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AnimeOtaku897

This chapter truly was beautiful. It truly showed how people can immediately go to condemning someone. And once again shows how Naruto always has to work harder than anyone else because of a decision that effected him at birth. Now he's taking the blame for the Ninetails controlling him... And now has been banned from Republic City. I do enjoy what Korra said and reciting what Aang said about never wanting to take an innocent life or condemning them... That there is always a way. It makes my skin crawl though... Honestly I wonder if though if The Earth Queen is as bad as Danzo... Regardless. I Look forward to the next chapter and I believe I have an idea of who it is... But I won't say here in the comments. Great Chapter

Drinor

I’m glad you liked it. Naruto will go through a lot of problems and pain, especially with the new stranger who has arrived. Korra will go through a lot, especially with how people drag her name through the mud.

Joshua Naugle

I like this the idea of this story but man is it slow. It might be another 12 chapters before Naruto leaves the city. Kept up the great writing.

Anthony Rodriguez

I honestly can't tell if Kurama was putting on an act when Unalaq entered his mind. I know that he still hates humanity, but I can't help but wonder if Naruto grew on him just a little...

Daeron Targaryen

Oh, damn is the mysterious stranger Sasuke ?

Drinor

I understand your concern, but I have learned from my mistakes. Naruto will leave the city in the very next chapter.

Drinor

Well, last time I checked, when Naruto thought Hinata died from Pain, Kurama used that opportunity to convince him to remove the seal, which would have killed Naruto. And even during the Fourth Ninja War, Kurama didn’t help Naruto, and started doing so only after Madara showed up.

Drinor

No. In this story, Naruto has been in the Avatar world since he was a baby. There’s no reason for Sasuke to know who Naruto is, let alone go out there and try to find him.

Luna Wolf

Fantastic chapter and ahh obito has arrived it seems

Ben Jack

Are you done with this series now