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Ryusui23

I love the story and can’t wait for the next chapters, I think definitely more emphasis on things also, when did Nojiko have a devil fruit again? Or is that a devil fruit? But anyway I can’t wait for more chapters and if you ever need ideas you can pm me cause I follow this story a lot,

Drinor

Chapter 62 explains Nojiko’s powers a little. They are not really explained fully, but her arc has yet to come, and that’s when her powers are fully explained. I’m happy to hear you like the Story.

Ryusui23

Yup I always loved this story since it brings a new side for Luffy but also I’ve pmed you about it. Can’t wait till I see what you do with the sunny and if you want ideas I have some. Hope you update soon thank you again for good updates I’m glad you update two at a time

Orion Chung

I like this story keep going

Orion Chung

Luffy Harem : Nami , Noijko , Vivi, Hancock, Robin , Shirahoshi, Rebecca, Yamato, Uta , and Reiju

Orion Chung

Zoro : Tashigi, Hiyori, and maybe Perona

Orion Chung

Sanji : Viola and Charlotte Pudding

Denzel Badchkam

My man Aokiji finally enters 🥶(One of my favs)! I love this story i think it going at a good pace (thankyou for handling Foxy quicky:)). Hope it gets more attention! 💛

Drinor

I like Aokiji, too. Yeah, Luffy wasn’t in the mood to play any of Foxy’s games. Luffy’s fight with Aokiji will be brutal.

ltibbs

I like the story I really enjoy most writings anyways but no keep going with it maybe if you want to make a second or something like that go for it but I'd like to see this story at least continue on in some way it's going to be interesting with how Oda got things going and can't wait to see how you make alterations to it or whatnot but I do like how your Luffy is all three aspects of his personality and he is more of a captain but he's still a goofball so I like the story keep it going

Vic Hops Shaquille

Love the story so far, esp. Luffy's serious attitude growing a bit, since it brings character development. I suggest keep the story going. Hope it brings more attention than it should.

jose torres

I like the story very much to so I'm good, PS need more updates

Shadowfox

I love this story. Personally it's my favorite out of the others lolol. thanks for the two updates. can't wait for the net chapter!

Drinor

I’m happy to hear that. One Piece is still going strong, and I’m still wondering what Imu’s story is.

Drinor

I like writing Luffy’s serious scenes since they balance the goofiness.

roland octavius

I love the story it’s just that the updates are pretty slow so it slips my mind when a new chapter drops

Sankhadeep Dutta

I love this story as well, but maybe you can focus a bit less on the steamy scenes. They take up a huge portion of a chapter, and since the frequency of release of a new chapter is low for this story, I think people would rather see the plot progress more than the heavy focus on the harem.

MAEGHT Maxime

I love this story it is one of my favorites please continue🥺

Shadow Mast3r

I personally love his story it's one of the reasons I even became a patrion but I agree the updates are a little slow and would love more story progress

charger2040

I've been digging this story since the beginning. I like how you handled the Luffy and Usopp drama early on. Keep up the great work

Logan Hardin

The story is very interesting. But whatever you decide to do I'll keep reading

Drinor

Glad you like it. Let’s hope Usopp doesn’t make the same mistake again.

UnlimitedLikes

I love this story and woiuld really like you to continue it.

Daniel Warnecke

I Really like the Story (Reason for Patreon, found it on FF.net). I agree with the "colleague" in regards to the quite frequent lemons, and while I enjoy them as much as any bloke, maybe a little shorter passages. And also, I am some times a little confused with the logic jumps e.g. Nojiko and her powers. I would have liked at least a little POV from her with a kind of explanation how or at least when they came to be.

Drinor

Future chapters will explain Nojiko’s powers and what her deal is exactly. I hear you about the lemon scenes. Either make them less frequent or shorter.

Chason Wright

I like the story, but luffy going full blood thirsty was a little weird

Jeremie

of course it's not very read when you RARELY update it and you have like 20 other stories you're working on