to hoist ourselves over the sill one by one, careful to avoid the sharp edges that threatened to snag our clothes and skin.
The interior was a cavern of darkness, the beam of Mia’s flashlight cutting through like a knife. The air was thicker here, heavy with mold and decay, and every step echoed faintly. Her light swept over a landscape of industrial ghosts: massive, silent engine blocks on a dead assembly line, a forgotten workman's boot lying on its side, its leather cracked and stiff. We moved with practiced ease, using hand signals to point out potential hazards — a patch of weakened floor, a tangle of loose cables.
This was our cathedral, a place of silent, decaying majesty. Our sneakers crunched on glass shards and loose gravel.
"This place is huge," Mia murmured, her light sweeping over rusted conveyor belts and overturned crates. "Feels like a tomb."
We moved deeper, hearts pounding with that mix of fear and excitement. Then, ahead, the beam hit something wrong — a wide section of floor was flooded with murky water, at least ankle-deep, reflecting the light in oily ripples…
And above it, dangling from a frayed cable in the ceiling, was a live power cable — spitting sparks intermittently, the hum of electricity audible even from twenty feet away. The wire swayed slightly, as if stirred by a draft, and a blue arc jumped to the water below, sending a hiss and a puff of steam!
I grabbed Mia’s arm, pulling her back. "Stop. Look — that’s live! But power should’ve been cut decades ago. This place is supposed to be abandoned."
Her eyes widened behind the ski mask.
"Oh shit, you’re right! Someone must be tapping the grid. Means squatters — or worse."
The sharp, clean scent of ozone from the sparks cut through the musty air. We stood frozen, the low hum of the wire a constant, menacing thrum in the silence.
"Mia, I’ve got a bad feeling about this,” I whispered, gesturing towards the cable. “That? That isn't just a couple of homeless guys trying to power a lamp. This much power... it's got to be a drug lab, or a chop shop, or… something. Something organized."
Mia nodded slowly, her adventurous excitement finally giving way to genuine caution. This was beyond our usual explorations.
The hum of the wire was an ominous growl. In a place like this, electricity meant occupation. We exchanged a glance —hers cautious, mine already screaming abort.
"We should really get out of here," I whispered. "Call it in anonymous or something."
Mia hesitated, then nodded — but before we could turn, a low murmur filtered through the darkness ahead.
Voices.
Laughter, rough and edged.
She froze, then crept forward, pulling me with her. "Just a peek," she mouthed. My pulse hammered… but I followed her lead, crouching low behind a rusted machine frame. The voices grew clearer, coming from a cleared area around a corner —lit by the stolen power.
Peering through a gap in the debris, we saw a makeshift camp. Stacked crates have been used to create a crude wall, blocking off a section of the factory floor. The string lights were bare, industrial bulbs that cast a harsh, buzzing glare, leaving deep pools of shadow in the corners. In the center of the lit area was a disgusting-looking, stained floral-print couch, and next to it, a dented refrigerator hummed loudly, its door covered in rust spots.
Next to it was a folding card table littered with empty beer cans, greasy fast-food wrappers, and a scattered deck of playing cards. Several of the wooden crates had been pried open, revealing their contents: stacks of high-end electronics still in their boxes.
Around the camp was a group of about a half-dozen rough-looking types. Two burly guys in stained jackets were busy unpacking crates, stacking the boxes of electronics—tablets, comms units, high-end gear that screamed black market. They moved with the bored efficiency of practiced warehouse workers, laughing as they sorted the haul, the air smelling of sweat and cigarette smoke mixed with the faint ozone from a hot plate warming up canned food. Nearby, two more stood guard, automatic rifles slung over their shoulders -- they looked relaxed as they enjoyed their cigarettes, confident in the fact that nobody would be hanging around the seemingly abandoned factory at this time of night.
And, at the center of it all, stood two figures whose appearance positively screamed Flux: the leaders of the gang.
As I took in the scene, my mind flashed to what we’d learned in Rift Studies class. In places like the African warlord states or the splintered territories in Southeast Asia, powerful Flux villains were kings, carving out fiefdoms amidst the chaos of uncontrolled rift zones. But not here. Not in the US. The existential threat of the rifts had forged a grim consensus among the world's stable, civilized nations: humanity had to be united against the invading menace. Rogue, super-powered elements, especially powerful ones, were a cancer to be excised. Typically, any Flux with A-list potential or higher was either scouted, licensed, and brought into the system — or they were mercilessly hunted down and neutralized. Thus, the criminal underworld was generally left to the C-listers and below — still dangerous, to be sure. A Ceti level power was more than strong enough to terrorize civilians and outmatch regular cops — but it was not usually the kind of threat that required a Tomahawk Missile or a call to the likes of Captain Comet.
These guys were exactly that.
The first was a wiry guy in his twenties, shirtless to show off a torso riddled with scars, skull tattoos, and fresh track marks—clearly a meth-head, his eyes wild and jittery under a shaved head. He flexed his fingers, and, with a sickening crack, bone spikes erupted from his knuckles, lengthening like demented claws, before he retracted them back in – seemingly a nervous tick of some kind.
This was Spike, a moderately famous local C-lister supervillain.
My mind raced, trying to remember what I’ve heard and read about this guy. Limited auto-biokinesis. Hyper-regeneration of bone tissue. Bones dense enough to rival steel in durability. He could form crude blades, bone projectiles, and even subdermal plating. According to the news, he could even shrug off small-arms fire.
I figure he might have even made the B list… except he was a tweaker. A known meth head. But that didn’t make him any less terrifying.
Beside him was another figure — slimmer and undeniably feminine, wearing a black body suit and a featureless white mask. "Ghost," Spike addressed her, and I remembered where I’d heard that name. Ghost was a moniker the local media gave to a local thief who’d made a bit of a splash a few months back by stealing several million dollars’ worth of high-end diamond jewelry, entering and leaving without a single trace.
Allegedly, her power was a kind of selective intangibility that allowed her to walk through walls.
How did that even work?, I wondered to myself.
It made no sense at all. Assuming she used that power to phase through walls, she should have plummeted through the floor the second she went non-corporeal, pulled to the center of the Earth by gravity.
But she didn't.
Somehow.
A bitter, acidic pang of jealousy hit me. Here was a person who could pass through objects and was probably invulnerable while intangible… while I could make a shadow puppet. The universe had a sick sense of humor.
The gang —the Rift Reapers, no doubt— appeared to be in the process of discussing the haul from the new heist. I froze as I listened in.
"…smooth as always," Spike praised, clapping Ghost on the shoulder. "That warehouse job? Flawless. No alarms, no traces. That power of yours is really something else."
