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Robert Hernandez

Great chapter. I liked seeing how much influence Aenar was but I am worried if Cole betrays him and tells the greens everything he knows if he betrays Aenar but knowing Aenar he has a plan when Cole betrays him.

Loyalist

Beautiful chapter and excited for the payback Dorne deserves 🔥

Drinor

Aenar has a plan for all his allies in case they betray him, not just Criston.

Daeron Targaryen

You said the kind lady in the tavern was wearing sneakers 🤣🤣 also Jon doesn’t need to destroy the faith.

Drinor

Well, Jon wants to attack Faith directly because of what happened in his past life. Thanks for telling me. I always reread my chapters before publishing them, but I still fail to notice every mistake in the text.

GrouchyGritic

Another great chapter! The water scene a pirates refernce? You always do intrigue perfectly. Hmm Criston he’s a good dog but while I hate him I have to be honest this freaky stuff could turn anyone against you. Batman aenar for the win.

Longclaw16

Sara's a greenseer I see... or dragon dreamer

Drinor

I’m glad you like it. Aenar has a plan if Criston turns a new leaf and betrays him. Water scene?

GrouchyGritic

Waking him up up with thrown water him being angry until he sees he knows him reminds me of Gibbs in pirates of the carribean

GrouchyGritic

Rereading this poor Sara I wonder reincarnation or a dream of a ancestor if not herself. Book characters dreamed of relatives but mistook it for themselves which tbh frustrated me like try make a dram journal and try and understand it instead of being reckless 🤣