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Robert Hernandez

Good chapter nice seeing jon interact with the flint side of the family and how kind his grandmother is I would like to see daenerys and him dragon dream with each other and the dragons with rhaenys if she's alive in this story

Timecka

Rhaenys is she alive? Daenerys, Small! Big Rhaenys Daenerys Dacey Ally or Nym

Rogue

Daenerys and OC Ned's Bastard daughter with Ashara. Not enough love for Daynes.

Frodran

Good chapter it's nice to see the small progressions that Jon is making. As for the pairings, id say small harem with Arya and either a Flint girl or Neds bastard daughter with Ashara. I wouldn't do Daenarys, but that's just me, I'm not a fan of her since in cannon she can't see her own faults or change

Winter

Rhaes alive meaning then Harem = rhaenys,dany,arianne, val and ashara or asharas daughter or allyria honestly a dayne included and one northern woman between alys,wylla,dacey,wynafred or lady bella 😅

Drinor

I don’t really write Jon/Sansa or Jon/Arya in my stories. Daenerys will be with Jon in this story.

Andres

Cool chapter, question will you have Jon travel around the North and Westeros including beyond the wall, and if so can you tell his adventures and not skipped

Drinor

Jon will travel a lot, his character will develop, and he will become the Conqueror come again, but much more terrifying.

Andres

Now that is a change that I will be very happy about, I don’t know how much longer I’ll be able to handle emo Jon

Drinor

He’s four years old. You can’t expect him to be fearless right away; this chapter is his first step in that direction.

Andres

No I’m talking about A prince and other fics where Jon gives any care about bastardy when the hole point of his story is realizing that such things are stupid and made so greedy people with power can hold on to it, letting such nonsense rule his life and sense of self is stupid and futile

Drinor

Oh. I see. My bad. I thought you were talking about this story. Well, in this story, Jon will soon enough not give a fuck if he’s a bastard or not, especially after something that happens, but let’s not do spoilers for now.

Andres

Amen to that brother. Oh and interesting piece of lore that you may want to use before the conquest and even before the Ironborn and Stormlamder domination the Riverlands were ruled by house Justman who’s founder was a bastard from houses Blackwood and Braken who was so beloved that the riverlanders crowned him their king, if lady fish goes with the Damon Blackfyre argument well this piece of history will make for an interesting conversation

Stemadaca

I am getting a Kratos vibe from dear old Great Grandpa

Drinor

I am a big fan of God of War games, and I did take inspiration from Kratos when I thought of Great Grandpa's character.

jeff027

These are the characters I think should be in the harem they are Daenerys, Margaery, Missandei, Asha, Myrcella, Arianne, val, Brienne,

Drinor

From those that you suggested. Myrcella and Brienne will not be in the Harem.

Longclaw16

Ah, Rhaenys. Love it.

TheWateringWizard

Okay that dragon dream at the end was cute. If Rhaenys is in the story, I hope she’s in the Harem! Please add Dany and Rhaenys in it. And Lyarra’s dad is a tough old bastard but that’s exactly what Jon needs! He’ll kick ass once he’s done with him! Btw how old is Lyarra supposed to be ?

Drinor

Rhaenys is in the story. You mean Lyarra, right, not Rhaella. And Lyarra is 48 years old.

Gregory Sullivan

I cant wait for more it always feels so long between chapters

Leorichs

For Jon harem I think it should be rhaenys Daenerys and 1 northern girl( Val) to appease Jon grandmother. Jon dreaming of rhaenys is very nice concept and I hope Jon and Dany dreams of each other as well. One of my favorite Jonery story is Frostfyre by darkfire1220 where Jon and Dany dreams of each other since they were kid.

Drinor

I have read that story. It’s a very good one. I like your suggestions, but let’s wait and see.

maxime bégin

Girls for the harem : Val, Daenerys, Rhaenys, Arianne, Margaery, Missandei

Eva Cole

Great chapter

Tk Oni

I love this story!!!! Barley two chapters in and I'm already hooked. You sir are a dragon through and through, a storytelling dragon.