Ghost tilted her head, mask impassive. "Easy pickings. Their security was a joke—phased right past everything. Hauled out three crates of the good stuff before they even knew we were there."
The camp runners chuckled, one wiping sweat from his brow as he stacked another box. "Boss, this haul's gold. We flip it quick, and we'll be set for a long time."
Spike leaned back on a crate, bone spikes retracting with a snap. "Damn right! Keep it moving people — sort the high-end stuff first. And watch the perimeter; last thing we need is some homeless freak sniffing around where they shouldn't."
My heart slammed in my chest. "Mia, we gotta go. Now." I hissed, tugging her sleeve. "Call the cops outside."
She nodded, eyes wide with fear, and we backed away slowly, hearts pounding.
But my foot caught a discarded bottle I failed to notice, which went flying with a loud clang — and the noise echoed like a gunshot in the enclosed space. A sudden, dead silence fell over the camp. Though they didn’t yet see where we were, every head snapped in our direction. A slow, predatory grin spread across Spike’s face.
"What the hell… who’s there?" he bellowed, his voice echoing in the cavernous space. "Get them! Quickly!"
Panic surged, hot and absolute. We dropped all pretense of stealth and bolted. Our flashlights, now switched on, sliced wildly through the darkness.
The two gunmen opened fire, the roar of their rifles deafening in the enclosed space. Muzzle flashes lit up the darkness in strobing, nightmarish bursts as bullets sparked and ricocheted off metal machinery around us. The chase was a cacophony of terror — our own ragged, desperate breaths; the crunch of heavy boots on gravel right behind us; the taunting laughter of the gang; and the sickening thwump-thwump-thwump of Spike's bone shards embedding themselves in the concrete pillars we dodged between.
Fortunately, the gunmen quickly fell behind, their heavy gear and lack of powers — and flashlights — making it far too difficult to navigate the treacherous, debris-strewn darkness at speed.
Unfortunately, the powered gang members were more competent: Ghost was a flicker in the periphery, a phantom moving through all obstacles as if they weren't even there.
We made our way back in record time, hitting the edge of the flooded section with the live wire sparking above.
"Just jump it! Run!" I yelled. Mia splashed through, clearing the puddle. I tried to follow — but Ghost materialized behind me, her arms locking around my neck in a chokehold. "You there! Stop! Or he dies!" she snarled at Mia.
The world compressed to the crushing pressure on my windpipe. Air vanished. Black spots bloomed in my vision. My entire life —the smell of my mom's pierogi, the sound of Mia's laugh, the feel of a pencil sketching a perfect line— flashed through my mind not as a movie, but as a single, blinding point of light that was about to be extinguished.
My useless shadows writhed at my feet, two-dimensional and impotent. As helpless as I was.
So, this is it, some detached part of my brain observed calmly. Killed in a puddle by a ghost and a meth-head. Will anyone even find my body?
But beneath the panic, something else ignited. A raw, primal fury.
No. Not me. Not like this. I refuse to die here!
I might have been a cornered rat — but cornered rats bite back!
Adrenaline flooded through me like a burst dam. I stomped Ghost’s foot hard —she yelped, not expecting the move— and I twisted, yanking the bear spray from my belt. The next few actions happened as if in slow motion.
The canister hissed, a cloud of burning mist hitting her face.
Ghost screamed, staggering back, and I kicked her toward the water.
She flailed, phasing reflexively as she fell… but not before her hand brushed against the dangling, sparking wire.
Time itself seemed to stutter.
A brilliant, silent flash of blue-white light erupted from the point of contact, illuminating the entire space for a split second as the circuit completed. The low hum of the current exploded into a vicious, crackling BZZZZT! that vibrated through the floor. The air filled with the overpowering stench of ozone and the sickeningly sweet smell of cooking meat and burning hair. Ghost's body went rigid, every muscle seizing in a horrific, violent convulsion. Her masked face tilted toward the ceiling in a silent scream as arcs of raw electricity danced over her form. Then, just as suddenly, she went limp — a puppet with its strings cut, and collapsed dead into the water, her mask hitting the concrete with a sharp crack.
And then, my shadows moved on their own.
They flowed from me with a hunger I had never been consciously aware of, a living stream of darkness that rolled over her body like ink, engulfing it. A sudden rush hit me, so intense it almost buckled my knees. It was a feeling of pure, euphoric release — but it was threaded with an invasive, glacial cold. It was the feeling of a key turning in a lock I never knew existed inside me. A low, resonant hum filled my skull, a sound that felt older than stone.
And with it, a change: my shadows no longer looked like flat projections. They had a depth to them now — an infinite, cold void that hungered in the dark.
For a split second, I wasn't in a factory. I was a little girl on a swing, laughing as my father pushed me higher, the sun warm on my face. The memory, not mine, shattered as the pleasure crested — it felt like a wave of sunlight after decades in a cave, like a juicy steak after weeks of starvation, like a glass of ice-cold water after days of thirst.
My body shuddered despite myself, my eyes half-closed in a moment pure bliss.
"Alex, run!" Mia’s terrified scream cut through the haze.
Spike rounded the corner, his eyes wild with meth and fury, taking in my form standing above Ghost’s downed body.
"You bastard! I’ll fucking gut you!" He reached back and, with a gruesome, wet crack, tore his own spine from his body. It regrew almost instantly as he shaped the length of bone into a jagged, serrated blade and charged.
He closed the distance in what felt like an instant, and instinct took over.
Something in my mind shifted — and immediately, the world dissolved into a nauseating, grayscale blur. All solid objects —pillars, crates, Spike himself— became translucent, ghostly images. Sound warped into a distant, underwater drone. A wave of vertigo washed over me as the solid floor vanished, leaving me feeling utterly untethered from reality, a formless cloud of cold, dark smoke in a world made of tinted glass.
As if in slow motion, I watched Spike swing his bone-sword…
And it passed harmlessly through my chest with a faint whisper of displaced air. I flailed in panic, my own arm lashing out —passing right through his head without resistance.
A sudden sensory shock hit me.
I… can touch him?
My body rushed back to reality with a sensation that was an obscene, tactile nightmare. I felt a sudden, jarring resistance as my intangible hand became solid matter inside the soft, yielding warmth of Spike’s brain. There was a wet, popping squelch that I felt in my teeth. The rough, sharp scrape of his skull against my knuckles.
Spike’s body went rigid instantly. A single, choked gasp escaped his lips. His eyes bulged — not with pain, but with a final, uncomprehending shock as his entire universe ended… And he dropped, the bone blade clattering down to the concrete.
My shadows engulfed him too. They were still unsatisfied — far from it, in fact! The second wave was a violent torrent to the first’s gentle flood. The euphoria was sharper too, this time — it felt jagged, laced with the bitter dregs of Spike’s meth-fueled rage and the hollow-point ache of his addiction.
