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Thrivean

The decline in likes is probably due to the training arc, I’m an editor for a couple other writers and there’s always a decline during training arcs the go for several chapters because even though there’s usually important story elements they’re boring from the perspective of a fanfic where I want to see interaction between characters, not a solitary training arc

Drinor

I see. I understand what you mean, and the next Chapter is the start of the Wave Arc.

Thrivean

I figured that’s what you were setting up, very excited to read the next one personally! The red flash is what brought me to read your stuff originally so I really enjoy these narutoverse AUs that you do

Zyeith

Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter.

William Kwok

Ooh that ending is pretty cryptic! Another dimension or a new country! I can’t wait to see where Rangiku and that mysterious woman are!! Plus I love Rangiku so yeah! I am glad she is in the story!

Drinor

In the Naruto map, there’s a whole second continent besides the Elemental Nations but it’s never named or brought up in Cannon. So I decided to develop it, and Rangiku is from that second continent called Yassei.

William Kwok

Oh okay, I guess the show only does focus on the Elemental nations since that is where naruto lives. Thanks for clarifying