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John M Pogue

Damn, look's like Catalyn already started to fill Sansa's head with nonsense, hopefully almost being kidnapped and Grandman Lyarra can knock some sense into her. Also, I like how observent Jon is with his surroundings. Beware Greyjoy for you have just awoke a sleeping Wolf, now Ned will be more invested in teaching the Ironborn an important lesson, don't mess with a Wolfs Pups.

thunderforth rc

Wow bro I just love the way you’re building Daemons character it is perfection

thunderforth rc

Will Jon be taking part in the greyjoy rebellion

Drinor

Lyarra will never allow Sansa to continue to be like that. Jon is very observant and smart in this story. Ironborns won’t like what Ned will do to them, especially when the Rebellion fully starts.

Drinor

In this story, Daemon will be a beast in more ways than one. I have already imagined Jon’s first meeting with Littlefinger, and it will be pretty entertaining.

Drinor

Jon is still too young to fight grown-ups, but what he will do is come up with clever plans against the Iron Borns.

Abdoulaye Sarr

This was such a great chapter. I like seeing a darker side to Jon. The side that gets business done. Nothing wrong with a kind-hearted innocent and naive character but one that doesn’t take crap but still is kind to those around him is so much more captivating. I hope you update this story more. It’s slowly becoming one of my favorites.

Gabe Sarti

I can see lyarra as the discipliner of the family, especially since Ned didn’t do anything to punish Sansa over her treatment of Jon.

Michael Marquardt

So far this story is great and I hope it continues at the high lv your are usually at

Lost_Monarch

A great chapter, though I wonder if Lyarra will tell the others, specifically Ned and Robb, or even Sansa, why exactly Jon is acting the way he is, especially given Robb had to make a comment about Consequences, and the look Jon had in his eyes, I think we can take a guess at what he was thinking of, though whether or not Lyarra will clarify, have to wait and see for that, especially if Jon doesn't want them knowing about Bella... and what he did to her killer.

John M Pogue

I can see Lyarra being there for Arya if she has self-esteem issues like she did in canon and putting those who bully her in their place

Drinor

I’m happy to hear that. This Jon will slowly become quite menacing, especially after a particular event happens later in the story.

Drinor

I’m glad you like it. This story is planned, so I believe you will like the end results.

Drinor

Lyarra won’t tell anyone; it will be revealed later that Jon told her not to say anything about what happened to Bella, and right now, Jon is not really in the mood to open up about what happened.

Longclaw16

Ned really needs to have a talk with Sansa before she gets any more garbage in her head.

Drinor

Ned will be too busy with the Rebellion. Thankfully, Lyarra will be there to correct a few things.

Eva Cole

Hopefully Sansa is at least given the chance to see why her mother is wrong here. And honestly I don't think Catlyn understands that Ned won't try and overstep and she'll never convince lord Flint when he's already seen Jon and gotten to know him

Drinor

Lyarra will be there to help Sansa. Catelyn is desperately trying to find a way to prevent Jon from becoming a Lord with an army that he can use against her children.

Eva Cole

I mean I kind of get that and maybe for some "bastards" this could be an issue. But if she just got to know him she would know it's not and I don't think the other lord would change his mind just because she wants him to

Nova

Absolutely loved the chapter. This story has became my favorite you’ve written and I love all of your ASOIAF/GOT works. Can’t wait for the next updates.

TheWateringWizard

Damn the Trout started quite quickly to fill Sansa’s head with non-sense… but hopefully the Greyjoy Rebellion isn’t far away and that’ll leave Lyarra in Winterfell to correct all the Seven Star garbage she’s been taught. Badass to see Jon this observant and ready for action

Gabe Sarti

There is also the fact that Lord Flint probably has no respect for her at all, not only because she is an Southern Andal who worships the seven, but because Lyarra probably told him how she treated Jon while in Winterfell.