I saw flashes again: a lit pipe; a needle sliding into a vein; the sneering face of a dealer; a memory of a terrified kid hiding under a bed while his drunk father screamed in the kitchen. It was a violation, a forced intimacy with a dead man's pain that scoured me raw even as the pleasure of the experience rocked me to my core once more. It left me shaking, gasping in the sudden, ringing silence.
Darkness enveloped us completely —Mia’s flashlight had dropped somewhere, its beam pointing at a damp wall. Her voice trembled from the shadows, small and terrified.
"…Alex? Alex, what’s happening? Are you alright?"
I stood there, my form flickering in and out of existence like a faulty projection. In seconds, the intoxicating, horrific rush of pleasure vanished as if it had never been, leaving a cold, hollow vacuum in its place. The weight of what I’d done, of what I’d become, crashed down on me all at once.
I looked down at my right hand. It was slick with blood and something else.
Something gray.
It clung to my skin like some kind of demented honey while below me, my own shadows still writhed — hungry, and darker than I had ever seen them before.
The only sound was the slow, rhythmic drip... drip... drip... of Spike's blood falling from my fingertips into the water below.
Interlude: Jurisdiction
Four in the morning was the city's quietest hour, a time when the metropolis held its breath. Most of Detroit was asleep, lost in dreams that were blessedly free of quantum fractures and the monsters they spit out. But the threats never slept, and neither did the Dimensional Containment Agency. As the last vestiges of the night pressed down on the silent streets, Agent Elena Vasquez pulled her unmarked SUV to a stop, its headlights cutting through the gloom and illuminating the crumbling silhouette of the Packard Plant.
She was mid-thirties, with sharp features honed by years on the job: Olive skin, dark hair pulled into a tight bun under her cap, and hazel eyes that missed nothing. Her build was athletic, earned from academy drills and field chases, and she carried herself with the quiet authority of someone who'd seen too many rifts open and too many Fluxes snap. Detroit wasn't her first posting —she'd cut her teeth in Chicago's incursion zones— but Sector 8's decay had a way of wearing on you.
Take the plant: once a titan of industry, now a sprawling corpse of 80 acres, 80 buildings, millions of square feet reduced to graffiti-scarred concrete and twisted steel. The place was a magnet for trouble —squatters, dealers, urban explorers with more curiosity than sense.
And now, apparently, dead supervillains.
The interior of the vehicle was her sanctuary of order: a tactical laptop secured in its cradle, a travel mug of black coffee still warm in the console, and the faint, clean scent of the cabin's air filtration system. It was a hermetically sealed bubble of of control. But, the moment the door opened, that bubble burst.
The immediate change was a physical shock to her. The recycled, temperature-controlled air was replaced by a raw, humid chill that clung to her skin. The grit of Detroit’s Sector 8 rushed in — a wave of damp, metallic air thick with the smells of wet, decaying concrete, the sharp tang of rust, and a faint, chemical bitterness that spoke of industrial runoff that had seeped into the soil for decades. The air felt heavy, almost greasy, a stark contrast to the sterile environment she had just left. It was a familiar assault on the senses, but one she never truly got used to. She took a deep breath, the taste of rust and rot coating her tongue, and mentally adjusted. This was the job.
The ground crunched under her boots as she walked — gravel mixed with shattered glass and weeds pushing through cracked asphalt. She'd been woken by the call at 3:17 a.m., her phone buzzing on the nightstand like an alarm for another mess. "Flux bodies at Packard," the dispatcher had said, clipped and professional. "Local PD secured the scene, but it's yours now."
Jurisdiction.
It was always the DCA’s jurisdiction when powers were involved.
Normally, a call like this —two dead Fluxes, one of them a known gang leader Supervillain— would have triggered a full-scale DCA response. If this had been a scene at a posh corporate tower downtown, the street would be flooded with the agency's signature black and blue vans. There would be a mobile command center, a team of tactical agents in sleek black FluxTech armor securing a multi-block radius, and a forensics crew in clean-room suits meticulously cataloging every quantum particle they could scan.
…But that kind of treatment was for the people who paid for the premium services. For the corporate clients whose tax dollars paid the bills and kept the agency's high-tech toys running.
Here, in Sector 8? The DCA’s response was… her.
Just her.
This wasn't just a budget issue, either. It was policy. This sector was internally classified as a containment zone, not a protection zone. A liability considered unworthy of the full force of the government’s protection. A bleeding wound the DCA had decided to bandage with yellow tape and neglect rather than stitch shut.
It was also her punishment duty.
Six months ago, she’d had the temerity to publicly contradict Deputy Director Thorne during a briefing on the Aethelred Complex incursion, pointing out a flaw in his tactical plan that, if followed, would have cost civilian lives. She was right, of course — but being right had earned her a one-way transfer from the bustling Chicago field office to this forgotten rust-belt shithole.
Thorne had called it a "realignment of assets."
She called it being put out to pasture.
So now, instead of a full CSI team, she had the DPD. Instead of a tactical squad, she had her handgun. And instead of state-of-the-art quantum sensors, she had to rely on herself.
Not to imply, of course, that she alone wasn’t enough. Vasquez adjusted her tactical vest, the DCA patch on her shoulder catching the faint reflection of the flashing blue lights, and scanned the perimeter. Before taking another step, she closed her eyes for a half-second, concentrating. The world fell away, replaced by a focused, internal silence. When she opened them again, the scene was rendered in shades of gray. Her power, a form of controlled synesthesia the DCA had dismissively labeled D-class, washed over her. The brass called it "Esoteric Analysis," a uselessly vague term for something intensely personal. To her, it was simply… focus.
The monochrome world was painted with information. The heat from the DPD cruisers' engines glowed a faint, warm orange. The disturbed gravel where the first responders had walked left faint, pulsing blue footprints. The fluttering police tape seemed to hum with a low, yellow frequency. Hers was a D-class power because it wasn’t considered combat viable — she couldn't stop a bullet or lift a car — but it still made her one of the best crime scene investigators in the entire Great Lakes region. It let her see the echoes of what had happened. Easily spot details others would miss. And here, a faint, sickly green trail —the faint scent of ozone and something wrong— led from the factory entrance.
A burly sergeant spotted her approach and waved her over, his breath fogging in the cold. He was in his fifties, grizzled beard flecked with gray, uniform rumpled from an overnight shift. "Agent Vasquez, I presume? Sergeant Kowalski, DPD. Glad you're here. This one's above our pay grade." He extended a gloved hand, and she shook it firmly, noting the faint tremor —not just the cold, she guessed, but the lingering adrenaline of getting called in to such a dangerous and unpredictable setting.
