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John M Pogue

A dangerous combination to be sure.

Robert Hernandez

That's so said for Bella to die hopefully Lyarra can comfort him great chapter by the way

Drinor

Lyarra will be there for Jon. But this death has left a mark on Jon, which will shape how the story will go.

Robert Brown

As much as I saw this coming, I'm still going to miss the kind hearted Bella...A woman too kind for the world she lived in. May she find peace in death, for she will not be forgotten.

Drinor

Bella was a good soul, but Tyrion, from the books, perfectly summarised what happens to good people in this world. “Daenerys Targaryen is a sweet girl.” Illyrio insisted. “Then the Iron Throne and Westeros will tear her into thousands of sweet little pieces,” Tyrion added.

Winter

I guess in a way his grandfathers quotes and finally the last lesson is that lady bellas death is what shapes jons thinking and heart turns to stone so his enemies will never use it against him again

Daeron Targaryen

Okay, Jon should’ve blood eagled her honestly the death was too clean and quick.

Drinor

This event will determine who Jon will become in the future of this story. His heart won’t exactly be stone; there will still be a place left for love.

Drinor

Jon wasn’t exactly in the best state of mind to think that. Her words made him react so fast that, for a moment, Jon thought someone else had stabbed her.

Longclaw16

Jon being Maegor is not necessarily a bad thing... he just needs to always have 1) a loyal army and 2) an inner circle of family and friends he can trust and who are always loyal to him and love him

Drinor

He is not just Maegor; he will have traits from Aegon, Tywin, and Daeron. Jon will have his loyal army because, unlike Maegor and Tywin, he will learn that fear isn’t everything.

Lost_Monarch

Which Aegon and Daeron, if I may ask?

Drinor

Aegon is the Conqueror, and Daeron is ‘The Young Dragon,’ the one who conquered Dorne.

MAEGHT Maxime

Jon wiil have no mercy against his enemy

Leo

Very nice. Since you obviously know the material...have you thought about writing a God of War story? Kratos, Atreus and Mimir just taking a stroll through Westeros and causing mayhem XD

Drinor

That would be fun, and yes. I’m a big fan of GoW and Dark Souls games.

TheWateringWizard

Damn what a terrible ending… but it’s also a really good and important lesson for Jon to learn. It will serve him well in the future. Lady Bella was a great character, sad to see her go

Drinor

Lady Bella was a good-hearted person in the world of GoT, a world that has no mercy for good people. Jon will become a beast because of this, but not all changes will be good.

Advent12

I was seriously thinking he was going to do that lol but then I was like ‘ooohh maaann’ well there’s always the next person to who takes or tries to take someone of something from him. Perhaps during the Greyjoy rebellion?… pretty please!

Eva Cole

That's good to know cause fear can be used as a good weapon but if you only depend on it then that fear will turn to outright hatred

Mimi13

Welp, there goes any sympathy he would’ve had for wildlings like in canon 🤷🏽‍♀️