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Eva Cole

Viscerys is such an idiot! Idk what the rest are going to do trying to fix that the faith has been armed again. If he had taken that guys tongue it would have only made the people more angry.

SkolldreadWolf00

Awesome chapter man can't wait for next chapter!!!!!

John M Pogue

Say what you will about Meagor, but he knew the danger of having an armed faith, Daemon and Aenar will not like this. What is going on with Sara and what is she seeing?

Robert Hernandez

I'm wondering if Sara is seeing snippets of Aenars past or would it be his future. But I see she's some what a warg and a dragon dreamer but she doesn't understand it so it's slowly driving her to madness

Loyalist

Jesus, how can someone be so stupid? Arming the Faith, seriously?!?!? Let’s wait for Alysanne to hear about this. With a single bad decision he is destroying almost 100 of work

Drinor

Viserys is trying to please everyone, and by doing that, he’s pleasing no one.

Eva Cole

I wonder if her parents are gon a figure it out cause giving back the dragon egg is a bad idea cause she may never get the chance again

Drinor

Yeah, Maegor knew that, and Viserys is pissing on his work. Daemon and Aenar won’t like it, but Aenar has a plan to deal with the Faith. Sara’s dreams and her visions will be explained…eventually.

Drinor

Sara’s dreams are mainly about Aenar’s past, but what exactly she is seeing will be revealed later. Sara is both a Warg and a Dragon Dreamer.

Drinor

And Rhaenyra dresses up like a septa and is the one ringing the bell: Shame, Shame, Shame...

GrouchyGritic

Another great chapter! Sorry for ramble. What’s hilarious is viseys is dumb enough to do this unlike his show version book version saw the tension and the teams fighting and tried to fix it in stupid ways like seriously a freaking wet nurse?! So he sees his nephew is loved by people yet doesn’t use it to quell things of course people would go a bit feral about new religion but if their favoured prince is ok with it it would eventually die down but no arm the faith instead what a dumbass. “As if someone was hiding the supplies somewhere for a reason, but Viserys quickly snuffled such thoughts; a single person couldn't hold the supplies for a city as big as King's Landing”😑. You did viserys wandering mind really well it’s like he’s drowning and his thoughts on family is great too. The court scene was very interesting the fact they’re looking down on dirty peasant but never did anything to fix it🙄. That always bothered me in book like aegon 1 made city fast and his sons was a mess so didn’t fix things, old king did fix some things but had family problems, inherited a mess and tbh was a ass so his queen had to force him but viserys? He inherited peace and did fuck all hell I don’t think he even updated works or finish his grandparents works or maintained them. And another great view on his thoughts on his nephew his rage vs his love of family especially as Alysanne explained it to him working as his conscious. And then again he’s showing his people pleasing ways why would the populace give a damn about religion instead of food viserys 🤦🤦. Saera visions are perfect they are messy to her but not too complex that she couldn’t decipher them with time and experience unlike helaena on show who sees perfectly yet just says nothing and no one notices her words or her drawings ? ( I love Helaena though but I think fics do her visions better)

SkolldreadWolf00

I said it once and say again viserys is a good man but a terrible king he trying to make good decisions but going his decisions are what cause the dance in first place and lot of other things too but mostly him!

Frodran

Who’s the Old Man? Is he an OC, I can’t seem to find him in the lore

TheWateringWizard

Sara is most likely seeing Arianne being burned by Aenar’s dragon in the past. From what I gathered Dany’s child with Aenar was killed by Oberyn because he probably wanted Rhaenys’ children to be the only one. It seems like in his vengeance, Aenar killed Arianne, Oberyn and Doran (if he was still alive)

TheWateringWizard

Jesus Christ Viserys… okay, let’s create the Viserys challenge, if he doesn’t fuck up one single big decision, he wins.

Drinor

Viserys biggest problem is his desire to please everyone. In this chapter, he tries to please his grandmother, but in the end, he refuses to send troops due to his fear that it will cause a war and fearing that Rhaenyra will get herself involved. Despite what people might think, Viserys tries to do good. His only real decision out of his selfishness was to make Rhaenyra his heir and force Aenar to marry Alicent. All the other decisions are him trying to please everyone, which is failing miserably. Sara’s dream will be explained…eventually.

Drinor

Viserys makes decisions that will clearly alienate the rest of his family. Also Viserys: Why is everyone angry with me?

Drinor

As far as I know, he doesn’t exist in Canon, but his whole deal will be a little explained.

Lily Garcia

I love your story!!!! One of my faves

Ryusui23

Can’t wait for more, I read this in a couple days a few days ago and loved the way it goes, I love how you wrote this and can’t wait for the next chapters, I can’t wait for also large army battles if you put more those interactions cause I love large armies of medieval wars tho game of thrones never put a lot of armor on their warriors besides some armors and they all don’t look the same besides the lannisters and unsullied and wouldn’t mind more like that if your planning on adding the unsullied being hired or made

Drinor

I’m happy to hear that. There will be massive battles, especially when the war with Dorne starts. It will be a blood bath. I hope you have a Good Day.

Longclaw16

Viserys had the perfect chance to make the Faith accept multiple marriages for Targaryens in exchange for limited security forces and he didn't do it. Weak Sarra is getting visions of Jon's life, not her future. I hope the old man can talk some sense into her

Superboy

I am curious to see where Sarra's visions go. And how can Viserys keep making such stupid decisions? Like I understand he is a spineless worm, but arming the faith? Even if Aenar wasn't planning something that still will come to bite him. And skip Daemon and Aenar from the succesion?? If this was cannon Daemon, or a more darker one like some other fanfics do, maybe i could understand it (and that's a huge maybe) but this Daemon literally went to be with him and he make him live to be with Alicent....

Drinor

Viserys didn’t think that far ahead, something he did pretty often in Canon. Sara is indeed getting visions of the past life, and the old man will help her.

Drinor

Viserys is trying to please everyone. Right now, he feels lonely and is trying to please people in hopes of not feeling lonely anymore.