"This one's a real mess," Kowalski admitted, his voice a low gravelly rumble. He was a veteran, the kind of cop who'd seen the worst of what people could do to each other, but this was different. This had the stink of the unnatural — and it unsettled him to the core. "I’ve been a cop for thirty years. Seen mob hits, cartel stuff... never gets easy, but you understand it. This..." He shook his head, a gesture of profound unease. "This just ain't right."
"What do we have here?" Vasquez asked, her voice steady, cutting through the morning hush. She pulled out her tablet, already syncing with the scene's prelim report, but she preferred hearing it firsthand — cops on the ground caught details the logs missed.
Kowalski nodded toward the factory's gaping entrance.
"Call came in around 1:45 a.m. — anonymous tip about gunfire and screams inside the old Packard plant. Uniforms arrived by 2:00, secured the perimeter. We went in cautious; place is a death trap — collapsed floors, exposed wiring, conveyor belts half-buried in debris. But deeper in, we found a camp."
He led her inside. To her senses, the factory floor was a canvas of monochrome grays interspersed with occasional bursts of vibrant, saturated colors. A trail of chaotic energy in the air glowed a virulent yellow-green, the visual representation of panicked adrenaline and fear. She could see the path of a chase of some kind. Scuff marks on the floor from sneakers fighting for purchase glowed bright blue. Bullet impacts on the concrete pillars pulsed like angry red embers. And scattered amongst it all were faint, fading trails of sickly white bio-energy — bone shards, sticking out of the floor and walls.
"As you can see, the camp was set up in a cleared section, blocked off with stacked crates," Kowalski continued, gesturing with his flashlight. “And do check out those crates." He pointed his beam at several open wooden boxes. "That's a staging area for stolen goods if I’ve ever seen one. That one there’s full of precursor chemicals — enough to cook a serious batch of meth. And those two over there? They are packed with high-end consumer electronics. FluxTech tablets and comms units. All brand new. We're betting it's the score from the Northgate FluxTech warehouse robbery last week. Reapers' MO is to jailbreak the software and sell them on the black market for a third of the price."
Vasquez swept her beam over the area. The overturned table glowed with the violent red of sudden impact. The scattered cards left faint, lingering traces of body oil, a pale orange fading to gray. Her Focus told her the story her analytical mind had already guessed: there was an intrusion. The question was… by whom?
"And the bodies?"
Kowalski grimaced, leading her around a corner to a partially-flooded section. The air here was a riot of sensory data. The scent of ozone from the wire overhead was a sharp, violet haze. The smell of charred flesh was a thick, greasy brown that positively coated the back of her throat. Two bodies lay there: One, a woman in a black full-body motorcycle suit and featureless white mask, laying face-down in the water — Ghost. The other, a heavily tattooed form crumpled nearby — Spike.
Vasquez knelt by Ghost's body, her focus at its most intense. To her senses, the body glowed with the frantic, crackling blue-white energy of electrocution. But other details sang out in color. A foot print on the suit's fabric shone a bright, earthy brown. A fine, aerosolized cloud of pale pink —Oleoresin Capsicum— still hung in the air around the cracked mask, its scent a sharp, burning line in her perception.
She deduced the likely sequence. The pink cloud of spray. The brown impact of the boot. The blue-white explosion of the current. A crude, but effective takedown.
Then she moved to Spike. His body was cold, a null point in her senses, the fading bio-electric signature of life completely extinguished. There were no marks on him — no cuts, no bruises, no entry wounds of any kind. Yet, thin rivulets of blood had trickled from his nose, ears, and the corners of his eyes, staining his skin a darker shade of crimson in her focused vision. It was a classic sign of massive, catastrophic brain trauma, but without any obvious external cause.
She straightened up, noticing something in the water.
"Kowalski, please confirm with your team. The power to this section is cut, correct?"
The Sergeant dutifully keyed his radio. "Dispatch, confirm kill on the local grid." A crackle of static and an affirmative came back. "Affirmative, Sergeant. It's dead."
"Good." Vasquez's light played over the murky water near Spike's body. Something long and pale lay half-submerged. She reached down, her gloved fingers closing around a jagged, serrated hilt. With a slight sucking sound, she pulled a gruesome blade from the puddle. Water cascaded off a long, segmented weapon that was unmistakably bone, with vertebrae forming a cruel, sharp edge.
A younger patrolman who was part of the perimeter crew went pale, his hand flying to his mouth. "Jesus Christ!" he gagged. "Is... is that a spine?" He turned away, retching dryly.
Vasquez didn't even glance at him. She held the weapon up, her light tracing its length.
"Yes," she said, her voice a flat, analytical monotone. "This was Spike's specialty. He was known to pull out parts of his own skeleton to use as weapons. They would regrow instantly." She turned the weapon over, examining the hilt. "So, he was armed. He charged someone, tried to kill them with this." Her eyes scanned the empty space around the body, then looked back at the dead man. "The question is... who?"
She placed the bone-sword carefully on a dry patch of concrete to be bagged as evidence.
"Tough son of a bitch, that Spike — shrugged off bullets like rain. How the hell did someone take him down this cleanly?" Kowalski murmured, his voice distant.
Vasquez stood, her mind racing, letting her focus fade. The world flooded back in with its normal, dull colors. "Let us speculate together, Sergeant. What do you think we are we looking at?"
Kowalski blew out a breath. "Well, at first, I assumed Ghost was the one who did him in — phased her hand right into his brain by the look of it. Maybe an internal power play. Reapers have been fracturing lately — a civil war seems possible."
"No," Vasquez said with certainty. "I see a lot of gun shots directed from the camp area and down the hallway, towards the area where you found the bodies — but no shots directed back at the camp. I would say the gang was running and attacking something together — not fighting each other." She gestured towards Ghost's body. "Besides, think about it tactically. Ghost was a C-rank Nomoi who could go intangible at will. That is no joke! If this was an internal struggle and she was the one who killed Spike, she would have been the victor, and we might have never even gotten the call to begin with. So how does someone like her end up dead from simple electrocution? A C-ranker who regularly walks through walls murders her partner, and then has an accident with a dangling wire? Please. It makes no sense. No, she was taken by surprise, just like the rest of them. They were clearly fighting someone else."
"Maybe a new type of Echo got loose?" Kowalski offered.
"Negative," she countered. "Echo attacks leave behind far more collateral damage. Far more… residue. But here? I see only human traces." She gestured back toward the camp. "Actually, all of that stolen tech almost makes me think corporate. A rival organization sends their own asset to disrupt the Reapers' new enterprise. The clinical kill on Spike fits that profile."
"Or, it’s a new vigilante," Kowalski grumbled.
"Hmm" Vasquez said, the image of Spike’s bloodied face in her mind, "Yes. Perhaps it’s an unregistered Flux with a novel power set. Someone who isn’t yet in any database. A black swan."
She reactivated her focus, sweeping the area one last time. Her gaze was drawn to a glint of something deeper in the murky water. It glowed with a faint, artificial orange —the color of mass-produced plastic and metal.
She picked it up carefully. The canister was standard. From a small kit on her belt, she produced a pen-sized chemical analyzer and touched its tip to the residue on the nozzle. The screen confirmed what her senses had already told her: Civilian-grade pepper spray. Approximately 2% capsaicinoid content, with a spray range of at least 25 feet.
"Bag this for me, will you."
Kowalski raised a brow. "Bear spray? Here?"
"Let’s see if you can get prints from it," Vasquez said, her voice now sharp with a new, focused intensity.
1.4
Sunday morning hit hard. My head throbbed with a dull, persistent ache, and my body felt heavy, as if the night had left deep, invisible bruises under my skin. I woke tangled in sweat-damp sheets, the faded poster of pre-rift Kyiv on my wall staring down like a silent judge. The room smelled of stale air and something else, a faint, coppery tang that clung to the back of my throat.
Blood.
I couldn't shake the phantom feeling of it, even though I'd scrubbed my hands raw in the sink last night.
My right hand flexed involuntarily, remembering the wet squelch inside Spike's skull, the way his body had jerked and gone limp. Bile rose in my throat, and I swallowed it down, sitting up fast. It was an accident, I told myself for the hundredth time. Self-defense. But it was more than just aches and a headache. There was a profound, bone-deep coldness in me that had nothing to do with the morning chill, a low hum of energy under my skin like a live wire had been buried in my veins. My nightmares had been fractured, invasive. I'd seen a flash of a little girl on a swing, laughing as a man I didn't know pushed her higher. I'd felt the desperate, itching need for a fix, the rage at a screaming father.
They were ghosts, and they were inside me now.
As I sat up, my gaze fell on the familiar, cramped space of my bedroom — the cracked plaster, the posters of old Detroit landmarks. For a split second, the walls seemed to press in, the ceiling lowering, the air growing thick and suffocating. A wave of pure, primal claustrophobia washed over me, an animal panic that screamed outside, open sky, escape. It was so alien, so powerful, that I gasped, shoving myself back against the headboard. The feeling vanished as quickly as it came, leaving me breathless and shaky.
But it wasn't my fear, I realized. It was Ghost's. Some powers were theorized to have a psychological basis — and of course, a thief who spent her life slipping through solid objects might not like being in a box.
Last night, my Shadows seem to have… eaten (?)… Ghost’s power. And now, parts of her mind became a part of me?
The realization was horrifying. How many nights had I spent lying in this very bed, staring at the ceiling and hating my own power? Hating the "non-combat viable" stamp the DCA had put on my file, the label that defined me as a useless sideshow. I'd wished — with a desperate, burning teenage — to be something more. I’d imagined my shadows hardening into shields, forming into silent, unseen hands that could disarm a criminal, or even just do something useful to help with the rent.
I’d dreamed of being a hero, of having a power that mattered — something that could protect my mom, protect Mia. Something that could make a difference in a world that was constantly trying to grind us down. I had begged the universe for my shadows to be more than just parlor tricks.
And the universe had answered.
It hadn't given me a shield. It had given me a leech. A demon that fed on the dead. The power I'd received was a ravenous mouth that I was chained to. Never — not in my darkest, most frustrated fantasies — would I have asked for something like this.
I had asked for strength, not to be a monster!
I had wished to be a hero, not a walking graveyard.
Mom was already in the kitchen, the sizzle of eggs and the rich smell of onions wafting down the hall. On the small, cluttered counter, an old flat-screen TV was playing the local morning news. Non-FluxTech electronics were dirt cheap, salvaged from a pre-rift era of disposable consumerism, and our little off-brand set was a testament to that. Usually, it was just background noise, but the familiar upbeat news jingle was suddenly cut short by a serious, urgent tone. I froze in the doorway as the anchor's face filled the screen, a graphic flashing over her shoulder: "BREAKING NEWS: SECTOR 8 GANG VIOLENCE."
"We're getting breaking developments out of Sector 8 this morning," she said, her expression grim. "The notorious Rift Reapers leader Spike and his associate Ghost were found dead in an abandoned factory overnight." The screen split, showing a photo of Spike snarling at a camera and a blurry image of Ghost phasing through a wall. "Authorities are officially calling it a result of escalating gang violence, but our experts have other theories. Joining me now are Flux Analysts Julian Croft and Gus O'Malley."
The screen showed two men in separate windows. Julian Croft was in a sharp suit with slicked-back hair, a pristine corporate logo visible on the wall behind him. Gus O'Malley was a heavy-set man in a wrinkled shirt, broadcasting from what looked like a cluttered basement filled with maps and conspiracy boards.
"Julian, let's start with you," the anchor said.
"What we're looking at here, Carol," Croft said, his voice dripping with self-important drama, "is a professional, high-level neutralization. Spike was a known C-plus threat. To take him down so cleanly, with no witnesses and no collateral damage? This was no back-alley brawl; this was a surgical strike."
I choked on a bite of egg, coughing as the absurd words hit my ears. A surgical strike? It had been panic and a lucky hit with bear spray!
"Gus, you disagree?" the anchor prompted.
"Surgical strike? Julian, you need to get out of your ivory tower!" O'Malley boomed, his voice a gravelly roar. "I'm looking at the prelims, and this stinks of street-level chaos! A phaser, one of the hardest types to pin down, gets taken out by a live wire? That's not surgical, that's sloppy! That's desperation! This is either a power play within the Reapers that went out of control, or we're looking at something that crawled out of a hole in the world. They call this a 'thin place' for a reason, Carol! You don't know what's nesting in these old factories!"
Croft scoffed. "Gus, your 'rift critter' theories are entertaining tabloid fodder, but the kill on Spike was precise. That requires training, not random chaos."
"And you think a corporate hitman would use a faulty wire and leave the scene looking like a tornado hit it?" Gus shot back. "Come on! Who’s being the conspiracy theorist now?"
The anchor cut them off. "Thank you for the heated debate, gentlemen. We'll have more as this story develops."
The TV analysts vanished, replaced by a commercial for Rift-Proof Home Security. The analysts’ confident, clueless voices still echoed in my head.
Surgical strike. Rift critter. Corporate asset.
They were playing a guessing game with my life, turning my terror into morning entertainment. Fortunately, they hadn'tmentioned urban explorers, or bear spray, a bike, or people fleeing the scene. We were so far beneath their notice that we didn't even register as a possibility. My mind flashed back to us, huddled in an alley three blocks away from the factory. Mia had pulled a cheap, untraceable burner phone from her pocket — one of her 'just in case' gadgets. Her voice was shaking as she fed the address to the 911 operator before snapping the phone in half and tossing the pieces into a storm drain.
Smart. Always so smart. They'd never trace that call to us.
A wave of profound, sickening relief washed over me, so intense it made my head swim. We were safe.
I might be a killer, but I was safe.
The thought was so vile it made the eggs in my stomach churn. Mom glanced up from the stove, her focus shifting from the sizzling pan to my face. The worry in her eyes was a familiar, gentle weight. "You look like you didn't sleep at all. Bad dreams?" she said, her voice soft.
I swallowed, the nausea a hard lump in my throat, and slid into a chair at the rickety table. "Y-yeah," I managed, the word barely a whisper. "Just... nightmares and stuff."
She set another plate of eggs in front of me and ruffled my hair. "Eat! You'll feel better." Then, with a sly smile, she added, "Is it girl trouble? Mia, maybe?"
Heat crept up my neck. "Mom..."
She laughed, a warm sound that eased the knot in my chest a little. "What? She's a nice girl. Smart, pretty, from a good family. Grandchildren one day, eh?"
I choked on a bite of egg. "Mom! We're just friends. And I'm sixteen — grandkids? Really?"
She shrugged, sitting across from me with her tea. "Life's very short, Alex. Find happiness where you can." Her eyes got that distant look, the one that meant she was seeing streets and faces a world away. "I didn't leave our home, our life, for you to grow up scared, Alex. I want you to build something here. Something lasting."
Her words, meant to be comforting, landed like stones in my stomach.
A future.
A normal life.
She was talking about a boy who didn't exist anymore, a boy who had become a murderer. A killer. Would she ever forgive me, if she found out what really happened last night?
My phone buzzed — it was Mia.
"You okay? Can't stop thinking about it. Come over? Need 2 talk."
I quickly texted back: "Yeah. B there soon."
I rushed out as hastily as I could manage.
The door to Mia's house opened before my knuckles had even finished their second rap. She didn't say a word, just grabbed my wrist with a surprisingly strong grip and pulled me inside, slamming the door shut. The familiar sounds of her house —her younger brother yelling at a video game, the distant beat of music from her sister's room— were a muffled backdrop to the tense silence she dragged me through, up the stairs to her room.
She shut the door with a quiet click and twisted the lock. Her room was a chaotic sanctuary of her personality —stacks of books on urban decay and rift theory, half-assembled drone parts on her desk, posters of punk bands I'd never heard of. But the vibrant energy of the space was swallowed by the sight of her. She leaned her forehead against the cool wood of the door, her shoulders shaking with silent, ragged sobs.
For a moment, I was frozen. Every cold, analytical instinct that had been buzzing under my skin, every ghost whispering in my head, went silent. All that was left was Mia, and the desperate, all-consuming need to fix this, to put the pieces of her back together, even if my own were shattered beyond repair.
"Mia," I said softly, stepping closer.
She finally turned, and her face was a mess of tear tracks, her eyes red and swollen. "It's my fault," she whispered, the words cracking. "All of it. It's all my fault." She started pacing, her arms wrapped around herself as if she were trying to hold herself together. "I saw the news. A gang war... they have no idea. We were there, Alex. We saw it."
"We're okay," I said, reaching for her, but she flinched away, lost in her spiral of guilt.
"No! We're not! I'm not!" she cried, her voice rising with a hysterical edge. "I'm the one who wanted to go! I'm the one who showed you the drone footage, who said it would be fun! You said we should leave, right there by the wire, you said it, and I wanted a peek." She mimicked her own words with a self-loathing sneer. "Because I was selfish! Because I wanted an adventure! And because of me... because of me..." She choked on a sob, unable to finish.
This time, I didn't hesitate. I stepped in and pulled her into a hug, holding on tight as she finally broke, her body dissolving into tremors against my chest. Her sobs were raw and ugly, the sounds of someone who had held it all in for too long. I just held her, my hand stroking the back of her head, murmuring nonsense words —"It's okay," "I've got you," "We're safe"— over and over. Right now, this was all that mattered.
After a long time, the sobs subsided into shuddering breaths. She didn't pull away, just sagged against me, exhausted.
"It wasn't your fault," I said again, my voice low and firm. "We both made the choice to go in. And what happened to them... that was on them. They were killers, Mia!"
She finally pulled back, wiping her face with the sleeve of her hoodie. She looked small and fragile in the afternoon light filtering through her window. "But Ghost... the wire... I keep seeing it. The flash. You kicked her into it, didn’t you? If… If I hadn’t made you go in there…"
"You didn't make me do anything," I said, forcing a conviction I didn't fully feel into my voice. "She had me in a chokehold. I was panicking, and it was our only chance to escape. Anyone would have done the same thing." I paused, the weight of the situation settling heavily in my gut. But as I looked at her tear-streaked face, another thought surfaced.
"You know," I said, my voice dropping, "we got so lucky it's not even funny." I shook my head, the memory playing out in stark, terrifying detail. "That woman, Ghost... she could phase through solid objects. That would make her practically invincible to anything physical, as long as she was prepared for it. So, if I hadn't hit her with that spray first... and if that wire wasn't right there... Mia, we'd be dead. We would both be dead right now!"
And I was right, of course. At the end of the day, we were just two scared kids who got lucky. It was the other part, the monstrous truth of what happened with my Shadows, that I had to keep buried.
She looked at me, her eyes searching mine. "You're... different today, Alex. I mean, of course you are, but..." She reached up, her fingers brushing my cheek, and then she flinched, pulling her hand back. "You're freezing, Alex! Like ice. Are you getting sick?"
"Just shock, I guess," I replied, capturing her hand and squeezing it. "Bad nightmares."
We sat on her bed, shoulders touching, and she leaned her head against me.
And we talked for hours.
First in her room, then migrating to a couch in the basement when her little brother barged in to grab a forgotten toy.
…
"Remember when we were thirteen and we tried to climb the old Ambassador Bridge trestle?" she asked, her voice quiet. "And that security guard chased us? I thought my heart was going to explode, I was so scared."
"Yeah," I said, the memory feeling like it belonged to another person's life.
"My biggest worry then was what my dad would do if he found out," she said, a sad smile touching her lips. "But now..." She trailed off, shaking her head. Her voice cracked, and the guilt in it hit me like a punch. She hadn’t seen the kills — didn’t know I’d phased, didn’t know my shadows had consumed powers. To her, it was a chase gone wrong, villains tripping into their own trap.
I slid closer, wrapping an arm around her shoulders, pulling her into a hug. She stiffened for a second, then melted into it, her head tucking against my chest, her hair tickling my chin. She was warm, solid, the faint pulse of her heartbeat steadying my own. She clung to me, her hands fisting in my hoodie, and I felt her shudder — a silent sob she didn’t let out.
“I was so scared you wouldn’t make it,” she whispered. “When Ghost grabbed you... I thought... I thought….” She didn’t finish, just pressed closer, and I tightened my hold, the couch creaking under us. The moment stretched, heavy with everything unsaid — her guilt, my secrets, the way we’d survived something that should’ve broken us. Her lavender scent, the softness of her against me, they were a lifeline, pulling me back from the edge of last night’s horror.
I can’t tell her, I decided — not about what my Power was really for. Not about the rush that made me feel alive in a way I hated. If she ever knew, would she still be here, letting me hold her? Or would she see a monster instead of her friend? The thought twisted, and I buried it, focusing instead on her warmth, the way our breathing synced, the faint hum of the TV filling the silence.
2.1
Early December buried Detroit in the first real snow of the season, a soft, silent coup that overthrew the grime and the rust, blanketing the city in a temporary lie of peace. I woke to the sound of it hissing against my windowpane, a gentle static that did little to drown out the low, resonant hum that had become the background music of my life. It was a cold, psychic buzz emanating from the base of my skull, the constant, low-grade thrum of the ghosts I now carried inside me. That hum seemed to be fading a bit of late, but whether it would ever disappear entirely remained to be seen.
Three weeks.
It felt like a lifetime had been compressed into those twenty-one days. The raw horror of the Packard Plant had receded, leaving behind a hard, crystalline latticework of vigilance in my gut. The nightmares were less frequent, no longer dragging me down into suffocating darkness or the frantic, itching need for a fix. Now, they were just echoes, quiet enough to be ignored most days. But the world itself felt different. Edgier. Sharper.
The walk to school was a descent through the city's dying dream. The pristine snow had already been churned into a gray, chemical slurry by the morning traffic. I passed Chen's Bodega, and Old Man Chen was out front in the biting cold, a can of flat gray paint in his hand. He was meticulously trying to cover up a fresh piece of graffiti on his security shutters. It wasn't a gang tag. It was a stylized, almost elegant rendering of a rift tearing open, with the words "THE END IS HERE" scrawled beneath it in a desperate, looping script. Mr. Chen used to give me free candy when I was a kid. Now, his shoulders were slumped, his movements slow with a weariness that went deeper than age. He was painting over one act of despair with another, a coat of bleak gray to cover a cry for oblivion.
The hallways of North High were a familiar kind of chaos, but I moved through them differently now. Derek and his two shadows, Landon and Tyler, were holding court by the water fountain. Derek, a prince in his shimmering holographic jacket, leaned against a locker, but his eyes—and theirs—showed some hesitation the moment I met their gaze. They had begun to learn — perhaps not yet consciously, but in the deep, animal part of the brain that understands patterns.
Today, Derek must have felt the need to reassert his dominance. He stepped directly into my path.
"Hey, Kozak. Still hiding in the shadows?" His voice was loud, a performance for the crowd, but his stance was hesitant, braced for a punchline he couldn't see coming.
I didn't break my stride. I just met his eyes, letting that cold, buzzing confidence settle into my posture. As I walked past him, a thin, almost invisible tendril of shadow, a sliver of pure void darker than the scuffed linoleum, snaked out from my heel. It moved with a silent, liquid grace and, in a gesture too quick for the eye to follow, looped his shoelaces into a perfect, tight double knot.
He took a swaggering step to follow, to deliver another insult. And then he was airborne. He went down hard, his lunch tray sailing through the air in a perfect, tragic arc. A slice of greasy pepperoni pizza slapped against the front of his jacket, followed by a tidal wave of orange soda that soaked him from the chest down. The hallway erupted in a chorus of jeers and the tell-tale chime of a dozen phones starting to record.
Landon, ever the loyal crony, moved in to help him. My focus shifted. Another shadow, this one pooled under an open locker a few feet away, nudged a heavy chemistry textbook. It fell with a loud, hollow thwump, bonking Landon squarely on the head. He yelped, stumbling back into Tyler. And, just like that, all three of them went down in a heap, a perfect storm of flailing limbs and wounded pride.
A hot, bright surge of satisfaction shot through me. This felt good. As the laughter died down, the giddiness didn't fade, but sharpened. I watched Derek slink away, the whispers and snickers of the crowd chipping away at the invisible armor of his reputation. Every time this happened, he lost a piece of it, and a fierce, unapologetic pride swelled in my chest. This was so much better than simply punching him. This was artful. Elegant. We'd just covered Pavlov and Classical Conditioning in Psych class — teaching a dog to salivate at the sound of a bell. What I was attempting here worked on the same principle. Sooner or later, Derek's brain would connect the simple act of trying to bully me with immediate, public humiliation. He was the dog, and my little shadow lessons were the bell.
He'd learn.
…
Gym class was my first period today. The air, thick with the smell of rubber and sweat, vibrated with the squeak of sneakers and Coach Miller's barking orders. Coach Miller himself was a man whose glory days were twenty years and fifty pounds in the past.
Today, we would be playing Basketball.
Of course, the real athletes, the varsity players like Derek, got their PE credit for playing on the school’s team, so they weren't here. No, this was the domain of the regular kids like me.
The schoolyard draft began, a familiar ritual of social humiliation. The chosen captains picked their friends, then the decent players, then the tall kids. The pool of remaining students dwindled until it was just me and two other guys known for their profound lack of coordination.
One of the captains sighed, a sound of pure resignation. "Uh, Kozak? I guess we'll take Kozak."
It wasn't an endorsement; it was a forfeiture. I was one of the last picks, the leftover, the kid you got stuck with. A few guys on the other team snickered. The old Alex would have felt a hot flush of shame, would have spent the game trying to be invisible. But something cold and sharp ignited in my chest.
Show them.
The thought wasn't a burst of teenage anger; it was a calm, dominant whisper of the man I was becoming.
I took my place on the court, the worn basketball feeling like an extension of my own hand now, and I let that cold hum inside me sharpen my senses. The last three weeks hadn't just been nightmares and guilt. They had been a period of intense, secret discovery. Every night, after my mom was asleep, my small bedroom had become a training ground. My Shadows were optionally solid now — thanks to whatever I’d received from Spike, no doubt. But is was Ghost’s power, in particular, that I found particularly fascinating to explore. I had pushed it to the limits and beyond, learning its secrets. She had used her ability like a sledgehammer — all or nothing, a binary switch between solid and intangible. A clumsy tool for walking through walls, with or without carried loot.
But, whether it was because my variant of the Power was more flexible, or due to my greater skill and talent, what I could do was closer to a dial rather than a switch.
Through painstaking trial and error, through nights spent pushing parts of my hand — and only my hand — through my desk until the disorienting vertigo almost made me puke, I'd finally found the trick to it. I could now freely phase parts of myself, independently. And what I’ve discovered… was that my mass was now variable as well.
One of the greatest applications of the phasing ability wasn’t the mere ability to walk through walls. It was momentum manipulation. For instance, by flickering some or all of my body parts out of tangibility during a jump, I could instantly shed their weight and inertia — which would let me coast higher and faster than the initial force would ordinarily allow. This trick also protected me from falls and allowed me to change directions on a dime. While making myself selectively lighter, I could now pull off moves that would leave Olympic gymnasts green with envy — though my coordination and flexibility were still quite ordinary.
Still, it was an incredible way to use the phasing ability — and a fierce, possessive pride swelled in me every time I thought about what I’d accomplished. It was my power now. It felt utterly, completely mine, as if I'd been born with it. The fact that I'd only had it for three weeks felt like a strange, irrelevant detail. I understood it better, wielded it with more finesse than Ghost ever had!
A dark, arrogant thought surfaced, unbidden. Maybe she never deserved a power with this much potential. She was blessed with such a strong, magical ability, and what did she use it for? To walk through walls and commit petty theft? Pah. She never saw the subtlety, the art of it all. That power had been wasted on someone like her.
I would put it to far better use.
In fact, maybe… maybe that Power was always destined to be mine?
The thought was so sharp, so unusual, that it startled me. I shook my head, a quick, almost imperceptible motion, forcing my dark introspections down and refocusing on the court.
The pickup game started. The ball was inbounded to my team's captain, who was immediately double-teamed. He looked for an open man and saw me under the basket, guarded loosely by some skinny kid from my history class. With a frustrated sigh, he passed. The ball spun towards me. The defender moved to intercept, his body a solid wall.
This was it. I timed my jump. As my sneakers pushed off the polished wood, I triggered it.
A high-frequency whine, like an old television powering on, screamed in my skull for a split second. An intense, absolute cold, not like winter, but like the very absence of heat, flashed through my leg muscles. For that single, unseeable instant, my body’s weight and inertia were selectively adjusted. My upward momentum, suddenly far less burdened, gave me an explosive burst of lift. From the outside, it would have just looked like a phenomenal vertical jump — the kind you might see from the pro athletes on TV.
But for me, it was a glorious instant of cheating physics.
I hung in the air a half-second longer than I should have, just long enough for my fingers to wrap cleanly around the ball, inches above the defender's grasping hands.
I landed softly, the impact absorbed by another instinctive micro-phase in my joints.
Then, I pivoted and laid the ball in for an easy two points.
The defender stared, his mouth slightly agape. "Lucky jump, Kozak."
But I knew it wasn't luck.
A few possessions later, I was on defense. The other team's captain drove the lane for what should have been an easy layup. I was out of position, a step too slow. But as he went up, I phased some of my muscles and organs, shedding their weight and allowing me to explode upwards from a dead stop. My hand met the ball at the backboard, a clean, authoritative block that sent the ball flying and the gym into a chorus of "Whoa!"
After that, something shifted.
My teammates, who had been ignoring me, started actively looking for me. They passed me the ball. And I delivered.
I’d drive the lane, and, just as defenders collapsed on me, I would use a micro-phase in my core, shedding and regaining inertia to change direction with a speed and agility that left them grasping at empty air. My body simply too fast for them, it wasn't where it was supposed to be if it followed the usual physical laws.
I’d be driving left, they’d commit, and with a brief flicker of weightlessness, my momentum would shift, and suddenly I'd be exploding to the right for an easy layup.
On defense, I’d anticipate a pass and use a burst of phased acceleration to close a ten-foot gap in the blink of an eye, my hand appearing from nowhere to snatch the ball from its flight path.
To everyone watching, I was just suddenly, inexplicably… a god on the court.
By the end of the game, the usual snickers had turned into cheers. As I sank the final shot, a small, rhythmic chant had started. "Ko-zak! Ko-zak! Ko-zak!"
I stood there, chest heaving, sweat dripping from my chin, and a grin spread across my face.
…
Shortly after lunch, the sound of the chanting was still ringing in my ears when two girls from my class intercepted me. The first was the junior with the curly brown hair — her name was Sarah, I thought.
"That was seriously amazing, Alex," she said, her eyes wide. "I had no idea you could play like that." Her friend nodded enthusiastically. "You were, like, totally flying out there."
"Just a good day, I guess," I said with a casual confidence in my voice that I'd never had before.
"Well, maybe you could show me some of your moves sometime?" Sarah said, a playful smile on her face. She reached out and gave my bicep a light squeeze. "You should give me your number. So that we could… practice together."
Right on cue, Mia appeared at my side, her backpack slung over her shoulder. "Hey, you ready to go?" Her voice was light, but I saw her eyes flick from Sarah's hand on my arm to my face, and her smile was a little too bright.
Sarah, sensing the shift, dropped her hand. "Oh, hey Mia. We were just congratulating your friend here. Turns out, he's a secret superstar."
"Yeah, so I hear," Mia said. "Come on, then… superstar. We’ll be late for English."
The girls said their goodbyes and disappeared back into the crowd. Mia and I walked down the corridor in a newly awkward silence.
"So," she said, finally breaking it, her tone still teasing but with a definite edge. "Secret superstar, huh? Didn't know you had a fan club." I felt a prickle of irritation. I was still buzzing from the game, from the feeling of being competent, of being seen. Her teasing felt like she was trying to pop the balloon.
"Why, what’s the matter? Is it so hard to believe I can be good at something? Maybe I've been practicing." I snapped, the words sharper than I intended. And the hurt on her face was immediate and obvious. Her bright, teasing expression crumpled.
"I... I was just joking, Alex. I’ve always thought you were talented. You know that!"
The unexpected anger vanished as quickly as it had come, replaced by a wave of guilt. I had hurt her — and for what? Because I was feeling defensive about cheating at basketball with a Power I couldn't even tell her I had?
"No, I'm sorry," I said, stopping in the crowded hallway. "I was being a dick. I'm just... I don't know, wound up from the game?"
She looked down at her sneakers, then back up at me, a flicker of her usual warmth returning to her eyes.
"I'm sorry too, Alex. It was a bad joke. I was just... surprised." She nudged my shoulder. "And maybe just a little jealous of your new fan club." We both managed a small laugh, and the tension broke.